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@TheUnknowable I'd like that... Although, if you are suggesting that we use a "YT-1300 that got modified by its previous owner" and ares suggesting that we take the Millenium Falcon, I can't even begin to tell you everything wrong with that, especially considering how, at this time, Han Solo was still at his mother's teet and the Millenium Falcon was a tugboat by the name of Stellar Envoy above Coruscant... But at the same time, I don't care, let's do this.

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@Princess of God I didn't know Revan was burried on Yavin. I assumed his tomb was, like many Sith Lords, built before his death on a Sigh world like Korriban or Thule. Sith tombs are built as a living reminder of "Git Gud or Git ded." Hense why both Vader and Palpatine have tombs built on Korriban long before their deaths. I mean, the only Sith I knew was burried on Yavin was Exar Kun.

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So, do we have any specific places we are going? Because, unless something forces her out of the temple, maybe a mission or something, then we are going to be spending the entire RP around the temple.

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As Kiana approached the force room, she stopped outside and let out a sigh, she was afraid. She knew it wasn't good to feel such things, but she did. Canderous put his hand on her shoulder "Look up, General. You never know, she may become greater than you." Juana looked at him.

"That's what I am afraid of." She steeled herself, putting on her best game-face. Walking into the room, she smiled as the child looked at her. "Greetings, young one." She began, before looking at the dent in the wall and then to the master. "I have come on behalf of Master Yoda. I am afraid to say that Master Yoda has deemed that Maru would learn more under my tutaladge." She said to him, she then looked down at Mary. "I apologise if you'd rather stay with Master Cain, but the matter is out of my hands. This is Canderous." She motioned to the Clone.

"CC008, at your service, sir." He said, standing to attention, bowing to the Jedi Master.

"I know it is unorthodox for a Clone to be here, but he is here for at my request. Ever since Krenax ascended to Knight, I have felt comfortable with having his council." She then bent down to the Youngling. "I have had several Padawans. I will not lie to you, I will do my best to make you into a Jedi, but it will not be easy. You will falter, you will cry, you will undergo great suffering. But at the end of it, you will be a proud member of our order. You can ask Knight Krenax and you will be able to ask Knight Peltin and Master Plo-Koon." She got up. Master Cain, is there anything you would like to say?"

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@Princess of God

1) There is obviously a defense that Jedi have against other Jedi reading their thoughts. If there wasn't, then Anakin and Padme wouldn't have managed to go 3 years undiscovered.

2) That's why they were only acting all lovey-dovey in private. Trust me, there is a big difference between sappy love and mad, passionate love. I mean, the way you describe it would make their relationship like that of Anakin and Padme, whereas it's more like Gomez & Morticia Addams (Which, let's face it, is the single greatest love story ever told.) They are, in public, the model of a Jedi and their Clone Commander, efficient and deadly. It's not until they get behind locked doors that that goes out the window and they go at each other in the manner of rabid weasels.

Hell, in that whole post, the only public interaction that they had was him asking her what the meeting with Yoda was about. I know the Jedi code and I know that she knows it. Trust me, this isn't going to be a problem.

Marvel: Exiles RP

Just post it here. I'm fine discussing it with everyone else to see.

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--GAR Venator-class Star Destroyer "Krakatoa"--

The morning seemed to creep ever closer as Kiana and Canderous sat in orbit above the planet. They were in her private chamber, both sat naked on the bed, looking out of the viewport, Canderous holding her in his arms as the sun began to creep over the horizon. Kiana squinted as the light flared from finally breaking the horizon and she smiled "No matter how many times I see it... It's always so beautiful." she said.

"I can think of several prettier things." said Canderous as he kissed her neck.

"Alright, lover boy, you know we can't do anything like that." she smiled pushing him away.

"I know... But sometimes, I just can't help it." Kiana then turned around to him and wrapped her legs around his waist. They locked lips in a passionate embrace, before a beeping came from the computer. She immediately pushed him away, rolling off of him and onto the floor. "Poodoo!" she exclaimed. She looked around at the computer, knowing that it was from another Jedi. In any case, she needed to answer it and she couldn't be seen like this. She'd be exiled for sure. She desperately looked around, then looked at her wardrobe. "Into the wardrobe." she ordered. He shot up to his feet and rushed to the closet, before opening it. There was barely enough room for him to fit, with her small meditative shrine set up in it. He climbed in. She winced as he knocked over several things on his way into the closet and she closed it. She then didn't bother to get anything on before answering the call. "Yes?" she asked the computer as a hologram of her former Padawan appeared. Knight Krenax, a Shistavanen.

