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@Hidden Lilly Alright, you're good. I was almost hoping you would just have her be freakishly tall, but I'm not mad either way.

@Eyeris, in case you needed a tag in to find this.
@mskennedy615 Looking good, you are free to post.
CSes for my own characters will be forthcoming, but if I've commented on your CS, you are free to post. Even if I've asked for a change, all of my requests so far are more like soft suggestions, you're all approved for posting.
@Sergei Romanov@Pyromaniacwolf@Animera@Hidden Lilly

I don't have a single overarching villain or plot planned, but rather a handful of events and conflicts that we can jump from one to the next.
Steam filled Platform 9 ¾ as the scarlet Hogwarts Express was making its final preparations for departure. Overall, the parents on the platform were much less prepared than the old steam engine train, and though there were tears among them, the time had come to let their children go.
Many older students were already aboard the train, and soon it was mainly First Years, whose parents were most reluctant to let them go, scrambling to find compartments.

Dana Albright, a meek child with an owl’s cage in his arms, was being ejected from the third compartment he tried to enter, to the mixed amusement and annoyance of the Sixth Year occupants. His older brother, Jackson, had boarded nearly ten minutes before Dana managed to get away from their doting single father. So far he had had no luck in finding the compartment that Jax had taken up, and he was running out of cars to check. He was just moving on to the next car down the line, when he felt the train lurch under his feet. They were under way.
@Sergei Romanov I feel like he should be Ravenclaw, actually. Other than that, looks good to me.
@Pyromaniacwolf They were misunderstood victims the whole time! Draco only ever wanted to give Dumbledore a thank you gift for being such a good headmaster, but Snape showed up out of the blue and murdered him.

I would actually like to see some less morally dubious Slytherins, though. If anyone wants to take up that challenge.
@Pyromaniacwolf Looks good.

I do feel the need to mention in general that I want in IC disputes to be in good fun between the players. If they fight or compete, try to work out how the competition goes before hand, so that we don't have a lot of "no, but he had a shield" "nuh uh!"

I mention this now just because I can see people trying to pick a fight with Vance, and I just want everyone to keep players and characters separate from each other in their minds.
@Animera Yeah, everything looks good, I'd put her in Ravenclaw.

I do want to mention that I don't require history or astronomy in the rankings, but if you want to leave it as is, feel free. The reason I excluded them is because I didn't want people to put the two "non magical" subjects in the bottom so they could be good at all the magic, but you're not doing that and if you want it that way you can leave it.
@Hidden Lilly Just two minor things with the cs.

1) I do ask for no anime style images, I would prefer you find a different one.

2) She's really tall for an eleven year old. Like, in the 95th percentile. You don't have to change it, but if you keep it, I would just like to see it acknowledged. Maybe she grows to be extremely tall in general.
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