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I'll update things here later, as soon as I'm off work, or really if I can get some time in a few hours.
I'm working now and have test on college later, but I'll prepare a post as soon as possible. If I can't post on the gap between the two, I'll do so tomorrow as soon as I'm off work.
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Viola and Sagant are gonna have history, I can already tell.


Ho? That they are, I'm sure. Especially when the Guard are supposed to be recurring NPCs and even accessible as guests once in a while.
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Shame on you for not using a certain flavor of caramel.


Actually, I plan to, I just didn't do that yet.
I'll look at CSs later and everything, guys. I just wanted to tell you all that I added some NPCs of the Guard that you may interact with if you want to. They are here: http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/4035172
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You using vocabulary that I don't know of but I sure will try to figure it out... This is going to take a while though


Just read hope the others made their own posts and try to do it like that. Is what I mean. Of you still can't get it, I can try to provide you with an example, once I'm back on my laptop.
@PentagonWhite

I'll read your CS later. But, yeah, you need to cut the "excess fat" to match more or less the same standard as the others.

To put it simply, "Sometimes, less is more".
@KoL Okay, quick question what is a prose format? Also I'll try to fix it but I'm not sure how to do that exactly, just give me some time and I'll fix it to the best of my knowledge


The same writing style that the others used on their CSs. What you did is more akin to a script post, both styles don't mesh well, that's why I want to avoid it.
Hi! I wish I wasn't so late to the party: is there still room for one more?


Yeah, I'll do some counts later, but I figure we still have space for you. Welcome.
PS:

From there on, you guys can choose how the story will proceed, but there's a few obvious issues that you must do, like signing for the quest, if you want any reward, and forming the party. But that's the part were your guys' actions count.

Just to be clear, other things like talking to townspeople, the guards, other adventurers, or "examining the scenery" for the lack of a better term, etc are also possible.
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