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Audaciouswhizzball1 said
The only thing AB said to Cheerilee was why Sweetie's magic aura was black.
No, what Scootaloo said.
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No, what Scootaloo said.
whizzball1 said
Of course. So, how have you been?
I've been fine. Time Line dislikes me as much as always.
whizzball1 said
I'm not trying to project the image that the knife is changing anything, though. I guess I'll have to change a few responses. What quotes seemed disrespectful?
Her talking to Cheerilee?
whizzball1 said
It wasn't dark magic, actually.Which attitude? What do you mean by the knife played to the magic?
The story makes it seem like the knife changed something, and I thought what Applebloom said was a bluff. And she seemed really disrespectful.
Okay. So there was a typo. "The look on DIamond's face" as opposed to "Diamond's."
And I felt that the second "mind was muddled" was a little redundant. Although, It wasn't really clear how the knife played to the magic, and I can only assume the dark magic was the cause of the attitude.
And I felt that the second "mind was muddled" was a little redundant. Although, It wasn't really clear how the knife played to the magic, and I can only assume the dark magic was the cause of the attitude.
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Ollo
Hiya.
whizzball1 said
Think you could look this over? It's not done, obviously, but still. Clunky language is easier to find in shorter intervals. If anything seems unrealistic, if language is boring, you know, normal editing stuff.EDIT: BTW, the unpublished view password is PerfectlyNormalKnife.
Why that password?
whizzball1 said
Not much of us would be surprised at now, really. *chuckles*
There may be a thing or two.
whizzball1 said
You wouldn't believe how not alive they looked. Although I probably could have tried anyway. Nothing of a magic drain to try and revive. Next time I'll be sure to try, though, if they die.
*Laughs*
There's not much I would be surprised at.
whizzball1 said
They were extremely very not alive.
Hey, it can't hurt.
whizzball1 said
*looks up* Hey, Prism! Not at all. I'm inexplicably a target for mercs, and I'm trying to figure out why. But the latest one to try died, so I don't have any useful information.
Hm. Did you try to resusciate them?
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