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Tip: use the preview function to check tags. It'll spit out an error if you've got any misaligned or mistyped tags.

In any case, yeah. It's fine to use this place as a testing ground to learn how to forum RP if you need to, and so long as post quality is consistent I'll have no qualms.
@DocRock: Yeah, that sort of edit works fine.
As for formatting, one of your tags broke. Fifth paragraph.
@DocRock: Mmm...
Okay, not that I want to start needling off the bat, but it's kinda unrealistic to assume that a player-made NPC would accept everything stated about the situation at face value. If we're using Log Horizon as a frame of reference, it'd be like the NPCs being told they're just generated constructs in a computer. That ain't right.

Overlord is kind of different, but as those NPCs were written with the notion that they were created, it's a bit more justified.

Also, formatting errors.

Edit: I guess those formatting errors were on my side or something? Or they're fixed idk.

Editx2: Ah, nope, I'm not crazy. Cool.
@TheFake: I think that the char should be fine. Accepted.

Everyone else: As promised, we've begun!
Deneb

"Huh?"
There were a few moments of complete silence as Jun stood by, unable to quite process what had just happened. The last thing that he remembered was calling it a night with his friends and preparing to shut off his PC for the night to sleep and wait for the maintenance to pass. But now...

"What's up with thi—"

The sound of a woman's voice immediately caused Jun to freeze over before running towards the the nearby lake. His body felt unnatural already, but it was only when he—or, rather, she reached the water did the gears finally begin to turn. Silent laughter began to slip from those lips, but after a few seconds it became full laughter. That lasted for all of five seconds, however, before an angry scream erupted forth.

"Are you serious?! Like, okay, I get what sort of situation I'm in perfectly fine! I've seen enough light novel premises to understand! But why DENEB?! Why not—GAAAAH!"

Jun—now Deneb, the female ninja he had been raising as an alternate character—sank to her knees in despair. The dagger that she had been holding in her hand until now simply slipped out of her grasp, falling onto the sand at the shore without a sound.

"Aaah, this is horrible. It could be worse, but... Come on, you damned cliche premise! At least give me my martial artist instead or something! Even starting from one again is fine! Just... Why Deneb? No, why am I a girl?!" she complained, staring at the reflection of herself in the crystal-clear lake water. The sound of silence reflected back at her was enough to give the ninja a moment to reflect on her situation, however, and after about a minute of trying to take deep breaths and calm herself, Deneb finally took the dagger from where it was and sheathing it.

"Okay, freaking out about the current situation can... Wait. I need to figure out the current situation and how the world is right now," she rationalized internally, finally deciding to stand up and look around. Upon closer inspection, the lake she had been complaining in front of was identical to the one she had logged out at, which meant it was logical to assume that the worlds were identical. The problem now, though was trying to figure out what else carried over. Inventory? Map?

As if on cue, two semi-transparent screens seemed to pop up in front of Deneb, causing her to sigh in exasperation.

"I guess we're going that route, then?" she asked, quietly looking over the latter to see if there were any other 'players' in the area.

None. That was probably a blessing in disguise for the moment; at the very least, it meant that no one else was here to see her outburst. All she could see was a marker showing where she was and the landscape around her. It was possible, though, that the map simply didn't show other players, which would make this whole ordeal markedly more embarrassing than it was if nobody else was around.

She hoped that the former was the case.

"Well, no sense in checking now, I guess..." she mumbled, quietly skimming through the items that she had before focusing in on her target—a 'Return to Town' scroll. The interface was similar enough to how other games portrayed the system, with the added benefit of not needing to use hands to grab whatever it was that was needed. The convenience was appreciated by the ninja, of course, as she unraveled the scroll and activated the magic.

If anything, going to Inarrel would probably answer a few questions that she had.



The feeling of instantly teleporting was disorienting for Deneb, and the ninja almost tripped over herself as she wound up in front of the town's central plaza. Inarrel was a large coastal town that bordered on the edge of 'city', mainly due to its importance as a port town for the nation of Amniya. Of course, that same location, being right in the middle of the continent, meant that it was also a hub for players of all levels.

In other words, if there were any other players, they were bound to gather here. That brought on its own set of problems, though—what kind of players, how they would act, and...

"If there aren't any people wishing to stir up trouble..." she said quietly, finishing her own thoughts as she re-oriented herself and took a seat on a nearby bench. With the sun still bright in the sky, the ninja took this moment as a chance to begin to understand the new systems as best she could. It would be better than staying anxious about how different this body of hers was now, at least...

"I get that I modeled the character after my preferences, but really now? Is this some god's cruel idea of a joke?"
@supertinyking: Denied. Reasons are as follows:
1.
For the sake of the RP, characters should be at least semi-serious in tone. Blatant joke characters (at my discretion) can and will be declined. In addition to that, all characters should be from pre-existing works (or, at the very least, ones with relative popularity in some regard). No original characters or what have you.

It is very difficult to justify this character with the given appearance and lack of backstory OR personality.

2. The current cast is more inclined to take out someone who tends towards the actions you have stated here. Even putting aside the arrival of modern military to put him down (which is likely regardless of whether or not the current PCs come), it is very unlikely that the character will be anything more than a one-note villain in their eyes (and, by extension, the RP as a whole).
Doubly so given the explicit mention of casual mass murder. The characters in this world have capabilities far beyond what existed in the original work you have pulled this from (I'll touch on this issue in a moment), and pitting them together against one character will unilaterally end with a death on the other side with no casualties.

3. The source material does not apply itself well to the setting of the RP, nor does the blank-slate character you have here. Unlike Robin, who has enough personality from existing in works outside of Awakening (and even then, there remain consistent elements to be referenced from that work), this character can be summed up as a one-note villain out for blood and murder. Even if the character and their powers are scaled up, ten against one, even with mooks, is still a slaughterfest for the latter.
It works for the game, but not the RP.

That should summarize my thoughts on the matter for the moment.
It's likely we'll start sometime before the end of this weekend. Gonna make sure things are prepped before this kicks off.
@Saarebas: All clear. There are a few minor spelling mistakes here and there, but it's nothing worth fretting over.
Accepted.
@Saarebas: Alright popped outta bed, gonna look this over.
Hm...
Well, like I said about Mr. Dragon, gonna need a justification why you're playing on JP rather than a global server. Again, our bad, but it's a minor edit to be made.
's about it. Once that's in, I think you're good to go.
I'll update for Akiba group 2 once Fake and CL move.
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