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Well, I guess that, with the fifth over, I should get to accepting forms. But first, my form, for the sake of formality!



As for people accepted so far... As of now, @WeepingLiberty and @Tokki have made the cut so far, bringing the remaining slots down to two. I'm still debating with myself over which two to pick, though. Geh. Indecisiveness hurts.
But anyhow, it's fine to go and drop your forms in the Characters tab, you two. I'll place mine in as well.
Well, I'll come to a final verdict tomorrow. With today being the Fourth and all, it's very likely that other people who have had an interest in this RP (well, in the US, at least) might have been unable to complete forms... Myself included.
I'll probably close entry in a day or two otherwise and get to accepting then.
Okay, after a bit of rest, back to looking at everyone's forms!

@SadCubone... Well, there are no changes there, so I stand by my critiques from earlier.
Same goes for @HylianRose, though I suspect this sort of thing will be cleared up soon enough.
@WeepingLiberty: Still looks fine to me, so no worries.
@Crow: Okay, after getting a bit of sleep, I just realized you are essentially bringing a hopping, talking egg into the RP. That sounds... Well, pretty nonsensical, if you ask me. I can't give the go-ahead for that as-is.
On the upside, your other edits seem to be okay... I think. I'll have to reread them a bit. In a bit.
@Tokki: Seems alright to me.

I'll refrain from giving any acceptance verdicts for the moment, seeing as how it's the Fourth of July and people are probably out with their families and such for the time being.
Alright then. Well. Seeing as how I've got a bit of time to spare before I sleep for the night, let's get some of these critiques out of the way real quick, aight?

@SadCubone:
-Personality is lackluster; I expected something more along the lines of a paragraph or two, rather than a vague list of catch-all phrases. Sorry.
-Skills... Okay, As before, more elaboration would be nice.
-History and Other... Well, other than the grammatical errors left and right (which, honestly, stick out like a sore thumb to me), they seem... Well, okay. 's about it.

@WeepingLiberty:
-Well, at first glance, everything seems to be okay. I'll get a deeper look at it when I'm... You know, a bit less tired, but as my half-asleep self looks at it it's fine for now.

@HylianRose:
-Well, yeah... It's kind of difficult to actualize the images to a person of any sort, so I'd like to request a bit more of a detailed description of her new appearance text-wise. Old one's fine as-is, I guess.
-Okay, SO. The characters in this RP are not "reborn", as your sheet leads me to believe you think they are- at least, not in the conventional sense. They are taken directly from Earth, as they are at that one exact moment (who KNOWS what that is!), so... Yeah. Sorry, those bits gonna have to go.
Other than that... Well, sleep first.

@Crow:
-Well, height was nice, but... Bust size was probably unnecessary. Actually, strike that. Completely unnecessary. Sorry if I'm being a bit rough here.
-I'd like an elaboration on the 'Ling' as a whole, if you would. Please. General appearance, lifespan, common characteristics, habitat, etc;.
-Personality, Skills, and History are all a tad... Well, lackluster, for lack of a better term. Could I ask you to flesh them out a bit, please?
-"...hurt as punch as a punch..." Can you... Rephrase this, please? I suspect this to be a common typing error, so no big deal. Would just like some clarification, please.

Aaand that's about all I have left in me for tonight before I get KOed by the ol' Sandman. I'll have a more in-depth look at these tomorrow (aka in approximately 8-10 hrs), so I guess... Take your time to edit?

Last second edit: And yes, hiders please.
'And such' falls under that, so sure, why not? Variety's the spice of life, after all.
Any is fine, though I would request non-generic pictures if you choose to do so. Too many people using the same pictures over and over causes really weird overlaps in my head and causes general confusion when multiple characters over multiple RPs are designated to the same image lol.
Text, in this case, is probably a bit more preferable, but I won't discriminate here.
The applications themselves, of course. First come first serve encourages sloppy writing in favor of getting in, which I would rather not have.
Signups are LIVE. Link for anyone still interested.
Sometimes... Sometimes, things really don't go as you'd expect them to. Successes turn into failures, jokes into cruel derision, and even profits turn into losses. Even death is often sudden, and people, being as they are, never really see it coming. But, as they say, there can always be stranger. But what could be stranger than death, whose existence, though understandable in the scientific context, still cannot be fully grasped?

You wake amidst a sea of red and white grass, which obviously sets off some alarms inside your head. Perhaps you were studying for an exam, reading a book, even browsing the internet or playing a game- whatever it was, you're certain that this was NOT where you had been before. The grogginess of sleep is rapidly replaced by alarm, though, as you turn and look at yourself; you're certainly not the person you had been. Maybe you look the same, maybe you look radically different; whatever the case is, something is DEFINITELY not right here. The clothes you wear only give a similar impression; they seem to be made from leather and wool and the like, quite similar to what those in the Middle Ages wore way back when.

Thrown into such a strange scenario, you come to notice that a few other people seem to be acting much as you are now- with panic, confusion, and denial. But you still remain here, lost in this plain of unfamiliar grass.

From here, your adventure in a foreign land begins, though obviously not of your own volition. Do you try to escape whatever force has dragged you into this mess, or rise to the challenge this world has so carelessly fraught upon you?



So, as you may have ascertained already, this RP will entail the lives of a small group of people (I'm hoping 4-5 at most) from present-day Earth as they are tossed into a fantasy world with absolutely no prior warning whatsoever. Though they may appear different, their memories remain the same as they were back on Earth, albeit with a few extras added in (like the sudden knowledge of a foreign language). The goal? Well, that's for the players to decide... For now, at least.

The world as things stand right now:
-Characters are not necessarily human anymore; elves, dwarves, beastfolk, and the like all exist in this world. Though your character may, by some chance or circumstance, remain a human, their appearance may differ greatly (or not at all) from what it used to be. Of course, that doesn't mean that they can't look the same as they did before.
-Magic does exist in this world; it is categorized under six elemental affinities: fire, water, earth, air, holy, and unholy. The type of magic, in turn, is categorized by its performance: beginner, intermediate, expert, and master. Most, if not all magic, is cast through incantations or magic circles. As of their entry into the world, though, no player character has knowledge that magic even exists here.
-As was common back in the day, interracial prejudice is prominent; those who associate between races are few and far between. At the end of the day, only merchants and mercenaries really have such contact, if at all.
-No character has knowledge about the world or the current location; that remains unknown for the moment to all involved parties. It may or may not remain that way, depending on how the characters act in the future.



Big thing to note, if it wasn't clear before: I intend for this RP to be made up of 4-5 people, AT MOST. Any more, and I'll start having to make cuts here and there before we begin. Once this thing starts, it's not gonna be accepting any more.

So... Yeah, go ahead, signups are open for now. I'll be looking forward to your participation in the future.
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