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Liam rushed down to the cave to train after he was done healing his Pokémon. He greeted his friends once he caught up.


Still doing her strange exercise, she looked to Liam, slightly sweat and nodded. "Hey, you too?"
Shiranui went with Khuda to Granite Cave. There was a Pokémon in the cave he wanted to catch.


"Shiranui, what are you doing?" She said as he entered. She rushed here very quickly, and was wearing sweat bands and shorts. Her mankey and ralts also wore sweat bands and all three had some sort of jazz-ersize routine. They continued to work at a fast pace, but she seemed to watch him.
I guess the thread is up. Well bringing up what I said in the interest check, and I thought about it. Do we have access to like iron tools and instruments you would find maybe in mid evil/renaissance time period?


yeah, sure!
ill read it again

edit: well his magic is a little strong. biggest thing i see about it is its range capability. Its close, far, area of effect, and through eye contact. aAlso, though not as big, does it fatigue, magic drain, depress, etc. all at the same time? if so, having that versitile of range and instantly crippling power may be a lot. maybe if the powers divided up into seprate ranges amd spells. For example, the eyes could have an intimidation effect, the mist could depress, contact could drain magic, and the tentacle like thinges could drain enerygy causeing fatigue. and thats just an example, not saying thats how you should do it.

just a smidge of constructive critisism before books says anything. I don't see anything wrong with the the staffs. could even make for some funny mini arcs, like accidentally using the wrong staff and doing a body switch arc. the staff breaks and they have to find another, lol.


Well, that's how I planned, having it be separate spells for each. Also keep in mind that the effects of the magic only work while under the burden magic's influence. Once you are out of it, you will realize that you're fine, it's a sort of hypnosis that makes you feel that way, but you actually aren't.

I would love to have an arc like that, or him doing all this work to get a new one, but it ends up breaking. I can't wait
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Done :)


have fun, please. When the game starts.
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Looks awesome! This is optional, but can you describe that fighting style?
Also, accepted! Put your character into the character section
@manapool1

Im not sure ehat to explain XD. Its a big standard rapier, except its been blessed


There is no standard for a weapon. How long, what metal, what condition. What kind of pummel, or gaurd. What does the blessing do.
Khuda walked towards the cave nearby almost instantly. She was eager to try out of ralts and try to catch a geodude. She was planning to train with her mankey as well.
Name: Evelyn 'Lyn' DeVer

Alias: Judgement

Species: Half Angel, Half Human

Appearance: Lyn has short black hair, blue eyes and a scar over left eye. She is lightly built, though still relatively strong. The only evidence of her father is that when she experiences intense emotion, such as anger or fear, her whole eye glows blue. She also has a brand of a shattered sword on her right shoulder, though she keeps it hidden. She usually wears a light set of black leather armour, custom made, and a black scarf covering the lower half of her face.

Height: 5'7"

Weight: 60 kilograms

Personality: Lyn is cold and some would say cruel. She does have a heart of good, but does not often show kindness. Those she does trust know that underneath her emotionless exterior is a person who will always do what needs to be done to further the cause of good, and definitely someone that can be relied on.

Bio: Lyn was born to the daughter of a low ranking lord. As a father could not be found, she was named a bastard and illegitimate. She was raised till she was 16, at which point she was branded with a broken sword to contrast with the symbol of her mother's house, a sword, and was cast out. Before she was forced to leave, her mother told her the truth of who her father was. She searched the world and eventually found a way to get into contact with angels. They disowned her as well, though her father did not have a choice in this matter. Since then she has wandered the world, trying to find her destiny. She has taken up a vow of the church, promising to bring judgement to those who deserve it, and save those who need saving.

Rank: Unbound Sister of the Order of Light

Alignment: Chaotic Good

Age: 19

Items: Standard explorers kit. a small charm from her mother, which she wears around her. It was originally from her father.

Weapons: a rapier blessed by a priest. It is simple in design. She also owns several knifes.

Skills: Expert fighter, knows some basic holy rituals

Abilities: sharpened reflexes and speed from angelic blood. Her blood is poisonous to unholy creatures.

Magic: Is capable of performing the lowest tiers of angelic magic such as creating light, lighting her hands with holy fire, and writing basic runes of protection.

Other:


What's in the explorer's kit
how much better are her instincts and speed
and who taught her this magic
It's an interesting character. Can't wait to see her in both combat and interaction with the others. Could you explain the rapier a bit?
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