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And who's body is taken over by THE God of mischief and known as pribably one of the biggest traitors? XD


@Silver Fox Hey now.... That's completely different


Considering how Zephyr willing allowed the god known to be quite the trickster to become one of his forms when They first. That and he'd also willingly decides to takeover as Loki on his own choice. I'm just saying, but Zephyr had a choice to either use Loki or not. Didn't really see Zephyr resist using Loki takeover or being forced to use it by Loki himself.
Shadow Beast and Shutler Wake | Crocus, Ivory Dome
@Natsume Honnaji@Silvan Haven@Lunarlors34@Raijinslayer@Prince of Seraphs@Crimson Raven

As the shadow beast continued its chase on the civilians, a girl appeared in front of its path and cleaved through the beast. The strike caused the beast to halt its movement as it tried to keep its body from sliding apart. Fixing it's body back in place only took about a second, but soon met by a random bulky man made of flesh quickly charged in and smacked the beast into the side of a building. The man would relentlessly claw the beast with its vicious claws, only to be kicked over a building that was across the street. The beast tried to repair its wounds with the shadow and darkness nearby, but screeched as it was halted again by a few light spears that were able to pierce the beast.

The shadow beast was slowly losing strength from the various attacks. But once the dome was in place and darken everything inside it, the shadow beast was able to recover faster than before and pried the spears from its body. Now that the the beast was in its element, it was going to pursue the wizard that fired light spears. But it froze as it sensed a ball of light, closely equivalent to the sun, hurtling towards it. After the blast from the miniature sun, everything inside the dome became dark again and the shadow was no where to be seen. Although the top half of the ivory dome fell, a dome of shadowy darkness quickly replaced the top half that fell just moments ago.

Clapping could be heard from the ceiling of the dome. From above, a person can be seen applauding as he floated from ceiling. His appearance couldn't clearly be seen by the darkness that covered his face, but he began to speak "Who ever created this bone dome, I must thank you, something I don't do very often. You're making what I thought would be a difficult job, easier. Especially not that it has my seal of approval with this new top half I created. If you haven't figured it out already, my shadow beast thrives on darkness. Making and sustaining a beast during the day isn't easy. But in an environment like this, creating one is simply too easy." As Shutler finished his speech, screeches could be heard in numerous buildings as well as wild movement from inside. Within seconds, a several dozen of shadow beasts emerged from the buildings as they made their way on streets and rooftops. Although there many, they weren't as tall or powerful as the first one. Anyone could have tried attacking while him while he was a open target up there, but any attack would of been blocked by a shadowy wall that would extend to out from the interior of his dome. "Because I need to keep you wizards busy for the moment and regrettably have causalities at a low. I'll help by allowing some sunlight to provide some dim lighting to help in your fight."

"And tell Phoenix Wing that I said thanks for letting me free, again!" With that said, Shutler vanished in a mist of darkness. Now that the top half of dome was now made of a shadowy roof of darkness, the shadow beasts galloped their way towards the ivory walls of the dome as they plan their small ascent climbing out from ivory dome and phasing through the now shadowy top half of the dome.

Wes Gusto | Crocus, Ivory and Shadowy Dome


Wes was out on the streets searching for Shutler again with the help of some light bugs scatter across the city, hidden in lamp posts. But the sounds of screeches and rumbling caught his attention. After finding a good vantage point on a building to view the city, Wes could see a ivory and shadowy dome. He lifted his wrist as the dozens of light bugs scattered around the city began to converge around over the dome like very tiny spot lights as they tried to scan for any movements by Shutler. With his gravity magic, Wes flew towards the dome in hopes to find Shutler or some trace of him.
I think...

I think I like Luna more than Mayt...

Now for something more relevant.

Maybe I should make Mayt less of an estranged character.


Why the change of mind between Luna and Mayt?

I thought you were already making Mayt a less stranged character since he showed interest of getting to know more about his fellow guild mates.
@Natsume Honnaji@Silvan Haven@Lunarlors34@Raijinslayer@Prince of Seraphs@Crimson Raven
Just wanted to say that I might have a post up later today. But most likely I will have it posted tomorrow. I've been trying to focus with school assignments and studying with the past few days
@Raijinslayer
He'sb going to use the darkness that's in the dome to create a ring to slice the the top half. This will hopefully help severe it a bit from Nidhog. Then fire a few giant shadow harpoons towards the ceiling and reel them back in with enoughb force to cause the top half to come crashing inside.
@Raijinslayer
I was going to make things in the dome a bit tedious. But if it's okay with you, could I have the top half of the dome break open? The guy that created the shadown beast was alreadyn inside the dome when it was created and since you have him the advantage of his element in the dome, he's goingn to use that to break the dome.
@Silver Fox
I've been a bit curious about Prince. Is Prince's cat like appearance because of the unknown magical curse or is he part of some kind of cat/human race?
I would assume wizards are capable to sense the magic around. Just like how some characters can sense power levels in Dragon Ball Z. But I could imagine that there are a few wizards that are more sensitivity to the magic around them.
As a side note, what do you guys think of the first-person perspective? Does it make the character seem more alive, or does it make the events hard to follow? Neither? Both? Other?

I'm trying to vary my writing style a little, and I have found that the first person is the easiest and most fun to write.


I would also agree with Silver Fox as well.

Your first-person perspective wasn't bad. But usually read everyone's post as if I'm reading a book and a majority of time people post with third-person which makes it sound better. Just like Silver Fox mentioned, it can be a bit disorienting for me with the constant. But I'm okay if you switch back and forth with it, especially of you're comfortable with it. My preference is just third-person since it would be easier to read everyone post like that, but it doesn't take too long for me to adjust to a to first-person.
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Exactly. So Cody would've had time to set up his magic ;)
Or run. That works too.


Or both, run and set up his magic :D
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