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There was nothing particularly wrong with Stargate Universe as a premise. The idea of an ancient ship lost light years away from Earth with a human crew was actually fairly valid. The reason the series died was because essentially all of the characters were either unlikable, unrelatable or just downright stupid. There was no emotional connection for the audience cause the writers more or less failed to make us like anyone on Destiny enough to give a crap about whether they lived or died.

The other Stargate series had a good balance between, action, humor, and a human element. Universe was pretty much all action all the time. Universe is essentially what SG-1 would have become had Michael Shanks not quite and forced the writers to take a hard look at what they were doing to the series.
@Silvan Haven

Come on, Universe wasn't that bad. I'd still watch that over Trek any day. Would have liked Atlantis movie though.


Okay now Trek is not that bad. Of course given the scope of the series it had its ups and downs but overall Star Trek is a good franchise. Voyager and DS9 were the most stable and Enterprise and the reboot movies suck but otherwise not bad.
Proud owner of both series and the original movie.

They never made a third one.

Ever.


There was three movies and three series. What are you on about?
What? I am the guy with Daniel Jackson as my avatar.


For some reason I never made that connection. Good to know me and Forsythe aren't the only Stargate enthusiasts in the RP.
Hey @Forsythe Random question: What happens in Stargate if you take an active gate away from its Point of Origin? Would the connection get cut or would it simply stay active till the 38 minute limit expired?
@Prince of Seraphs - Want to add your piece? Just think of hyperactive goofball. That should explain Shiro mostly.


My piece? What are we talking about?
@Prince of Seraphs

I'm studying film in University right now before I do a two year program at a college to get my BA and College degree, what do you wanna know?


Congratulations.

It's not the filmographic aspect that I'm having trouble with, at least not yet. We don't have a fully developed script yet so we're not really looking at the part of the project. What I really need help with right now is the story I'm writing. I essentially have a half baked concept and some characters that mostly just flow from archetypes. I need help developing it.
So for the drama final at my school we're supposed to write, direct and film a short movie to be shown on finals day. I'm in the middle of writing the script and while I have the concept down I could use some help working on the specifics. Here's the breakdown.

Parker Family:
Mother, Wendy
Father, Thomas
Two daughters, older Elizabeth (Blair) and younger Emily (Emma)
Brother, Jackson

When Jackson was eleven, Elizabeth was fourteen and Emily was just turned thirteen Jackson was hit by a car and died almost instantly. The story takes place three years later, Blair is now a senior, and Emma is two grades below. Since Jackson's death the Parker family has fragmented somewhat. Wendy became an alcoholic though still supporting the children financially she is prone to drinking too much in the evenings usually resulting in her passing out. Thomas unable to deal with Wendy's behavior since Jackson died left the family. Blair looks after Emma as best she can as the younger sister has started a downward spiral since entering high school.

Blair is essentially the glue that holds the family together though she is generally unappreciated and feels insignificant. Part way through the first act Blair dies under undefined circumstances. The next day she wakes up back in her room with no memory of the day leading up to her death. She soon realizes that she is a ghost unable to affect anything that is going on around her. She goes to her usual haunts, home, school, friends and sees how her death has effected everyone in her life. While at school still trying to make sense of everything she realizes that out of everyone there is a boy around her age who appears to be able to see her. It is revealed that this boy is in fact Jackson, her dead brother. In the years since his death he has become a "Reaper" a soul tasked with guiding other spirits to the other side. He's in charge of easing his sister's transition into death but first she has to be willing to move on. Blair wants to find out exactly what it was that happened to her in that final day before she allows herself to move on.

That's about all I got so far. I had a vague idea that Blair may have died protecting Emma and Emma is too scared to come forward with what she knows about Blair's death. I was also thinking that Blair is only technically dead, she has experienced brain death but her body is still alive on life support. When she finds this out it leads her to distrust Jackson because he didn't tell her right away and she thinks it means that she can return to her life. Of course she is dead and at some point must come to grips with that.

Just to make this clear for anyone that does have some ideas this is not a Supernatural thriller. Blair might be a spirit but this isn't about her discovering that she was murdered by zombies or redcaps or some such. This is more akin to an "It's a Wonderful Life" story where she's seeing her life through a new perspective and appreciating what she was doing for her family more now that she can no longer help them. Also perhaps a bit of a mystery story as she struggles to figure out what happened to her.

I know this is rather wordy but this is essentially all the info I have thought up for the project at the moment. I have a sort of generally idea of the story but I don't have a clearly defined product or ideas for specific scenes or anything of that nature. In any case any help you can provide would be greatly appreciated.
@Kaithas Are you still going to send me a further critique of my contest entree?
Nah, I can't grow tomatoes too well.


Now I'm real confused.
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