KoL

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@KoL

Much better. There are just a couple of things.

The heating/cooling Bounded Fields are basically a greenhouse and refrigerators, respectively, so it's good to know that they won't be 100% effective but there's nothing wrong with the theory. Given how big of a separation they develop though, it'll require a very decent amount of time to establish them, on the order of abour 8-10 continuous hours, and scaling up moreso depending on size. Also keep in mind with the cooling field that the area immediately outside the field will be hot.

The field that increases Depletion is weird since stuff doesn't really work that way.

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A field that increases the potency of a spell doesn't really work. It could work if it changed the quality of the land so that you're getting more backup from your foundation, but that's Noble Phantasm-tier stuff. You can make it a Mystic Code that temporarily gives her High Speed Aria so she can say her spells faster, I guess.

Lower the number of familiars to 3. You can make more during the RP.

Keep in mind Kayneth is a busy man.

@Unoedipal

I'll add on the cooling field that it disperses the heat underground, then. Furthermore even thinking of doing a field as big as a house would be out of question unless Seyrun wanted to use it as obvious traps, so I'm ok with the time to set them up.

I was thinking of something like a way to grant her High Speed Aria, or stuff like that, but I thought this would have been the weird/broken one. Either way I'll fix it ASAP.

Ok, cutting down the bunch of birds.

Actually, I meant more in the way of him contacting her (in case you ever think it's needed) than the contrary. For the simple reason that, if she goes ask for help, he'll probably just spill some crap on her face and leave her for dead and, if just wants to waste time with small talk, he'll spill crap on her face as well. In other words, unless some situation that might interest him arises, it'll do absolutely nothing.

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@Turboshitter@Lonewolf685

Tamamo and Wes, you two get a room now! Wait, you're in one now, my bad... Anyway, we don't need to see the kind of depravity that's about to happen _{(just kidding I do need to see it, hehe)}.

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@Ryonara

Oh, she's? That's good news, then. But who said it would be out of the Blue, first Absinthe will bring her flowers and take her to the best cybernetic restaurant this side of the Faded City. Just as her name suggests, Absinthe is sweet and inebriating. Before Kitten notices she'll fall for Absinthe's addicting words.

@TheWindel

And now, I feel as if Absinthe is gonna go down the same path as Emilia (trying to generally corrupt everything in her line of sight)... Oh, god!

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@Ryonara

Hey, how come ass pulling isn't erotic? If it's a challenge to Absinthe's skill, then she cold very well try and make Kitten weak on the knees with a few well placed touches, but you know, the Guild doesn't allow for this kind of thing to be done in the open. Unless you're really very good with euphemism, that is. >;)

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@KoL

I want the wiki to go away forever. Promise me you won't use the wiki again.

Transfer of energy covers everything from Edelfelt Conversion to Matou Absorption. You'll need to do more than just say that it's transfer of energy, what do they do with it?

No matter how much I like it, Hiroyama insists that Prisma isn't canon. Even if it was, the wiki lied to you; Flash Air isn't basic, it's just bad. It’s really bad. You can only be remotely good at it if your family hyperspecializes in it, which your family doesn’t. Remove it.

What do Northern European curses focus on? IE physical degradation, mental degradation, etc.

No Rin-level spells, Rin's top 100 in the Association's history with a QuantityxQuality of over a thousand and an odd of 600.

What sort of mental interference, and what's her skill in it?

List the runes and their meanings; she's a rank amateur at them given all her other specializations so she'll only be able to access the most basic meanings.

Explain energy displacement and conversion, because again, that describes everything from Conversion to Absorption.

You're severely underestimating how hard it is to learn all these kinds of magecraft in seventeen years. Five elements plus runes plus curses plus mental interference plus alchemy plus general plus family crest specialties. General magecraft alone takes in the realm of five years to learn, as per Clocktower 2015. There’s no chance she’s had the time to learn all of this.

Know that Counter Magic isn't exactly what you think it is and isn't very good at all. You can still have it though.

Projection and Reinforcement are both weird things to know, let alone to use, especially when you have actual training and a legit family. Depletion’s just high-tier Absorption which it took the Matou who are absolutely brilliant at that stuff several centuries of practicing Energy Drain just to get to a level near, so that’s a no-no.

Why does she have tarot cards for divination when she doesn’t know divination?

List the actual equipment and numbers and not just generalities.

How many familiars?

How does she have a combat familiar when she doesn’t know how to make them? Moreover, how strong is the golem? I’m not allowing anything DA-tier.

@Unoedipal

Damn wiki (I'm kinda sorry, but if I had to cross-search and check all I need to see I would not finish this list even in a year or two. Learning TM's rules almost requires one to get a Major just for that), I guess I'm back to planning it all again. Lemme see what I can answer for now:

- I should have specified it again, I forgot about it, but it's heat (not general energy) that they deal with. They transfer kinetic energy from a particle to another, thereby getting some things hotter and others colder. Think of it as a microwave that can work both ways and you're game.

- Ok, I'm removing Flash Air. Furthermore I'll add the ability to create familiars.

- I'll think about that, but if I have to go by what I know of Norse myths, it would be physical degradation. Plus, the Gandr sustains this way of thought.

- Right, a bit of a tone down, than.

- Probably just memory alteration and hypnotism, the basic thing most magi know.

- I'll get some written later.

- That part is covered above as well and I'll lower the power of her depletion a few notches, and change the description a bit.

- Actually, I was going by the fact that most of it should be stored on her Crest, if this isn't the case I can scratch more things. But, weren't they supposed to be like spell books containing all Magecraft related lore acquired by the family so far? Nevertheless, there's just these persons that can learn lots of stuff very easily, I vem have noted the the only one she's really good at is Bounded Fields, the rest are developing knowledge that she'll master over the course of a few more years/her entire life.

- Ok, I'll either take notice before using it, or remove it altogether as well.

- I thought these were basic things everyone learned but almost never used, I just placed them there as a note to say the truth. I talked about the Depletion thing above.

- I forgot to add that part about Divination, sorry. Maybe I should ditch it as well, but I can't picture a mage that can use this skill it feels kinda weird.

- Ok, I'll note the numbers later.

- The same as above.

- You mean the chains, or the snake? Because the snake is about as strong as a normal one, while the chains are just capable of following simple commands, but don't have any other special characteristics. I'll try to be more specific later.

Anyway, I really want this character to work, 'cause I like the idea of her, but it's way too hard to make her 100% accurate. It's way too much time spent on that task, so if you have any suggestions to fix her magecraft to around the "genius, but not impossibly OP" level that you would admit for this RP, I'm more than willing to take them.

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Kol, you obviously have not seen Tamamo's alternate costumes :3
But that does seem a recipe for a friendly rivalry...as friendly as you can be in a Battle Royale, but considering half of FSN was Shirou and Co. sitting around his table and talking, there could always be room for interaction without instantly murdering each other.

@Lonewolf685

Oh, I did see them, they're not as awesome as Nero's, but then again, who can one-up the Rose of Olympus? But out of all F/E (Including CCC) Servants, Tama-chan is my third favorite, going as follows Gil ('cause he's Gil, of course), Nero and then Tamamo.

Oh god, don't remember me of the hours spent reading about Shirou's cooking and that annoying as hell BGM that played on these scenes.

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Double post, sorry.

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And considering there are Nine Tamamo, one for every tail, that is a lot of lewd activity in the Past, Present, and Future.

@Lonewolf685

That would be one hell of an orgy to have them all at once, I can only imagine that. If only a Command Seal could make this happen it would be awesome to behold.