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29 days ago
Current Two is for discipline, heedless of trial; three for the gleam of a jewel or a smile...
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6 yrs ago
To absent friends, lost loves, old gods, and the season of mists; and may each and every one of us always give the Devil his due.
7 yrs ago
And when you said hi, I forgot my dang name.
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8 yrs ago
Everything beautiful is math! Everything beautiful is a problem.
8 yrs ago
But whatever they offer you, don't feed the plants!
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Hi! I'm Naril. I write, build things, and I'm incredibly busy, all the time. I'm probably older than you. I'm not interested in isekai, school settings, sandboxes, excessively grimdark settings, or invitation-only threads; I'm very picky about militaria, I don't care for A Song of Ice and Fire, Nation roleplay bores me to tears, most fandom doesn't really catch my attention, and though I prefer Advanced-level writing, I'm not going to help you write your book (Unless you feel like paying my day rate) - which almost certainly means I'm not here. Some day, maybe. Probably not, though!

I am interested in science fiction, cyberpunk, space operas, and stories of working together, uplift, and progress. You'll catch my attention with fantasy adventures in an interesting world, or with almost any modern fantasy. I have a soft spot for superhero stories, and you might find me in the occasional Star Wars or Star Trek fandom.

My standards are high for myself and mild for everyone else; I love writing dialogue and making you feel like you can taste the place I'm creating. I write in the style I like to read, which is the part I find fun. If you want an example of the authors I enjoy, look at Ann Leckie, Tamsyn Muir, N.K. Jemisin, Martha Wells, Terry Pratchett, and Neil Gaiman.

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Morgan found herself floating in a dark space.

No, not floating - she felt weight on her feet, but she had no sensation of what might be around her. Nothing but a vast lightlessness, a tenebrous, echoing totality stretching in every direction, including below her feet. The space was not quite familiar, like something remembered but seen from a different angle, a different place. She turned, felt her boots click against emptines. Of course, nothing. There was no light here.

There were sounds, though, just at the edge of hearing. A sussurus of half-heard voices, their meaning entirely opaque but punctuated with the occasional wordless gasp or cry. Moment by moment, Morgan became certain that she knew this place, somehow, but she couldn't quite recall why. She looked around again, then blew out a breath through her nose. Enough of this. Whatever was going on, standing still wouldn't solve anything.

"If you're trying to frighten me, you'll have to do better than this," she called into the darkness, "I find sensory deprivation rather soothing."

Her words didn't echo, every syllable swallowed by the vast expanse. All the same, her skin prickled, and she thought she felt a pulse of cool air across the back of her neck. With a bone-deep certainty, Morgan knew she wasn't alone.

"You are not the Vanguard," something said, the words dropping directly into Morgan's mind. There wasn't really a voice, rather the sensation of tectonic plates grinding together. If the the sound of planets colliding could form words, this would be that feeling.

Morgan tried, but not very hard, to keep a note of exasperation out of her voice, "Are you always this astute, or have you been saving up your brilliant observations?"

"Only those made here may set foot in this place," the thing said, and paused. Morgan felt her skull ache, then the words continued, "Ah. We understand. We comprehend. We had considered this path. Our time is not yours to command. Your place is not here, Morgan Lisbeth Blackwood. Do not return."

She opened her eyes, felt the bump of the plane's wheels hitting the runway. The seat next to her sat empty - on the otherwise-packed plane, Morgan expected this was a courtesy Eleanor had arranged. Morgan cleared her throat and sat a little straighter in her seat, feeling the aches and stiffness of too many hours without movement. She shook her head, scrubbed her face with her hands. Of all the things that had happened to her, this was one of the strangest. While the landing announcements rattled by and the plane pulled up to the jetway, she filed the particulars of the experience away in her mind. She didn't wonder if they would be important, but she did wonder if they would be important to this case...in any event, she'd talk to Tragellan later. For now, being on the ground was by far more important.

