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Current GM of World of Light. When it comes to writing, there's nothing I love more than imagination, engagement, and commitment. I'm always open to talk, suggestion, criticism, and collaboration. While I try to be as obliging, helpful, and courteous as possible, I have very little sympathy for ghosts, and anyone who'd like to string me along. Straightforwardness is all I ask for.

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@Lugubrious I created classes, yes, but new classes are created in new Fire Emblems from time to time. And those classes roughly follow a set example. I'm tempted to allow that Scourge to be used, but as an item not a weapon. It will have charges like all items and weapons, and you will need to spend Golds and/or time to repair or buy new ones when it's depleted. Acceptable?


Yes, those conditions are more than acceptable to me. Thank you.
@Lugubrious Hey ! I only see two problems here.
-Your Personal Skill is ok, but your skill 'Rattling Blow' is not as it is not listed among the Fates Skills.
-Scourge is not a Fire Emblem weapon, and it's effect are not exactly 'FE Standard'.


I misunderstood about the class skill, and will fix it.

As for the scourge, however, I see it as less a weapon of its own right and more of an accessory to and explanation of how the personal skill. It could not be used for normal attacks. Having 'FE Standard' in quotes made me think that I missed something on the first page or in the sheet, but I couldn't find anywhere it was mentioned previously. Plus, the fact that you're instituting gun classes must surely mean you're amenable to bending the rules of what's strictly standard in Fire Emblem. With these points in mind I would ask that you reconsider the scourge as an item.

As a side note, if I were to get rid of it, I would also need to change the personal skill, since it wouldn't make sense without it.
For your consideration:

I'm considering a Fighter.
I would be interested in playing this.




A brisk jog through the frigid air brought Goro, Taro, and Umi back to the bus before too long. By happenstance they arrived at about the same time as a couple other groups, Goro noting their respective bounties with a little disappointment. He’d hoped that his little squad’s quick triple-find constituted a stroke of luck or the culmination of their particular skill, but most everyone seemed to have found at least a few. After gently putting his own charge down in a bus seat and exiting back onto the wrecked gray landscape, he hoped more than ever that this test would be decided by points earned rather than relative position to the others. If so, that meant hard work and attention to detail would get him and his new friends into Jigokuraku; if not, the hot shots would crowd out people like him, Taro, and Umi, with whom he’d already formed a sort of unspoken kinship.

Either way, there could be no time spent on worry and reflection. They needed to get back out there, and at least they had the fortune of a goal in mind. Unaware of the situation unfolding on the bus, Goro waited for the others to catch up him before he lit the way back to Zone 3. Their breathing came a bit heavier, he knew, but unless the others turned out to be particularly out of shape he felt his group could keep up this pace for a while.




Sure enough, Umi hopped inside the bus, seated the dummy that she’d “rescued” with the others that were inside, and had just stepped back outside when she noted a dark-skinned girl coming towards her direction. She thought nothing of it at first, but as she preemptively got of her way, she saw something akin to an injury around the area of the dark-skinned girl’s ankle, almost as if she’d grazed it against something. Yet the girl had soldiered on. This could only mean one thing…

’Crap; they’re really going at it!’ Umi thought to herself, ’This is starting to feel like UA all over again.’

There was only one thing for it. Umi and the others would have to get a move on, or else they would quite easily be left behind. Perhaps in that case, it might’ve been best if Umi prepared her Quirk for combat right here and now. She had so much water in all those apparatuses that made up the rest of her costume; not enough to reach the limits of the Quirk’s capability, but certainly abundant as to last for the rest of the exam... provided that she was careful enough. There was also that water bottle that Taro tried to give her earlier.

As she made it towards the halfway point of where Goro was shining the light that his body emitted, Umi stopped moving, and looked back towards the bus for just a moment.

’I hope that girl doesn’t push herself,’ Umi sighed after this thought came across her mind.

