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Dragon Ball - To Whom the Planets were Sold

@Chev

Looks a little cramped and uneven so some spacing would be good. Also put the different parts (eg, Age:) in BOLD. Just make it look nice.

Dragon Ball - To Whom the Planets were Sold

@HaltingBlooper

Q1: Power Levels are just not interesting. Still if you were to draw a comparison, our characters would be strong but not super saiyan type strength. Maybe Piccolo/Nail fused strength at best for now.

Q2: If you can make a decent character that I approve it would be possible to control a second character.

Dragon Ball - To Whom the Planets were Sold

@Chev

Oh he was accepted, just put him in the character thread and spruce up his CS just a hair.

Dragon Ball - To Whom the Planets were Sold

@Rune_Alchemist@Kitsune@HaltingBlooper@Sabotage@Weird Tales

So these are the people with characters, well except for one who still has not made their other character yet. Starting with introductory type posts, the teleporter will come in handy fairly early on when planets start coming under attack.

Dragon Ball - To Whom the Planets were Sold

Earth - Defense Force Lab 23

Jeene Quark wiped some sweat off her forehead as she worked on what would no doubt be a revolutionary piece of equipment for quite possibly the galaxy. Tools in hand, she had been working on this contraption, along with some other technicians and mechanized helpers. It looked pretty much like a large cylinder, with a door so a person could step into it. It was rather a dull piece of work, gray metal and all but it was the theory and potential use of the machine that was exciting.

"Energy coils installed, power tests can now commence." Beeped a small, circular looking droid that had just emerged from inside the container.

"Alright, and I am almost done on my end." Jeene replied as she fiddled with some circuitry in an open panel on the outside of the device. With a few more modifications she nodded in satisfaction and closed up the panel.

Jeene looked on with pride at her work. The device was an attempt to artificially simulate what only a few special fighters had managed to learn, Instant Transmission. The idea behind this was that one could lock onto another ki signature they could sense and then instantly find themselves in the vicinity of that source. The move was basically instant teleportation and this device would hopefully allow a person to naturally enter this state and teleport over to the source linked back to the teleporter.

Of course there was a problem in located ki sources at any great distance, the goal was to use instant transmission to bounce to other worlds after all, very few fighters had the ability to sense ki at such a distance but the people working on this project had to find a way around it. Their idea had been to create an identical device in another location, harmonize the energy signatures then create an artificial ki signature for the device to lock onto, allow the user to instant transmission themselves to the other location.

The duplicate device had been built on Namek for its first test, now they just had to turn on theirs and the tests would begin.

"Start it up guys!" Jeene grinned as the machine sprang to life, soon they would know if it was working or not.

Earth - The Proving Grounds

The Proving Grounds was the name of a training location for fighters on Earth. Fighters from across the planet came here to prove their metal, and even some from off-world. Various training equipment was available in order to simulate many kinds of fight conditions. At the moment, Rufus Grindstone was gleefully rubbing in his victory against his battered opponent. "Ha, like some rank-amateur could hope to take me down in a fight, even when I'm handicapped with these gravity weights." Rufus pointed toward the rings on his ankles and wrists, which had been used to give him a handicap of five times normal Earth gravity. It had made him a bit sluggish in comparison but his natural physical ability had made up for it. Rufus gripped the front of his human opponent's uniform and raised him into the air.

"Now considering my handicap I think you need to pay up for stacking the odds against me, its only fair." Rufus grinned, his fangs showing off their sharp edges as he humiliated the man. "I think 10,000 Zeni seems a fair price."

"Like hell I will! I never placed a bet." The man tried to argue and was flung to the ground, quickly finding his face being rubbed into the Proving Ground floor by Rufus's foot.

"It would probably be less expensive than the hospital bill you might receive." The werewolf smiled as he ground his face further into the ground. "Think about it, or I might visit you again later." Rufus whispered into his ear, gave a quickly kick to the man's gut which sent him sprawling and walked away before the referees could interfere. Rufus tossed his weights aside and was glad to have full reign over his movements again. "Tch, they just don't learn do they."

Hey, let's RP!

It's Magic! and the The Sorcerer/Sorceress from the original section catch my interest. As for fandoms, all but SOA (I prefer Log Horizon) and Yu-Gi-Oh could be fun to do.

Dragon Ball - To Whom the Planets were Sold

Just some things: Abera knows Chocolate Beam, any rules about that? (Not exclusive move, not mentioned) Also, thoughts on absorption for the RP? Would it be okay for like, minor NPCs?

@HaltingBlooper

Right so Choco Beam is after all a fairly powerful skill. Now since majin's are a lot weaker then their ancestor I think the best way to limit its effectiveness is to put a time limit on it. If you manage to eat the choco in the time limit well fight is done, but it said choco or candy manages to get away they'll easily throw off the magic and return to their normal selves. So maybe like a few seconds tops. As for absorption, probably the best way around that is for a majin to be able to effectively absorb someone they have to have a much lower power level, which goes to show how far majins have fallen from the buu days who could absorb pretty much anyone.

