KatherinWinter

The Bureau of Supernatural Affairs

@digichiptuneSorry I will update that. Much better. Thank you for making the effort. Secondly talking like that is a good way to get kickout of the bureau, just a warning the director will not take her response well. One suggestion add something like Gin said or Gin explained in white or another color to help end where she is speaking.

Guild of Dishonor

@Blueflamedid you mean to post that 4 times? Can we help in someway?

The Bureau of Supernatural Affairs

@Searat
Griffin nodded when she read the suspect his rights. He should have thought about that as the senior leader but he hadn't so it was a good thing that Astra had. He followed her to the car to make sure that she was able to get the subject into the vehicle without any problems. Not that was a big concern. Astra was clearly a better agent than he was. Hell she was better than most agents. There was very little that she couldn't do. Her interaction with humans and understanding of them needed work but beyond that she was exactly what the bureau needed. "I will see you at headquarters." He told her once she had the suspect in the vehicle. Then he headed to his motorcycle.
@digichiptune
"We don't get many apprentices here. While you are her teacher Gin I am in charge. I do not approve of nickname, codenames, or even abbreviated names. Especially when I have no explanation why they are necessary. If you want to work here I will need to know her name and why she is going by another." The director told them. He crossed his arms over his chest while he studied them. They weren't impressive as far as witches went. He wasn't sure how useful they would be. They were both very young.

The Bureau of Supernatural Affairs

@LightningMaidenI hate to say it but being on a phone isn't an excuse. Half my posts are on my phone. Take the time to look over and reread your post. That being said thank you for taking the time time fix it. It's still alittle confusing. I don't know if English isn't your first language or if, like me, you will in the blanks when you edit, because you know what you mean to say, but I would encourage you to look it over again.

The Bureau of Supernatural Affairs

Sorry things got away from me. I'll try to post tomorrow.

The Bureau of Supernatural Affairs

@digichiptunecasual is much more demandingm. You're posts need to be readable. I'm asking you to capitalize. That isn't that much.

The Bureau of Supernatural Affairs

@digichiptuneI'm sorry. You're right. I misunderstood what you said. I will look in the morning. I'm tired. Thank you for working with me.

The Bureau of Supernatural Affairs

@digichiptuneI'm sorry you're having a bad day. I'm not trying to add to it. Its a little easier to read. But you still haven't capitalized everything. There are at least twelve words that should be capitalized. Role-playing is about growing your character and your writing. I'll help you. Look at it again.

The Bureau of Supernatural Affairs

@digichiptuneok. I only saw one. If you aren't going to try. I'm going to have to ask you to leave. I don't expect perfect grammar but it has to be readable. Capital letters are easy. Your edit is better. But you need to go over it again. Take your time.

The Bureau of Supernatural Affairs

@digichiptuneI know this is free but please use caps. Your post is had to read. I thought Gin and Digi were the same person. Is one the aunt? Which ones which? If you're playing the aunt you need to include a CS for her.