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I love how the Starjammers, a pirate group from the Marvel Universe, is filled with DC heroes instead.
at least give some marvel characters love ;c
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Do Bounces, Byrd Men, Master Bruce's or Star Lords count as people?


well, i know what i did. but it isn't my fault that you hate 80s music. joking by the way.
Yeah, also call out my terrible writing since it can help me out in the long run.
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This. If anyone is uncomfortable with the idea, an opt out is a good option.

Another RPG I was part of did weekly critic reviews of posts, and let's just say that my writing style was extremely unpopular with a very vocal minority. I wound up having to lobby pretty hard for an opt out mechanism because I got tired of getting a weekly digest of how terrible a writer I am.

I can see me liking it since it could improve my writing more and that's the primary reason why I came on this site. But, I can understand it becoming annoying since you are basically being told that your writing is shit. And no-one likes being told that.
I can understand that. Monthly awards ceremonies often dishearten those that don't have the best writing in the world. And with the feeling that their posts aren't good compared to other posts, it can make someone more anxious. (i think)

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You could do that anyways lol

ummm, well...

I really like playing as Star-Lord because of all the '70s and '80s music that I get to listen beyond the popular ones.
I wonder who else has a romantic subplot going on besides Wraith.
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Ask and ye shall receive.

YANUS //

"When I was still naive
Well, you said that we made such a pretty pair
And that you would never leave
But you gave away the things you loved
And one of them was me"


An hour of driving the shuttle across the massive forest was boring for everyone but Peter Quill. He was looking at the window while they were driving pass countless trees. It reminded him of all the times that his mother would drive him to the camping grounds. That was one of the few things that Quill missed about Earth. The smell and sight of the Coloradan forests, especially whenever it rained. Yanus was a good enough replacement, but not perfect. While Quill was looking out at the window, Rocket and Groot were waking up from their almost hour-long nap.

"Are we there yet?" Rocket asked Kraglin while rubbing his eyes.

"Just a bit forward and then we got to walk to their camp" Kraglin replied.

"I am Groot."

"Because I am sure that one of us doesn't want to pay for the damages."

Quill was enjoying the sights and listening to music when Rocket noticed the Walkman. It was the first time that the raccoon ever saw it. He was trying to figure out its purpose before he had to ask Quill. It wasn't a device that you would see at a black market and it looked outdated. So in short, it must be something from Earth. Yeah, he knew about Earth because he read classified information on them in a Nova Corps base. If he had to guess, Quill and Kraglin were either humans or Xandarian. The classified information said that they are almost indistinguishable from Xandarians. But, humans lacked pink skins and blue blood, unlike Xandarians. Guess reading all that bullshit was worth it. Rocket thought while looking at the device again.

Quill noticed Rocket staring at his Walkman and stated, "Looking at something?"

"Yeah, I am actually." Rocket pointed at the device and asked, "What is that relic? It looks like it could easily break."

"That 'relic' was a gift. It's a storage for songs that I can listen to whenever and wherever I want. And I have been keeping it clear and do regular checkups to make sure it doesn't break," Quill answered.

"He cares about that thing more than his own ship and pistols," Kraglin added to the discussion. It was true. Quill treasured that thing more than anything else in this universe. It was the only thing that he took with him when he left Earth with Yondu since he was immediately taken away. And they became a source of happiness in his new life with the Ravagers. Even when he adopted the pirate life, he still kept the walkman as a way of not forgetting about Earth and his mother.

"Well, we are here." Kraglin said while he was landing the shuttle nearby the trail. After landing the shuttle, everyone exited and began their fifteen minute walk. While approaching the campsite, the four of them came up with a simple plan to deal with the bandits. Rocket will scout ahead and count how many men were there. Meanwhile, Kraglin and Groot wait until Rocket's signal to attack the camp. And while the camp is under attack, Quill sneaks around to find Zynsalak. With the plan in place, the group split up and went to their positions.

Meanwhile, Peter Quill pressed the earpiece on the back of his right ear and expanded into a helmet. With a press of a button, he became Star-Lord and raced off to find a good hiding spot.
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