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@Forsythe That's fine, Hiraga at least heard it.
Death

His hunt for Hollow led Death throughout the city. The spirit was infamous in the underworld for being a mischievous bugger, but he never would have imagined the damn thing to pull a stunt like he had. Death hated the that he had been duped by a spirit, one of the lowliest creatures in existence. It was just a shadow of something that it had once been, whether man or animal, or worse.

He was getting closer, or so his shades had said, "Not far now master, not far at all."
He replied in a hiss, "That's what you said five minutes ago!"
The shades shrugged and zipped off again into the shadows. They had better be right.

What most perplexed him was how Hollow was hiding from him. In usual circumstances when a spirit went haywire, he'd be able to track it quite easily, but these weren't normal circumstances. Hollow was somehow masking his presence from him. An ability he did not think spirits possessed, at least one of Hollows caliber. It was almost as if... No, he shook his head, that couldn't be possible. Or could it? Many things had come and gone, but could they return?

The shades zipped back to him frantically, "Master, he is here, he is here!"
"Where?" he asked, looking around. He was in a rundown part of town, far away from the festival. The eery quietness might have been unnerving to a mortal but it only told Death that something amiss was near.

Then he heard the tall tale sign of Hollow, his insufferable laughing.

"Hellow Death!" Came the spirit from behind him, "The key! The key! Have you come for your key?"

Death turned around, coming face to face with the spirit Hollow. He was wearing, he did a double take, Hollow was wearing a white cloth and hovering off the ground. Like a child wearing a ghost costume, yet it had no eye slots. A ghostly hand shot from the cloth, carrying a large bone key. The spirit dangled before it before him.

Death started, but stopped when Hollow fluttered backwards, he spoke agitated, "Give me the key Hollow, your prank its causing me a headache."

The spirit laughed again, "No No No! Not quite yet! Not when the others have not met!" Hollow laughed again, the cloth rippling in response. "They must come. They must come!"

Death opened his mouth to reply but was cut short when Hollow revealed another item within his opposite hand. It was a small bell. Death eyes grew wide, and then before he could react, Hollow rung the bell. It was a high pitched sound, only audible by those with a heightened sense, and very God would hear it. If they hadn't already figured out their powers were back, they would now. Yet worse, they could pinpoint the location of the bell, such an item had only been used in Heaven, as a gathering tool. Yet Hollow had one.

The spirit began to laugh, Death lunged at him but only met thin air as he landed on the pavement. He smashed his fist into the ground, leaving a sizable indent. Hollow was still there, he could feel the bell. The damn spirit had baited him into two choices, leave or pursue. He brushed himself of the ground, and grumbled, it had to happen eventually.


@Kazemitsu

I can already see that being overpowered. If you really want to do something like that then I would need to see an application before my final judgment. But I will warn you now, I don't want to crush your spirits, but I'm only allowing three powers and a weapon, and Gods only get one aspect. Like for example, God/Goddess of War, Peace, The Oceans, The Sky, Darkness, Dragons, Forges. etc.

Hopefully that clarifies some of your ideas.

@Kazemitsu

So like a sea god? Or like a water dragon god?

@Dezuel

Hi, thanks for the interest! As for your question, yes but it is by no means easy. Gods are powerful entities who basically exist to uphold an aspect of creation. By killing a god you're basically killing the aspect that they uphold and leaving what remains of said aspect, broken. It'll still work but it won't be upheld to the fullest.

For example, lets say The God of War and the God of Peace got into a battle. The God of War overwhelms Peace, and kills him. Peace gets sent to place that not even the Gods know and War is the victor. Ever since Peace died, the Human's world has been at war on and off with only small time periods of relative peace. It doesn't have to be a full scale war to suffice either, even a small border skirmish counts.

Hopefully that helps!
@Dealdric Okay works for me, you can move him to the character tab.
@Dealdric

Yeah, looks good. What are you going to do with your demigods though?
@Dealdric

Yeah no problem. For your characters offspring, you can do that or if you want you can make their own character sheets. I'm allowing as many characters as a person can manage, so the choice is yours.
@Dealdric

Hello and welcome!

Before I can accept you there are a couple of things that we need to go over in your application.

I like Goehearth, I think he can be a great addition to the current group we have! There is just a few concerns I that'd i'd like to go over. One being his power, The Vile shadow. I like it, its a good original power, just, if you ever have to use it against another player then don't just power play them into a vegetable state. You did mention that you had to fight for control, which is good, but I thought I would just express my opinion.

Next would be your weapon, As long as Vale Spliter can't open a portal to the Heaven's then you are good to use it.

Now, for your pre-history, Demi-gods didn't officially exist until Humanity was created, so having them in the beginning wouldn't happen. You could just change it to spirits and be good with that part. Then with your two demigod children, I am most interested in them. What happened to them? They do live mortal lives, just longer then humans, so how would they still be alive or if they even are?

Other then that, it looks great!
@Kazemitsu Watcha wanna be?
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