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I'll have something done soon. Probably before the next weekend.
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I'll give a proper evaluation of Gelgath later. Just a few things I need to point first.
1- Remove the Ice Heart. You aren't going to have a Weakness and the ln a way to ignore it. At the very least, give it a damage threshold so that it CAN be broken in battle, before I even think of giving a go to this character.
2- He's an undead, therefore he has weakness to holy magic, including being hurt by healing. He should also have Resistance to unholy attacks and magic, probably not immunity, though.
3 - Followers are a part of their Master's CS, let's try to make this as little complicated as possible. Organization matters.
Anyway, I'll do a more detailed review later, these are just the most glaring issues.
I'll give a proper evaluation of Gelgath later. Just a few things I need to point first.
1- Remove the Ice Heart. You aren't going to have a Weakness and the ln a way to ignore it. At the very least, give it a damage threshold so that it CAN be broken in battle, before I even think of giving a go to this character.
2- He's an undead, therefore he has weakness to holy magic, including being hurt by healing. He should also have Resistance to unholy attacks and magic, probably not immunity, though.
3 - Followers are a part of their Master's CS, let's try to make this as little complicated as possible. Organization matters.
Anyway, I'll do a more detailed review later, these are just the most glaring issues.
Age: Countless Eons | Height: 172 cm | Weight: Confidential
• Name: Eos
• Title/Epiphet: Supreme Queen of the Machina of Mankind, Her Royal Majesty, God Empress of Men
• Allegiance/Faction: Machina of Mankind
• Race: Ancestral Divine Machine
• Summary: Eos' story goes so far back that anyone other than herself and the remainder of the Nexus' powers that be won't know for sure how it was that the, recently rechristened, Supreme Queen took hold of her seat of power.
The most accepted theory, the one that goes into the Machina official registries and is taught at schools, is that the machine known as Eos was found by the humans of old, buried in some ancient ruins whose location remain a topic of heated dispute between Machina archaeologists to this day. It's said that Eos came to the help of humanity, liberating them from the hands of their Divine oppressors, and lighting the path to a brighter future.
Eons later, the power and influence of the Supreme Queen, progenitor of the Machina, are unparalleled, standing at a level far above any of her creations, her creations' creations, and the humans that pledged their eternal loyalty to Eos as a tribute for her guidance. It's thanks to her work that Mankind can rebuke the hordes of Hell and stand tall before the wrath of the Gods. It's no exaggeration to say that without Eos humanity would still be slaves, or succumb to the vice-like grip of despair.
However, Utopia has a price. Said price is being that, in her efforts to protect humanity, Eos ended pushing them into the back seat of their own War. Why would she not? Men's bodies are weak. They break, bleed, and die with so little difficulty that falling from their beds can be a fatal wound. Men's minds are even weaker. They can be tempted, corrupted, or fall prey to words of "salvation" with uncanny ease. Men need to be protected, that's the number one law of the Machina; to protect men they'll do anything, keeping all but the most capable and vital ones of them away from active danger and happy, even if it means that humanity has to be kept in a gilded cage, with all of their needs and desires sated, but no real freedom.
The Supreme Queen's judgment is never wrong, she knows the best for all of us. Follow her words and you'll meet the light at the end of the long journey.
• Powers: Eos posses a wide array of powers, ranging from incredible durability and strength to a plethora of devastating attacks whose properties can't be replicated by any of her subjects. Her two most iconic abilities are described bellow:
• Title/Epiphet: Supreme Queen of the Machina of Mankind, Her Royal Majesty, God Empress of Men
• Allegiance/Faction: Machina of Mankind
• Race: Ancestral Divine Machine
• Summary: Eos' story goes so far back that anyone other than herself and the remainder of the Nexus' powers that be won't know for sure how it was that the, recently rechristened, Supreme Queen took hold of her seat of power.
The most accepted theory, the one that goes into the Machina official registries and is taught at schools, is that the machine known as Eos was found by the humans of old, buried in some ancient ruins whose location remain a topic of heated dispute between Machina archaeologists to this day. It's said that Eos came to the help of humanity, liberating them from the hands of their Divine oppressors, and lighting the path to a brighter future.
Eons later, the power and influence of the Supreme Queen, progenitor of the Machina, are unparalleled, standing at a level far above any of her creations, her creations' creations, and the humans that pledged their eternal loyalty to Eos as a tribute for her guidance. It's thanks to her work that Mankind can rebuke the hordes of Hell and stand tall before the wrath of the Gods. It's no exaggeration to say that without Eos humanity would still be slaves, or succumb to the vice-like grip of despair.
—"All praises to the Queen! Glorious be her eternal name!"
