Ruby

[Withdrawn] Garen Zi, Sith Apprentice, Teräs Käsi Master

I'm fine with it though the other points of Zeke's remain.

[Withdrawn] Garen Zi, Sith Apprentice, Teräs Käsi Master

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Yeah, I read over it a while ago (just did a quick re-read to be sure) and I definitely would not want to be her when the Sith come for her.

I myself was kinda implying that, even though his naïvaté has literally almost been the death of him, Garen is still naïve enough to believe that the Sith are the good guys, and really the tipping point for him is if he can learn to shake this before the Sith can manipulate him past the point of no return or not. Kinda shows the more subtle villiany of the Sith. Or something like that, I dunno.

But I realize that not everything on the sheet is up to par and that I haven't really been thinking enough with my big ol' brain. I definitely have to consider my next moves...

@Tim

I think it shows his youth that he's see it in blanket terms of good and evil which is cool.

So you then propose your approach to how the Sith bring him in.

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lol Haven't decided anything just thinking aloud but thank you!

[Withdrawn] Garen Zi, Sith Apprentice, Teräs Käsi Master

@Ezekiel

Okay, thanks for the response. I'll change the status to WIP and give you a teg when I'm done, but I'm gonna address these real quick before changing the sheet:

1. That is a very good point. I didn't really think of themlike that. Sorta had the mindset of "they know how the force works, so they know the best why to fight Jedi" and not just "they know how the force works". Just sorta figured it was a young Anakin deal where he never actively used the force, so they didn't notice, focusing on the martial art.

2. If that seems too powerful, then you're probably right. Just really wanted to emphasize that he's probably up there with the strongest Teräs Käsi fighters. Like at least top 10. So I can change it to maybe the last 2-3 years he was the champion, but I just sorta show how he was always getting stronger, and when he hit the plateau for strength, he wanted to leave.

3. Okay two things about this one:

a. I didn't really know enough about the Sith Academy, so I didn't really wanna touch it.

b. I also really didn't want him to be, like... Taken against his will? I mean, he already sees the Jedi as evil, and I figured that if the Sith sort of trick him into thinking The Empire are the good guys, it would be more beneficial. I mean, he probably no doubt spent some time at the academy (for basic force understanding, then continued under his master), but I just don't believe that any Sith that witnesses his fighting potential and can sense his hatred for the Jedi, like, WOULDN'T try to trick him into coming of his own volition. Plus, I don't think there's anything wrong with a Sith Lord just picking up an apprentice. Unless I'm wrong and that's not a thing.

Also, I wasn't really sure how The Empire tracks force users, so I didn't really wanna touch that either. I mean, Tatooine isn't really a Sith world, so they'd have to be sending people out. And I mean, of course there's been Sith ON Tatooine, probably to meet with smugglers and bounty hunters or something, but this is probably just the first time one has seen Garen in a fight. I dunno. I could just be making excuses. Sorry.

Anyway, thanks for the feedback! I'll change my sheet when I can.

@Tim

Check out my Selene WIP CS.

Dark sider not officially with the Sith, but I have to plant seeds in the CS that the Sith will get their damn hands on her, because...it's the Sith Empire.

Taken against will can turn into really really fun games, and make Sith who aren't always so happy about the Empire's status quo.

Just a similar situation you might wanna check out.

[Approved] Khulbe Desilijic the Hutt - Crime Lord

Approved. Need one more GM now.

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Woah.

Wait.

Modding? Rp-ing? Site?

To vague, Rubes. To vague.

@HaleyTheRandom

All three.

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I'm really not sure how much longer I'll be doing this.

[Approved] Nima Tarkona - Class 1 Entertainment Slave

@Ezekiel Thank you for the feedback! I had the thoughts that the main city was in a mountain range which could provide cover, especially if the cave system ran deep enough. I can change it to the lower levels of Kala'uun if that would be more acceptable?

@Saix

That'd be fine.

[Approved] Jedi Knight Steila Yurel

I'm good with it. Approved.

[Approved] T'a Tarinai - Zelosian Mechanical Savant

Approved.