Nothing caught Morgan's attention until the company were on their way out of the airport, at which point several things rapped against her mind in quick succession, almost all of them with her own companions. With growing alarm, she stepped up to Manny and Kennedy, her expression in a deliberate and, she knew, convincing, expression of surprise and delight.

"Kennedy! Manny!" She slung an arm around each one of them, "I can't believe we ran into one another like this! Isn't it great?" She pulled them each a little closer and continued in the same tone of voice, the same nuclear-powered smile on her face, "Are you two insane? You both took your guns out of their cases in the airport and now you're thinking of starting a fight? If we're being tailed, let them watch, because we're on at least a dozen different cameras, any agent in this building is armed, the police are outside, and there are mortals to get caught in the crossfire. The only thing we can do is leave and pretend we haven't seen anything."

She waved at someone, laughed, and turned back to the pair, "If they don't know we've seen them, they might let something else slip by their action or they might just break off and return to whoever's pulling their strings. In any case, they were ready for us, we didn't know that, and we've lost this one. We'll make plans, but not if we're inside a jail cell or bleeding ot death on the sidewalk." She patted Manny on the back, and gave Kennedy a peck on the cheek before pulling her arms away from them, and taking a few steps ahead.

She turned, and without missing a step, said "I'll see you two around town, huh?" then quick-walked away, heading toward the rental counter. Ahead, she spotted Eleanor. Well, no time like the present.

"Eleanor," Morgan said, coming up next to her, "They were ready for us. There were people watching the airport. We need to get away, before they decide civilian casualties are worth whatever they hoped to accomplish, or before one of our own does something...unwise."
Mine’s been that way for a few years now. It’s an oblique reference to the “Tinker, tailor, soldier, sailor...” children’s rhyme and the novel “Tinker Tailor Soldier Spy” by John le Carre, one of my favorite spy novels.

It also encompasses my hobbies and professional skills, hah. I used to have a longer version on my profile - I think it said “Tinker, tailor, builder, dancer, hacker, lover, thief.” But who has that kind of attention span, hm? ;)
No joke, Morgan is about to hiss something like “are you insane” about (to a lesser extent) unpacking and holstering a firearm at an airport and to a greater extent the idea of getting in a fight at same.

Whether you still do is entirely up to you, of course.

But Morgan’s definitely on Team Stealth right now. :3

Also, @jasonwolf - How do you mean?
I admit I've been having a little bit of a hard time figuring out what I want to react to. Also, I got sent to California for work (where I still am!) so that was...fairly disruptive.

I'm all for the Beach Episode, but we need some pretty high narrative tension first, followed by something with apocalyptic stakes. Those are the rules, right? :3

I'm rather feeling like I'd rather be proactive than reactive in this case, though. Make something up and move a plot forward. Hmm...
I'm still here. I'll write a post this weekend. Not to bury the lede, but my girlfriend just broke up with me so...yeah. I have some spare time and a pressing desire to, for a few hours at least, be concerned with something that isn't drinking all the wine in my wine rack.

That was a Naril-is-sad joke. Please don't worry about me drinking half a dozen bottles of wine.

I do need to get more, though. That's almost all special-occasion wine.
Hi everyone, especially Penny. Sorry about my absence, I'm mostly back now. It's been a...well. It's been a not-great couple weeks.
I'm actually waiting to hear back from a PM I sent to @Penny - I hope she's all right. :<
I'm mulling over a character, trying to decide just how much I can push the world. Myke is familiar with the kind of crazy I tend to bring, heh.

Also, is it an intentional...mm...narrative clue that there are Illinois state law enforcement personnel in Detroit, Michigan, or was this story originally meant to be set in Chicago? :3
I was waiting on @Panic before getting terribly far ahead, but I can leapfrog over her to get to whatever Tragellan needs to know.

@Penny - Would a collaborative post be useful to you, narratively?
I'm...intrigued. I do love cyberpunk, and I've been looking to write in that kind of world.

I'm considering this. :3
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