@The Roman07 The grammar and formatting of the sample is of some concern. For example, new speaker should mean a new paragraph in your sample, there's also a couple of capitalization errors throughout but otherwise the sheet is good. I'm going to say accepted on the condition you tidy the above issues up in the IC.
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Reluctantly retired roleplayer.
Except when I'm not.
Why are you here when you should be writing posts?
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I've added in some more Limitations including one that will require a bit of preplanning to actually use against Mimic :L (Wasps)
How does he feel about hornets? (*Cue Mysterious Foreshadowing Music here*)
Revamped my character as well. Went the telekinesis route since we got a few mind readers :)
Will give it a look!
Is this four stage power plan a requirement?
Nope, I just started a trend it seems. My only requirement was that you choose abilities that can evolve and expand as the story progresses.
My CS higher up this page has been updated and awaits review
Hmm, I like the abilities (if only because they're very similar to the first character I ever made), I do like the fact the limitations and weaknesses of the powers transfer over, but I'd like to see a few more added to Mimic himself. Maybe something that breaks the imitation, or interrupts it? Is the touch literally a touch, like can he brush up against someone, or does he have to place a whole hand on them? If he's knocked unconscious does he return to normal, can severe trauma shocking him out of, such as being shot?
Just some stuff like that, otherwise it's looking good.
Shapeshifters are creeps.
Guess I'm going back to the drawing board.
As opposed to body snatchers and dream invaders? lol
@Optio I think that you should change the body swapping to shapeshifting. I doubt taking someone's body will be permitted.
I fully endorse this suggestion. Furthermore, Stage 2 just seems completely out of place in comparison to the rest of the abilities, why would he swap bodies if his was improved?
@The Roman07 Definitely a little on the over powered side with being able to manipulate emotions, thoughts and then having telekinesis. Due to the high interest in mental powers, I think I would prefer if you either focused on the empathy based powers or the telekinetic ones.
@Optio I really don't foresee your chosen ability working in the RP unfortunately. It's an interesting idea, but due to game mechanics I just don't see you being able to be as involved which will of course be rather limiting for Jacob.
@Lev Powers seem well checked, always a little iffy towards telepathy but yours seems balanced and checked so I'm looking forward to the rest of the sheet.
@Optio I really don't foresee your chosen ability working in the RP unfortunately. It's an interesting idea, but due to game mechanics I just don't see you being able to be as involved which will of course be rather limiting for Jacob.
@Lev Powers seem well checked, always a little iffy towards telepathy but yours seems balanced and checked so I'm looking forward to the rest of the sheet.
@Lev Absolutely!
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