At Umi’s approach Goro gave a cheery wave. If the exertion so far was taking a toll on him, he was hiding it admirably. For her part, the girl seemed somewhat distracted, so the light-headed lad decided to take the initiative. “Alright, not a moment to waste! The other dude’s right behind, so let’s get back over there.” For a brief moment, his gaze also lingered on the bus; he could see some activity on board, most likely just the other students dropping off their loads or taking a breather, and could spare no time to examine further. Turning back to face the chilling mist, Goro gave a nod and took off at a light jog once again. Despite the fog, he felt confident that he could retrace his earlier steps.
It looks cool, with a clear abundance of effort put into world building. I'll keep an eye on it.
Despite Arthur's display, nobody seemed to be taking the bait. He suppressed the urge to furrow his brow, wondering if he'd done something that discredited his story. After a moment, however, he realized that the people looked not at him, but rather past him. He glanced over his shoulder, and his eyebrows shot up in surprise. Hogan himself heaved himself over the bridge toward the group, though something in his gait struck Arthur as odd. A bigger problem, however, lay in the contradiction the reptile's arrival introduced; with Hogan here rather than elsewhere, Arthur's story about the show poised to start fell to pieces.

Baffled and surprised, the mustached man hurried to pick those pieces up. "H-Hogan!" he stammered, "What are you...!?" His question got cut off as the crocodile gave an off-putting moan and proceeded to barf a gruesome hunk of trash out onto the the ground. All those nearby recoiled in disgust, Arthur included. The large man did, however, catch on to what his companion was doing. Oh, he's pretending to be sick. It's a bit rude and risky to pull a stunt like this instead of going with my plan, but...fair, since I didn't think of any alternative or ask what he thought. I'll follow his example this time to make up for my thoughtlessness.

The next moment, he clapped a hand to his forehead in dismay. "Good God almighty! Hogan, what happened to you!? You're sick as a dog! I've gotta get you help." He took a step toward the crowd, motioning for them to clear out. "Move, move! Hogan's in critical condition, and I need to get him to the clinic, pronto! Sorry, but the show's canceled!" Rushing through the civilians to get to the van, he threw open the back doors in haste. If the people didn't clear out immediately, he knew, he'd have a rough time getting Hogan into the van fast enough to lend credence to the new story.
Crouching by the riverside, Arthur struggled to be of some use in getting Hogan back onto land. The water's edge, more of a precipice than a shore, made him think that lending a hand -and possibly even his Stand's- would be necessary, but the tremendous reptile needed little aid to facilitate his reluctant return to terra firma. "Hope you had a nice swim," he remarked with a smile, his cheery demeanor souring the next moment. "Unfortunately, we overstayed our welcome." He pointed toward the parking lot across the nearby bridge, where a number of people milled about in clear anticipation. Several of them, in fact, leaned on the railing overlooking the river, watching Arthur and his companion with not-so-subtle expectations.

The large man rubbed his chin in consternation. "Out of time and nothing to show for it. Darn shame, but life goes on, hm? Question is: how do we make our escape? I'm sure I could convince 'em that the show's about to start on the south end of the island, but if you're behind me, they'll wonder why you're here and not there...plus, I can't get you back into the van without resortin' to unnatural means. It'll be quick, but people'll notice if they're still around." He rested his brown gaze across the river, observing the buildings that ran along its edge.

A moment later, he slapped his knee. All too pleased with himself, he exclaimed, "I got it!" and drew a few more looks his way. Glancing back and forth between them and Hogan, Arthur quieted himself, and grumbled, "It's simple. You stay in the water and swim across the river. I'll send the folks away and then drive off. They're a couple clubs on the other side we can take a look at to try and see if any weird nature lover's on the roster. You pull up by a dock and I'll pick you up. Smooth, huh?" He chuckled, then heaved himself to his full height. "Sorry if this seems abrupt, but we don't have many other options and you're not so much one for conversation, so I'll get to work." With a wave he turned away and headed up toward the bridge, his stride purposeful and mind afire with improvisation.

The moment he set foot on the opposite bank he found himself accosted by curious citizens. A half-dozen voices spoke up at once, and after letting it roll for a moment, Arthur held up his hands in surrender. "Please, please! Everything's almost ready to start. But not here!" He jabbed a thumb over his shoulder, leaning in as if telling a secret. "Now, I'm only the handler, and not part of the official act, but if you hurry to the south side you'll be able to make it in time to see my boss kick off the show! Now hurry, or you'll miss Hogan's opening trick, the Scaly Cyclone!" He stood back to let the people pass by, waving them along like a traffic director.
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