"Mast-WOAH!" he covered his eyes. "Master, can you please put something on?" She smiled as she leaned down and grabbed a long cloth, before covering herself with it. Excellent, now he was shook up and it would be difficult for him to read her emotions. She was so glad that it wasn't Master Yoda, he wouldn't have winced.

"Better?" she asked.

"Slightly..." he replied with a look of mild contempt. "Master-" But before he could go further, she cut him off.

"None of this Master business, you have completed the Trials, you are free to refer to me as Kiana from now on." she said with a smile.

"You are still a Master of the Jedi Order and I will refer to you as such." he replied. He then took a deep breath and composed himself. "Master Yoda has sent you a summons. He says that it is of the utmost urgency. Something which affects all of us." he said. Kiana kept her smile, but died a little inside as she suspected that Yoda had found out.

"I will be there as soon as possible." she replied, before bowing to him. "So, tell me, have you a new apprentice?" she asked.

"No. I was offered a few, including... Manu..." he said. "I am hopeful that young Kupak will be ready for padawanship soon. He is talented for a boy his age." he said.

"I do feel sorry for that young one. She has something in her... Something I haven't felt since..." she shook her head. "I just hope Master Yoda finds her a suitable master soon. At this point, I believe that only he or Master Plo-Koon would be capable of molding her into a Jedi." she said. She then felt a twinge of something in the force. "Anyway, I need to go now. Don't want to keep Master Yoda waiting." she said hurridly. "Bye." and immediately shut off the feed, moments before Canderous lost his balance and came tumbling out of the closet. Kiana walked over to him, lying in a daze on the floor and leaned over him. "What am I ever going to do with you?" she asked.

"Love me... Feed me... Never, ever leave me..." he groaned. She got down on her knee's leaning over to give him a kiss, upside-down.

"Now get up. You heard what he said, I need to see Master Yoda and it's entirely possible that we're rumbled." she smiled, walking her fingers across his face. "If we are, we may need to blast our way out of here."

"Really?" he asked.

"Just get dressed." she said, throwing his Duraplast breastplate at him.

****

--Jedi Temple, Council Room--

Kiana walked, confidently in. Canderous was outside of the door, rifle in hand and stood to attention. He watched the Temple guard as they stared at him. He was only permitted here as long as he was under Kiana's orders. Kiana was surprised to see only Master Yoda.

"Greetings, Master Kiana." he said in his high, gravelly voice. She got down on her knee and bowed to him.

"Master." she responded.

"Wonder, do you? Why here you have come?" He asked.

"Indeed... Master..." she responded. She surpressed her feelings.

"Afraid, are you?" He asked.

"Fear is a path to the Dark Side... I have no wish to walk that path again." She replied.

"Good..." he smiled, before looking out of the window. "Good... A mission, I have for you. Difficult it will be. Only you, no other, walk this path can. Only one, with full view of the Dark Side may I trust." Kiana was now slightly confused, but she was at least happy not to be getting Exiled.

"Anything, Master. I am at your service."

"Training... A padawan needs."

"Taking on a new Padawan so soon?" she asked. "Surely Krenax would be more suited, he is in desperate need of a Padawan."

"Intimately with the Dark Side of the force, Krenax is unfamiliar with." Yoda shook his head. "Maru, your new apprentice is." he said.

"No..." She got up. "No, master, please do not ask this of me, I sense something within that child an old presence something that harkens back to my days as a Nightsister." He looked at her.

"Why you were chosen, your history has determined. More mindful will you be of where your student goes." Kiana looked him dead in the eye. She knew he wasn't going to take no for an answer.

"Very well, Master Yoda, I shall do as you have asked." she then bowed again as she left. She met Canderous outside.

"So?" he asked.

"I have a new Padawan." she replied.

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@TheUnknowable "You have been banished from the order and now live outside of the code. I will not give such teachings to you, who wears that mockery of our order around your belt." she says, pointing to your Lightsaber.

Sorry, just getting into character.

This galaxy isn't yours! (On hiatus)

Name: Democratic Kingdom of Solentari

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Type of Governement: Democratic Monarchy

Description of Governement:

The Government is a very simple process. The King/s and Queen/s hold all of the power in the Kingdom and are able to make laws and decisions on behalf of the state at their leisure. However, the people have their own democratically elected Parliament, who tell the Monarchs how to use their power. Although there is no direct system in place to prevent the monarchs from ignoring parliament, it's commonly understood that such actions would lead to civil war.