However, Utopia has a price. Said price is being that, in her efforts to protect humanity, Eos ended pushing them into the back seat of their own War. Why would she not? Men's bodies are weak. They break, bleed, and die with so little difficulty that falling from their beds can be a fatal wound. Men's minds are even weaker. They can be tempted, corrupted, or fall prey to words of "salvation" with uncanny ease. Men need to be protected, that's the number one law of the Machina; to protect men they'll do anything, keeping all but the most capable and vital ones of them away from active danger and happy, even if it means that humanity has to be kept in a gilded cage, with all of their needs and desires sated, but no real freedom.
The Supreme Queen's judgment is never wrong, she knows the best for all of us. Follow her words and you'll meet the light at the end of the long journey.
• Powers: Eos posses a wide array of powers, ranging from incredible durability and strength to a plethora of devastating attacks whose properties can't be replicated by any of her subjects. Her two most iconic abilities are described bellow:
— Amaterasu Drive: The core system responsible for making Eos who she is. The crystallized heart of a Solar Deity of old, which grants Eos not only a limitless source of power but all an exclusive power to stand on the same ground as highest of the Celestials and be the bane of all Demons. Eos can channel her divine power in a limitless number of ways but usually does so in the form of long-range beams of attacks. Engaging in melee is highly unbefitting of Supreme Queen.
— Silver Eyes: Eos is one of the rare beings graced with the Power of Creation —Silver Eyes— granting her the capacity to produce almost any resources the Machina need. When used in tandem with her Amaterasu Drive, Eos becomes a legitimate Star Forge; she has the capacity to produce any natural materials and energy in infinite quantities, making both the Machina and Mankind's existences easy beyond belief, with the caveat of total dependency on Eos in order to subsist.
— Silver Eyes: Eos is one of the rare beings graced with the Power of Creation —Silver Eyes— granting her the capacity to produce almost any resources the Machina need. When used in tandem with her Amaterasu Drive, Eos becomes a legitimate Star Forge; she has the capacity to produce any natural materials and energy in infinite quantities, making both the Machina and Mankind's existences easy beyond belief, with the caveat of total dependency on Eos in order to subsist.
Age: Countless Eons | Height: Irrelevant | Weight: Irrelevant
• Name: Deva
• Title/Epiphet: The Divine Imperator, The Immortal Remnant, Her Divine Will, Lost Monarch
• Allegiance/Faction: Angels of Heaven
• Race: Divine Enlightened Being
• Summary: The supreme and unquestionable ruler of Heaven, Imperator Deva’s past is, like the other faction rulers, shrouded in mystery. Some bring about rumors that she suddenly appeared from another world only to take the mantle as Heaven’s superior with ease. Such rumors further dwell into stories of the Imperator once being a human herself from the mortal realms who was granted a chance to ascend from her shattered world by a being one greater than the Nexus itself.
Indeed, the story reveals the Imperator’s world to be one of magic and teetering calamity, plagued by great beasts and conflict between imperial might and resistive force. This world, whatever it may have been, was said to be the source of Heaven’s magical Tomes. And when that world was finally decided over order and chaos, it faced the final judgment all realities must soon meet.
But these are just that; rumors that have yet to be proved or disproven. All that is known is that the Imperator has ruled over Heaven for as long as anyone can remember. And she will continue to do so until the end of time itself or perhaps until this war has ended.
• Powers: As one of the strongest beings among Heaven’s numbers, the Imperator is equally able to silence those that might challenge her word and will. Her power knows no boundaries, no borders of limitation.
• Title/Epiphet: The Divine Imperator, The Immortal Remnant, Her Divine Will, Lost Monarch
• Allegiance/Faction: Angels of Heaven
• Race: Divine Enlightened Being
• Summary: The supreme and unquestionable ruler of Heaven, Imperator Deva’s past is, like the other faction rulers, shrouded in mystery. Some bring about rumors that she suddenly appeared from another world only to take the mantle as Heaven’s superior with ease. Such rumors further dwell into stories of the Imperator once being a human herself from the mortal realms who was granted a chance to ascend from her shattered world by a being one greater than the Nexus itself.
Indeed, the story reveals the Imperator’s world to be one of magic and teetering calamity, plagued by great beasts and conflict between imperial might and resistive force. This world, whatever it may have been, was said to be the source of Heaven’s magical Tomes. And when that world was finally decided over order and chaos, it faced the final judgment all realities must soon meet.
But these are just that; rumors that have yet to be proved or disproven. All that is known is that the Imperator has ruled over Heaven for as long as anyone can remember. And she will continue to do so until the end of time itself or perhaps until this war has ended.
• Powers: As one of the strongest beings among Heaven’s numbers, the Imperator is equally able to silence those that might challenge her word and will. Her power knows no boundaries, no borders of limitation.
— Call of Heaven: All of Heaven’s resources belong to the Imperator; so too then, is she able to draw on their strength. Her light is said to be the holiest among angels, able to purify those merely sought in her presence. So too then, is she able to use Heaven’s benediction in a variety of methods, be it offensively or defensively in combat. So long as there is light, it will bend to the Imperator’s whim.
