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@dragonmancer

Few things:
First, cards whose names are always treated as the same name as another card, regardless of what they are, will limit the number of cards with that name to 3. Examples are Polymerization and Fusion Substitute as well as Umi and A Legendary Ocean. So, you can't have more than a total of 3 Tyrant Dragon and Tyrant Dragon Overlord cards. I'm not actually sure about Supreme Dragon Tyrant on this regard since it's not in the Main Deck, but I would assume the same restriction applies. Perhaps have "This card's name becomes 'Tyrant Dragon' while it is on the field or in the Graveyard" instead if you really want to keep it the way you want it.

Second, Tail Spear of the Tyrant Dragon is a little awkward. You don't need to have the initial clause "This card is always treated as a Tyrant Dragon spell card" if the words "Tyrant Dragon" are already in its name. You also have "If you control no monsters" as a requirement, yet you allow "tributing dragon-type monsters from both your side of the field" in it. A useless effect there. You also don't need "you may unequip and destroy this card instead", just put "you can destroy this card instead" since it'll be unequipped automatically when it's destroyed, y'know? Heck, I'm not even sure that effect should be there at all, considering you already have 1000 ATK and piercing.

Third: Tyrant Dragon Overlord. You get to summon this card using monsters from your graveyard, and by doing so search out a card from your deck. Furthermore, it's immune to all traps. It's just a straight upgrade from the original Tyrant Dragon, and that's not exactly something you should want, nor would it even make sense to reduce the original Tyrant Dragon to being fusion material fodder. It should definitely be nerfed, or even altered to have a different effect from the original Tyrant Dragon and therefore giving both a good reason to be around.

Fourth: Supreme Dragon Tyrant. The "Dragon's Mirror" effect is rather unnecessary, so that should be removed, imo. The 3900 ATK seems too high to include a "gain 400 ATK" as well, and you already have Trap and Monster effect immunity on it. Why does it even have Monster effect immunity, anyway? Trap immunity is enough. At the very least, you should choose the 400 ATK increase or Trap immunity. It wouldn't be fair to have both.

Yu-Gi-Oh Soul R (Still Accepting)

If this is still open id be happy to make a Cs later today.

@dragonmancer

KO hasn't said anything about the status, and the apply status hasn't changed, so it should be fine.

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Hey, @Thecrash20, come by and drop an update. You haven't posted anything here in days.

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@KOgaming Also do you plan on making a post for Cooler? I think several people are in direct interaction with him so that'd help.

@Eklispe

Crash is responsible for Cooler, if I recall.

Mid/High Casual - Divinus: The Deity Roleplay Mk.II

Meanwhile I'm just working on my next post that has no relation to anyone else and that everyone will barely even read the summary.

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@Eklispe@The book of bad juju@Thecrash20

"Going into a battle with prior knowledge is definitely preferred over going without and responding after being affected," Carnel responded to Matt's earlier question. "It's even worse in the case of Kaijus." Before he could respond further, Aya began to explain on her own. Truth be told, Carnel only knew of the Kaijus by the traits they shared, but none of the actual monsters themselves, so seeing one of the cards was some good information to find.

Then, chaos ensued as someone who called himself Cooler interjected himself into the conversation, resulting in a small clash with Aya. Carnel raised both hands between everyone to try to keep the fight from escalating. "Now now, let's not have such hostility between ourselves already," Carnel said ever so politely. "There'll be plenty of time for that on the Duel field, after all." Turning to Cooler, Carnel's polite expression turned into one of confidence as he continued, "As for you, I hope your words are more than just bark, otherwise I'd be disappointed."

The Duel Tower: The first year students. (A Yu-Gi-Oh! Duel Academy Roleplay.) [Axed]

A lot of us have been busy in the collab involving the ante duel, so.... there's that.

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Yeah I'm working on it.

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It's just 2 hashtags on the internet, and not even that cringy. Perfectly fine to me.

Yu-Gi-Oh Soul R (Still Accepting)

Carnel was gaining quite a bit of valuable intel, and it'd be a shame not to take advantage of this opportunity. Carnel chuckled, amused, as everyone began discussing their decks. He would have to reveal a small amount of information about his deck as well if he was going to remain in the conversation for very long, but he would cross that bridge when he got to it.

"Well, everyone certainly seems to have some interesting decks," Carnel said, maintaining his polite smile. Turning to Aya, he noticed that she seemed to be in a glum mood as she examined her own deck. To liven up her mood, and perhaps gain some more valuable data, he said to her, "You run Kaijus, huh? That's quite a terrifying archetype there." Satisfied at the conversation starter he gave, Carnel now waited to see what she would say in return.