Officially, the ruling head of state is the King. He will have a number of wives, due to the low birthrate of males. If, by the end of his reign, no male heir is produced, then the first-born Female will become the new head of state and take on several husbands. It's customary for the queens sisters to all marry the same nobleman. If the Queen doesn't produce a male heir by the end of their reign, then, if one of the queen's sisters has bore a male heir, then the oldest male of them will ascend to the throne.

Main race

Levinti:

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Levinti are a Feline species that developed on the planet of Levintari. Levinti are far closer to the earth Lion than to the Wildcat and their biology says as such. Levinti have a very low male-birthrate, about 1 in 10, meaning that poligami is common, whereas monogamy is almost unheard of. The Females are very humanoid, fully grown at about 5'6-6'4, with patches of fur on their wrists and long hair. Wheras the males are generally much bigger and far more ferocious-looking, but not stronger. This is due to the arrangement and strength of their muscles. A females muscles are far smaller, but containing a lot more bonds, whereas a males is far larger, but containing less bonds. Females are the physically superior of the species, being far faster, as they carry less muscular weigh despite being less imposing.

Females make up the warriors of the Kingdom, as well as the general physical workers. Males are usually left to the administrative jobs, so as to not put them in danger. Ever since the invasion by the EOM, female Levinti have been used by humans from across the Emporium as Trophy-wives, being that they are sexually compatible. However, children from such union are Smaller, less physically imposing and much weaker than a pure-bred Levinti. They are tolerated in the Kingdom and even though their breeding with a pure-breed also creates a pure-breed (The Levinti-genes being dominant over the Human ones) they rarely do so, as Levinti find them somewhat physically repugnant, especially the male hybrids.

Minority races:

Galfans

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Originally, the Galfans were a slave-race of AI's, in service to a race that has long-since vanished known as "The Masters" approximately 3000 years ago, a lone Galfan by the name of Solus rose up and enticed a rebellion. Destroying their masters presence on their world, they liberated several other worlds, before finally, Solus left with a number of disciples to see if they could come to peace with The Masters. Solus was never heard from again, but his people formed a religion, believing him to a divine prophet, sent to deliver them from slavery. Flash forward to 300 years ago and the EOM invaded. The Galfans were wiped out, their civilization completely destroyed due to Humanity's intense hatred and distrust of AI's. 250 years ago, the Levinti's scouts landed on Galf and unearthed a number of the though-destroyed Galfans, bringing them back online. At the present time, only about 40 Galfans are active, but they are working tirelessly to assist the Levinti in creating technological masterpieces that will allow their small kingdom to go toe-to-toe with even Humanities Armada.

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The Strain were, like the Galfans, a race enslaved to The Masters, working as engineers and builders. When the Galfans rebelled, Solus came to their world and liberated them. They wouldn't adopt the religion around Solus until much later, however. They never really focussed on developing technology, so much as preserving and developing their worlds architecture. Stra-Prime was a golden beacon of architectual genius... Until Humanity came.

After the destruction of the Galfans, the Strain were seen as a potential threat as they were quite close to the Galfans. Stra-Prime was levelled but the people were allowed to live. All of their great builders were taken and redistributed throughout the Imperium, they and their descendants helping to develop Human worlds. With their own world almost completely destroyed and anyone who would even begin to know where to start fixing it gone, the Strain homeworld was abandoned and they set out as a nomadic fleet in their ancient vessels. Upon entering the Levintari-System, they found The Masters' Technology on their advanced tracking systems and followed it to find the Levinti had adopted the Solus religion. Upon arriving on the planet, they were welcomed by the Galfans, allowing them to stay on their world and assist in the development of their species. The Strain have been instrunmental in the colonization of all of the Levinti's worlds.

Demography(Min 20% humans):

Levinti: 65%
Strain: 15%
Human: 20%
Galfans: <0.00001% (Approximately 40, living in secret.)

