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6 mos ago
Current I published a book! jlbrightman.itch.io/ko-luhn…
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7 yrs ago
Discord crashed lads. Can't get back in.
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8 yrs ago
I've opened art commissions up, anyone who wants relatively cheap art PM me here or on Discord: LeeRoy#8459
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11 yrs ago
[quote=@Rilla] DID YOU JUST TRY AND CLOTHESLINE ME, YOU LITTLE SHIT [/quote]
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"If you kill a man, you scorn his wife. If you kill his wife, you scorn her child. If you kill her child, you scorn his village. If you kill his village, you scorn the kingdom. If you kill the kingdom you scorn an empire. If you kill an empire, then who is left?"

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@MelonHead
Multiverses have always been hard to run, though unusually difficult for me.
@ArynMae20
OI OI, I see you there a-peepin' on this here roleplay.

If you're interested don't play the silent game, this roleplay needs a kick in the ribs, baby. It's a horse with a good set a-legs but can't get up off the ground, see.

Edit: See what I mean? Look at this. Posted an hour ago and still dead silence. Three other people poked their heads in. Am I ugly? Am I scary?

Talk to me plz.

I cri erry tim.
@Rilla
o:

You're spitting distance from me, I'm in Virginia.

Also I'm correcting you, I'm a bigger cuntwaffle than your baby :V
@Alphakoka
Stop :V
@Alphakoka
Wait, that's what's taking you so long? That's funny.

You don't need to do that dude.

@Negatomsk
Alright, so. I'm gonna accept it. But make sure your abilities have obvious tells, this character has a strong kit that isn't as broken as it could be. The one thing that I can really say will help balance this, is obvious tells of what's happening with your character's abilities.

As long as you're okay with that, the character's okay with me.

Though no Hard Drive 2.0. :v
@Rilla
I would correct you and say that I was the biggest cuntwaffle this side of the Mississippi. But I don't know which side of Mississippi you're on.
@MelonHead
Words of wisdom from a panda, that's a new one for me.
@Alphakoka
One at a time, since he can realistically only wear one suit.

This is a hole that he would shove folks into with no real limit on how many can fit. Since it's hell, I can safely say infinite.
@Negatomsk
I put off reviewing this character sheet because I didn't want to be "that guy" y'know. I didn't want to come back and just be the negative nancy, but I really can't put it off anymore.

Misc Info: Great.

Appearance: Love it.

Personality: Fantastic.

Powers:
. . .

Man I'm just trying to work with you and not be an asshole, but you're making this real hard on me. I really am trying to work with you, but somehow you've posted a character that defies even more of the basic rules of the roleplay.

Okay, so I'm gonna lay this down politely and logically so I don't upset anyone.

The biggest and most problematic feature of this character sheet, from the first power and the first power alone.

Gateway.
This roleplay is segregated from the rest of the multiverse, I wanted to prevent any galaxy spanning empires from appearing and being a strange threat. I wanted to keep this roleplay small, compact, and having only the characters and their connected characters involved in this. It's to keep the scale of the roleplay simple so people aren't feeling disconnected from the other characters. Every character in this roleplay is contained within the confines of this plane, and a power that defies that is problematic.

If this weren't a gateway, and were literally just a digitized portion of hell, I would be okay with this. But as you stated in the sheet. It outright states that it bridges this plane of existence to the Hell. Which is not withstanding in this setting.

If I weren't trying to maintain a set of rules for everyone including myself, I wouldn't bring it up at all. But the rules apply to everyone uniformly, so giving even one allowance of severance from the rules would make the rules meaningless in the first place.

If you make it a duplicate portion of hell, I can accept it. But it CANNOT be a portal to hell.


That's just the first power, there's several more of these to go through. I suppose to clear everything up, I'll have to go through and review every one of these so they don't come into question later.

Hellectricity.

First of all, your naming conventions are solid gold. A+ work, gotta give you that.

But there's only one small problem with Hellectricity.

Repairing himself?

To what degree?

I need upper limits. Becuase if he can just auto repair himself at the cost of "Being Tired." I can't accept that.


Hellfire.

Like fire.

Hellfire.

I gotta be honest, I would be a hypocrite if I didn't let a character who used flame be immune to flame. Especially since it's not constant. So I have no major complaints about this, there's no range but we're all pretty competent people, we understand how it works.


Sin.
I cannot in any way accept this. I hate being blunt about stuff like this, but with literally no description of what Hell Magic is, I can't in good conscience accept this.


Corruption.
I've got an android who would like to say hello. I can't say no to this, especially since it's a non-combative power with very little utility in this setting.


Continuance.
"Fused with a Nigh-Indestructable gate."

"Is likewise incredibly durable."

You're saying that he's Nigh-Indestructable. That's beyond high tier in scope, Nigh-indestructable and indestructable are reserved for objects, not people. Otherwise every high tier character would need an extinction level asteroid dropping on their head to kill them.

I don't know if that's what you mean, but Nigh-Indestructable doesn't have much wiggle room in the term of definition.


Conversion.
How does it enhance the abilities of the weapon? Just makes them better? Adds effects to them? I need specifics here.


Consolidation.
Consuming your enemies, gaining their powers and knowledge? I cannot accept this in good faith.


Creation.
Standard hammerspace, I can accept this.


Conveyance.
Teleportation is above high tier, especially instantaneous teleportation. I cannot accept this as it stands.


Pure Violence.
Standard special fighting style.


Hard Drive.
Acceptable as is.


Hard Drive 2.0.
This is a contained roleplay, a vehicle that is used for space travel is redundant and I think you can understand him not bringing it with him.


This is as polite and simple as I can possibly make it, I'm not trying to be an asshole, I'm not being rude. I'm being honest and contained within the rules and setting that is laid out.
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