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"Tsc! And they still wonder why we don't like them," Chie muttered under her breath. She turned her back to the invaders as they left the club room. She didn't spare any more thoughts for them, not when there were more important issues to think about at the moment. Issues like how they were going to explain the broken and burned desk to the school's faculty.

"We will have to find another place to have our party," Chie said with a disappointed voice, just as Kanbaru finished her sentence. "The faculty will never allow us to use this room after this. Anyway, we can keep planning as we were and decide about that later," she added while looking at the damaged furniture. A moment later, Chie was back at her seat, making notes of the ideas for the Christmas party.


A little way away from the Detection Club's room, the two magical girls of light would find someone waiting for them in the hallway.

"Normally, I would do a self-introduction before talking with someone. However, before I do so, can I ask you to stop using magic within the school premises," The girl said to them, with her gaze fixed straight at Soma's half-transformed form, leaking magical power for the whole world to see. "Becoming part of Miso High's Seven Mysteries is the least of your worries if someone else comes across you right now," she added in a disarming, almost jesting, tone which nevertheless carried the weight of the fact that all magical girls should know better than let the general public know about the existence of magic, even by accident.

"Now that this is out of the way. Let's do things rights," the girl said, hoping that her previous words had the effect she wished before continuing her self-introduction, "I'm Tsukuyomi Luna. You can call me Luna if you wish. While it's an honor meeting you, can I ask what people who aren't actual students of this school are doing here doing the busiest time of the day? You should know better than to cause trouble to other people for your own personal reasons—even if they are enemies of Justice," Luna added, finishing her sentence with a serious, with amicable voice.

I am puzzled by that response. I saw nowhere that magical girls need to be solo.


They don't, but when one of light side girls has an edgy streak a mile long and the the other is more condescending than anyone has any right to be, I don't see how they can work together at all.

The most the two of them achieved is creating trouble that didn't have a reason to exist.
In other words, Mari is Judge Frollo. At one point, she might have been a legitimately good person but now, she became self-righteous and condescending to the point of turning down the people she's supposed to be allies with.
Elizabeth Bathory

"I... I guess that you are right. Such a small venue isn't a place where an idol like me can shine," Elizabeth said in a sulky voice as she acquiesced Caster's remark. The dragon girl slumped her shoulders a bit as she put down her microphone after realizing that this wasn't the proper time for a live performance.

"We should let Saber deal with this one. But, while she does that, why don't we go around and get some spices? We can't have food without spices," Elizabeth said as she clutched Caster tighter when a cold breeze blew past them. Just for a moment, the pink-haired Lancer wondered if she should have brought a sweater with her.
Just to be clear, @Noxx, and @AtomicNut, you guys are the ones who should move next. Just about everyone on the scene reactted to your characters, there's not much that can be said until they say/do something.

"Didn't I just ask you to not break anything? You are just going to cause more hardships for the President. What if we don't get the authorization to have our party here because of this?" Chie said to Ami as she quietly placed her book back in her bag after the table had been broken. The redheaded girl took the moment to adjust her didn't take any more overt actions yet—hoping that Ami would listen to the voice of reason. If she pushed the issue further ahead, things would change.

As soon as she finished her plea, Chie stood up and walked to the barrier that one of the intruders had set up. " Considering the way you are dressed, I can clearly see that you aren't a student at this school. Please, put this down and leave immediately. If you don't comply, I'll call the student council to escort you out, and hand you to the responsible authorities," she said in a collected way, fixing her glasses before staring right in eyes of the one responsible for this magic.

"And you," Chie said, turning her gaze towards Mari, "What in the world did you think that would happen if you came here and belittled us with such condescending words? Do you have no emotional intelligence at all? If you do, please, leave as well. You have done enough damage for a day, " she added in a serious tone, loaded more with contempt than hatred.

Hopefully, the intruders would listen, before their after-school time was tinted crimson.

@Noxx

Like I said just think it on a more understandable way, like the impact of a bullet or vehicle, it's much easier to picture what you have in mind.
hm. Just noticed I never fixed an issue KOL had with Soma and I failed to mention how much force is needed to break her shields, everyone fine if I describe that in Newton unit (N)


Just compare it with something else. Preferably in energy units since force is quite abstract to grasp for most people who aren't into science.

Like comparing it to the impact of a bullet, car at certain speed, etc. Kinetic energy is much better to understand for everyone's sake.
Takamachi Nanoha

Nanoha sighed deeply after the meeting was over, taking a moment to think about how could everything get this complicated so fast. She could only hope that someone on the other group could make sense of the report she sent them as well as provide any valuable information they gathered.

"I would be glad for anything, " Nanoha replied to Private Minami's offer of showing them a place to eat. The surprised look in the auburn-haired girl's eyes made it evident that she thought that didn't look like the type of person that cooked her own meals. After an offer such as this one, Nanoha immediately thought that Minami was talking about either a lunch at a JSDF base or a street restaurant. Indeed, Nanoha could totally see Private Minami as being a regular at a ramen restaurant.

Her thoughts were cut short when the Private spoke again, this time asking if any of them had seen another girl named Tohka.

"Tohka?" Nanoha replied, thinking out loud, in an inquisitive voice. "Ah, you mean that purple-haired girl, right? The only time I saw her was yesterday before we went back to our rooms. Isn't she still sleeping?"
Yatogami Tohka

"Ikebukuro?" Tohka replied to the orange Mecha Girl; her voice making it clear that Tohka didn't know what she was talking about.

The look of confusion didn't leave her face, despite the fact the answer but it seemed like the Mecha Girl wasn't going to talk more until they stopped that giant dog.

"So, we just have to make that dog stop running around, right?" Tohka said before she sped up, crossing the dog's path just as it jumped between roofs and striking it with a heavy overhead slash aimed at the sword it held in its jaws, intent on either knocking it towards the Mecha Girl or at least slow it a bit.

@Lacroix

She's alright now, then.
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