Dragon Ball - To Whom the Planets were Sold

Alright should be fine now. I'll start the roleplay in the next day or so I think.

Dragon Ball - To Whom the Planets were Sold

NERIS

Appearance

Age: 784 (Biologically).
38. (Closest estimate physically).
Race: ⅓ Namekian, ⅓ Cyborg, ⅓ Demon.
Gender: Male.
Personality: Though usually quite calm focused, Neris tends to be quite a laid back individual with a carefree attitude which may sometimes cause him to appear as arrogant or lazy. Adding onto that, Neris tends to be quite independent and self-confident; doesn't like to work with other people, but may if he believes that it will work in his favor. His thoughts lay somewhere almost sadistic, giving him enjoyment for things like death and destruction, and just doing things as he pleases. Not to be confused with a baby who gets everything that he wants, as Neris has experienced denial on multiple occasions, but this does not stop him from going at things head on. Years of doing so have gave him the skills of accurate decisions with very little timing. Quick thinking is a trait Neris obtains, allowing him to act fast in the heat of a situation. Some have pegged him as bipolar, seeing how from one moment Neris can be so collected, by the next he comes off as blood thirsty. This is part of his manifesting from negative occurrences. It's as if Neris feeds off of this negativity, which is what gives him the enjoyment for certain terrible things.

Bio: As far as heritage goes, that is all unknown to Neris. He did not share the love most would with their family, though his ideals were far off from that anyway. In a world where a rumors of a growing threat was coming, Neris wasn't just about to let that smash him down. Never did he have a trainer, and at very young age he began going against his limits. Neris wanted to be the master in all aspects. Relying on one thing was the way to be killed, so in every way he could, Neris started working up his power level to obtain all that he could, and so it rose quickly. Al though he fought for his own ideals, these could be considered ignorant, which introduced him into thievery, and doing whatever he wanted to. Neris believes in strong will, one that can conquer anything. Through his process of slowly evolving into something more evil than he was, he corrupted himself, and there was no one there to change him back. Anyone by his side during this long span was quickly disregarded when he was finished with them. As of now, Neris mainly travels the universe, still waiting for the ongoing threat to soon burst, doing what he pleases, and seeing what he can.

Aura Color: Neon Orange.
Preferred Fighting Style: Balanced.

Signature Combat Techniques:

Telekinesis: The ability to move objects regardless of the mass with his brain power, and manipulate their movement with his mind.

Kamehameha: A focus of Ki in the palm of the hands to release a pressurized energy that fires a beam with large scale damage capabilities.

Galick Gun: Very similar to the Kamehameha, but with a different form and slightly more powerful. This move takes up more Ki energy.

Destructo Disc: An ability that allows the user to create a razor sharp disk of Ki, traveling at high speeds for immense cutting power, but tends to lack accuracy.

Masenko: Also similar to both Galick Gun and Kamehameha, but of a lower scale, mostly used in defense opportunities. The user fires a large blast of energy out from their palms, typically to block another Ki blast.

Photon Bomber: Charges up an energy sphere in his hand before firing a large, circular blast of Ki at an enemy to inflict large explosive damage.

Wolf Fang Fist: This technique involves a combo attack of both clawing and smacking your opponent in rapid succession, then giving your opponent a final strike, knocking them back to mimic that of a wolf.

Dragonthrow: This technique is when the user grabs someone by their feet, leg, arms, or antenna, and begins to make a spiraling motion above their head with the rest of their body. After momentum is built and speed has reached maximum potential, the victim is let loose and sent flying in any random direction at high speeds for maximum damage.

Dragon Fist: An incredibly fast punch with a devastating force. The user launches himself straight forward to an opponent at high speeds with his arm out straight towards their chest. Impact will likely cause a breakthrough of the mid section, tearing a wound straight through the chest of the target.

Mach Kick: A series of rapid kicks in quick succession rained on top of a target. This multiple kicking process is for a fast, and powerful striking technique.

Perfect Barrier: Aura exiting the body rapidly can form a large sphere that acts as an energy shield around the user. This is capable of fending off large attacks unscatched in the process. Neris may release this energy at once, causing a Ki blast in all directions to knock over his opponent, and/or catch them off guard.

Flight: The ability to defy gravity and obviously fly. Quick, and in any direction Neris pleases.

@Sabotage

I would have preferred you put it in the OOC for my approval before posting in the character thread. Keep that in mind. Race doesn't really make any sense, the demon part at least as demons are different species, plus the fact that Namekians reproduce asexually so there is no chance of cross-breeding. I'd change it to just Namekian/Cyborg. Now for the move list, it really just feels like you took a bunch of moves from the series and slapped them together, not necessarily bad but why on earth would you have Kamehameha and Galick Gun? Also no real need to include flight, if you didn't have that ability, now that would be something of note. Fix the sheet up a bit then I'll probably approve.

Dragon Ball - To Whom the Planets were Sold

I'm going to wait a day or two more then I think I'll start.