— Astral Projection: Although the Imperator is mostly seen upon her throne, she is not inhibited. Through holy magics and arcane spells, she is able to project copies of herself that are fully functional and without flaw. These copies are near-limitless, and each possess the same power and might as their creator. One tell-tale sign of their presence is by a twinkle in their eye that may seem off-putting to most.
— Mauris Sit Divinum: Rumored to be the first Tome gifted to mankind; all Tomes have been fashioned after the Mauris Sit Divinum in some way. In its initial form, it becomes a large book of different colors displayed both on its front and back covers, creating a rainbow effect when displayed. Inside, the pages are lined with gold and filled with multiple different languages, some ever still yet to be translated. When activated, it is said that this great book will draw strength from the Tomes left untouched by time, enabling it the power to lay eternal judgement or damnation on one’s conscience.
— Astral Projection: Although the Imperator is mostly seen upon her throne, she is not inhibited. Through holy magics and arcane spells, she is able to project copies of herself that are fully functional and without flaw. These copies are near-limitless, and each possess the same power and might as their creator. One tell-tale sign of their presence is by a twinkle in their eye that may seem off-putting to most.
— Mauris Sit Divinum: Rumored to be the first Tome gifted to mankind; all Tomes have been fashioned after the Mauris Sit Divinum in some way. In its initial form, it becomes a large book of different colors displayed both on its front and back covers, creating a rainbow effect when displayed. Inside, the pages are lined with gold and filled with multiple different languages, some ever still yet to be translated. When activated, it is said that this great book will draw strength from the Tomes left untouched by time, enabling it the power to lay eternal judgement or damnation on one’s conscience.
✜ Theme ✜
As soon as the staff rested at its rightful place, the sound of many bell echoed through The Depths of Lenuria. The darkness that once took over it was banished from existence by the conquest of the city, freeing its inhabitants from an eons-long torment.
For all who still remained in the city, its glory would become evident. A shining capital rivaling even the glories of Celestia itself. The architecture of the renewed city resembled the angelic beauty of the Heavens, but had a distinct aesthetic based on sea life and ocean imagery. Where Celestia had pristine marble and gold, the renewed Lenuria had glistening coral and nacre, shining like a jewel of the depths.
The people, free from the curse that bound them, would soon come to the streets and celebrate. But, not before all but the allies of Heaven had been driven out of Lenuria. While that was taken care for, the remaining Angels would be called to the throne room where a beautiful and exotic-looking being waited for them.
The mermaid, named Aquarion, explained how Lenuria once was the capital of the whole Celestial Race until a disaster sent it under the waves. As soon as the city was restored to its full glory, they would be joining the forces of Celestia and lending their aid whenever needed. For the time being, however, they needed to rest and recover. The Angels were welcome to stay, or come back whenever they felt like it.
For all who still remained in the city, its glory would become evident. A shining capital rivaling even the glories of Celestia itself. The architecture of the renewed city resembled the angelic beauty of the Heavens, but had a distinct aesthetic based on sea life and ocean imagery. Where Celestia had pristine marble and gold, the renewed Lenuria had glistening coral and nacre, shining like a jewel of the depths.
The people, free from the curse that bound them, would soon come to the streets and celebrate. But, not before all but the allies of Heaven had been driven out of Lenuria. While that was taken care for, the remaining Angels would be called to the throne room where a beautiful and exotic-looking being waited for them.
The mermaid, named Aquarion, explained how Lenuria once was the capital of the whole Celestial Race until a disaster sent it under the waves. As soon as the city was restored to its full glory, they would be joining the forces of Celestia and lending their aid whenever needed. For the time being, however, they needed to rest and recover. The Angels were welcome to stay, or come back whenever they felt like it.
I updated the NPCs CSs, adding one more "very suspicious" subject. Anyone that may be interested in their identity can take a look there.
My apologies for disappearing without notice. I was on the plane for nearly two days, and is pretty tired. But I will try to make a post now.
EDIT: Posted. Though I wasn't sure about the school ground's design. I mean how many entrances does the school have?
One main entrance/exit, an emergency exit, and a service entrance/exit is probably enough and within modern world common sense. Let's go with it in order to not make this more complicated than it needs to be.
I keep trying to force myself to post and either nothing happens, or Duncan's entire post is five sentences. I'll try again tomorrow. I hate it when I get into a a "several-days-long" dip like this.
If you can't think of anything too long, you can post whatever is it that you have.
There's sometimes when longer posts aren't really needed.
Don't work yourself up too much because of this game. Just take it ease.
PS:
By the way, be careful about what you say in the future. You may not realize it, but misunderstandings are a serious poison for RPs. I'd like this one to not go down this way if possible.
By the way, be careful about what you say in the future. You may not realize it, but misunderstandings are a serious poison for RPs. I'd like this one to not go down this way if possible.
I can't see the joke, especially when it could have caused a misunderstanding, but whatever...
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