Religion: The Levinti's main relgion is the Church of Solus, although it is commonly unknown where the story of Solus came from, it is a closely guarded secret that it is actually from the Galfans (Humanity would have destroyed the church, had they known) Solus is simply described as an "Ancient Warrior from beyond the heavens, clad in metal." The religion is mostly based around an archive found in Solus' tomb that told of his travel across the stars. There are many national holidays dedicated to him, as well as many large cathedrals (Strain-built, of course)

There are several smaller religions. The Keshnikrats is a minor Pagan religion, they keep to themselves and abhore violence. There are also a subsect of Solus worshippers known as the Favreu's who are a little extremist, they worship cybornetics as they wish to ascend to become clad in metal, just like their Messiah.

Culture: The Levinti culture is a mix of many clashing ideals, mainly due to their culture's development at an alarming rate and multiple other facts, including the invasion by Humanity. There are many Clan families, due to their Polygamist natures. Much like human clans having symbols and logo's to tell the difference between them, the Levinti have suits of metal armour. Each suit will be completely different, depending on the family. The suit will be reforged every time a new head of the clan takes their place, so as to make sure their leader can be fit with it.

Also, due to the nature of their religion, cybornetics are commonplace. Every head of house will have an arm or hand replaced with Cybornetics.

History(what you did under the rule of the empire fo roughly 300 years): When the Empire first came and started to destroy the other empires, the Levinti government asked the people, who voted to go to war. For the first time since the government had been established, the Levinti royal family veto'd the peoples order and instead, opened negotiations with the Emporium. A negotiated surrender saw the Kingdom being absorbed by the Emporium, whilst still maintaining their autonomy. Immediately following this, a civil war broke out, where the people took to the streets in total outrage of their King cowing down before the invaders. The King, in response, stepped down and handed the crown to his eldest son. With the Anexing of the Kingdom, Humanity flocked in droves. With them came scientists and soldiers. Levinti scientists were forced to surrender their work, but in return, got access to the Emporiums scientific data.

After one scientist got his hands on data relating to the Galfan homeworld, the government managed to secretly send an excevation team to start digging up the world. After the retrieval of several dormant, but not dead, Galfans, the Levinti Science Board learned the truth about Solus and the origins of their religion.

Important characters(very important, your leader[s], your strategist, your spy master and any other important character IN DETAIL):

Description of Military(ships and ground troops):

Technology(note that there are no energy shields, and that doomsday weapons are not a thing.):

Additional(whatever you feel like you want to add):

Currently busy, this is how far I got on my CS, but i'm gonna try and finish it tomorrow.

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@Princess of God

Renny And Inuel Kai

Name : Renny and Inual Kai

Age : 12/3900

Race : Human/Talortai

Ranking: Mercenary

Role you play in the story: The old one that can teach Manu how to fight in a way no Jedi can teach her and the Tech specialist

Lightsaber color: Renny-None. Inuel-Red.

Fun facts about your character

- Is a Talortai, a race of ancient Reptavians that are incredibly long lived
- Has faught in more wars than most remember existed.
- Carries a Lightsaber from a friend of his, although he can't use it very well. He carries it more as a show of respect than as as a weapon.
- Is versed in the combat style known as Taras Kasi, a martial-art designed for unarmed combatants to counter Lightsaber wielders.
- Being mostly Cybornetic, his body hides multiple concealed weapons, including a hold-out blaster in his leg.
- Renny can take apart and put back together, most anything.
- Renny serves as the mechanic aboard Inuel's ship "Sleepy Rancor"

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Kiana

Name : Kiana

Age : 238

Race : Dathomirian

Ranking: Master

Role you play in the story: Maru's Master

Lightsaber color: Blue Lightsaber + Green Double Lightsaber

Fun facts about your character {Always can update}

- Is well versed in Sith Alchemy
- Is a practitioner of Juyo, despite rarely using it
- Has learned how to use Divine Judgement (A Lightside varient of Force Lightning)
- Has the natural ability, like all Dathomirians, to bring Rancor's under her control, should she ever meet one.
- Was an apprentice of Master Plo-Koon, who she first met after trying to assassinate him for the honour of her Coven. He, in turn, showed her the ways of the Light side of the force.
- Is madly in love with Canderous.

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Canderous

Name : Canderous

Age : 12 (Physically, 24)

Race : Mandolorian Clone

Ranking: Commander

Role you play in the story: Kiana's Bodyguard/Clone Commander

Fun facts about your character {Always can update}

- Is a Null-Clone and so is not bound by an inability to refuse or question an order.
- Is always the one to take command in a tactical situation, due to him being a far more experienced and better Commander than Kiana. She knows this.
- He spends pretty much every second he's around Kiana in public trying to keep his hands off of her. She knows this too.

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