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Jaelyn Ralei

At Rufus' witty comment, Jaelyn's own features became more distraught. She hoped that the young squire would not get in trouble with anyone of higher importance. Then again, he hadn't gotten in a severe amount of trouble in a long while. Maybe he wouldn't get in trouble this time around, either. It wasn't even that late to begin with... 

The blonde's brow furrowed even deeper than before. Even though she felt frustration bubble up deep within her, she couldn't help but shake her head at his comments. It was impossible for her to be truly upset with Rufus, after all. "You should stop chittering like a sparrow and come with me," Jaelyn's voice was firm for a second, but her serious expression quickly melted away into a smile. "And there is no reason to be concerned over my well-being, especially around these parts. Not when I have such a noble squire by my side. He will protect me, correct?" 

@Solace

Wyeth Mallory

"Ah, yes," Wyeth perked up at the mention of his name. Geldyr Snow, wasn't it? Then he was a bastard, and one that claimed to be from the loins of Lord Karlear. Unlike other people, he did not appear to be impacted by the fact that he was in the presence of someone who was disliked by his own father. He himself was rejected by his own father, only because he had sinned greatly by being born. The mention of his father brought back sour memories, and he shook his head. 

The taller man crossed his arms as he observed Geldyr, his grin remaining on his face. "So you will be participating in the tournament," Wyeth commented, bobbing his head up and down as he continued to study Geldyr. "I can only wish you good luck during the competition."

@POOHEAD189

HOUSE LYSANDER (@darkwolf687)

A note for everyone in the roleplay: we are using 'Ser' for the terminology of referencing official knights, the term 'Sir' is non-existent in this time. 

EDWIN LYSANDER 

- Allegiance should be changed to "House Rathmore", not just "Rathmore".
- His family should be labeled as who they are; who is his father, mother, brother, sister, etc.
- He can't be "avarice" because avarice is a noun, not an adjective. You can say he is "avarice incarnate" for better description.
- There's no such thing as "free men"in the lands of Estiala. Everyone is subject to the crown.
- In the backstory, who is Robert? There is no mention of Robert whatsoever. The closest name to Robert is Richard.

EMMALINE LEAR (@HushedWhispers)

- Everything is fine, but her origin is a "some what small...". You seemed to have missed a word there. XD

REYANNA MOREWEN (@RomanAria)

- Solace: hey look it's Rey from Star Wars
- She is not a lady, because she's not the wife of a lord. She's a princess, a daughter of a lord.
- If it's not incredibly important, Solace and I would prefer you PM us to tell us what happened to the people she was bethrothed to, unless it's SUPER DUPER secret.

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