
TJByrum said
Here is my revised bio. I'm sorry for choosing Mos Eisley, Tattoine, but I wasn't sure what other planet to choose.: Vor Dane: Male: Human: 26: Mos Eisley, Tattoine: Jedi Knight: Vor Dane is a white human male with dark blue eyes, a brown stubble, shaved brown hair, and a scar that follows the contour of his right eye. (Picture soon, perhaps). Vor Dane also wears traditional Jedi robes in black[/img].: Vor is observant, calculative, and reserved. He is loyal to his allies, specifically the other Jedi, but has been known to be manipulative and seems to hold back secrets even from the Jedi Council. There's no real reason to distrust Vor, but his affinity to work alongside criminal organizations is something to be cautionary about.: Vor's tendency to work of the law often leads to distrust amongst those who decide to work within it, so while Vor counts the other Jedi amongst his allies he is not particularly fond of their company and suffers from trust issues with them. He's also more use to dealing with covert operations or fighting small amounts of enemies, so he's not particularly useful against large numbers of enemies. He's also more suited to defending blasters - NOT other lightsabers, and would make a poor duelist.: Like most Jedi, Vor knows Form I. However, Vor quickly adopted Form V: Shien, which focuses on defending blasters. This suited Vor since he was more accustomed to facing opponents using blaster weapons throughout the Outer Rim. While using Shien, he is known to utilize the reverse-grip more.: Vor wields a blue-hued lightsaber with a standard hilt, a personal blaster, a personal Holocron, and a wrist communicator.: Telekinesis, speed augmentation, Force stealth, Force cloak, Force listening, Force sense, Force sight, Telepathy, Mind tricks: Vor Dane was born on the planet of Tattooine. His parents were low-class humans who struggled to make a living on the desert planet. The two were eventually approached by a Jedi Master who offered to train him in the ways of the Force; they were initially reluctant, but decided it was better than let him suffer as they had. Vor Dane was very young when he was taken and barely remembers his parents. He spent his childhood at the Jedi Temple, and was known for his excursions to the library to study the criminal underworld.Vor had problems accepting the Jedi Code, but was able to compensate and agreed to abide by its law. After passing his trials he was assigned to be the Padawan of Jedi Master Quian Lune. Master Lune was known for his operations against the criminal underworld throughout the galaxy, dealing with smugglers, pirates, slavers, drug dealers, and assassins; Vor's knowledge of the underworld, acquired at the Jedi library, was expanded during his time with Master Lune.Vor took up his Master's form: Shien, which focused on the deflection of blaster bolts. Lune insisted he also focus on Djem So break the habit of using a reverse grip,, but Vor ignored his lectures and never quite evolved his fighting style. Soon after Vor became a Jedi Knight, Lune was assassinated by a bounty hunter. Vor was angry and wanted only vengeance, but he knew this was not the Jedi way. He retreated into the Outer Rim, distancing himself from the Jedi Council for a time.His exposure to the underworld led him to work alongside them throughout the Outer Rim: working as a 'mercenary' and taking down small gangs. Only a few of his associates actually knew he was a Jedi, while others believed him to be some sort of mercenary or bounty hunter. It was a fight at a cantina where he received his scar. During the Clone Wars the Jedi Council decided it best to keep Vor in the Outer Rim and report any Separatist activity, which eh willingly obeyed to. Vor felt 'at home' within the Outer Rim, working alongside his criminal contacts. This limited his exposure to Clone Troopers.In the waning years of the Clone Wars Vor was recalled back to Coruscant under direct orders of the Council. He makes his way there now in his own personal starfighter, but he is about to fly into a deadly trap...: Vor Dane is known throughout the criminal underworld of the galaxy, most specifically the Outer Rim. Some criminal organizations value him as a powerful ally, but more than a few of them see him as a threat to their organization. He can sometimes expect hospitality throughout the Outer Rim, while other times he will be met with harsh hostility.
TJByrum said
I'm seeking a suggestion for a homeworld that was in the Outer Rim ripe with criminal connections, as if it was controlled by the Hutts or something.Working on the revised bio as we speak.
TJByrum said
Plenty of individuals throughout the Star Wars Universe made crash landings and survived, specifically Anakin Skywalker.Also, may revise my bio later. I had two different ideas and they tried to form simultaneously in the bio, so I decided to keep the ideas split up; I';ll save the other ideas for another Jedi.
TJByrum said
Under construction:: Vor Dane: Male: Human: 29: : Jedi Knight:(Either an Image and/or a description. Keep the anime stuff to a minimum if possible.)http://i366.photobucket.com/albums/oo105/Jackk_15/GFX/Robes2.png: Vor is headstrong, determined, and relentless. His aggressive way of acting can be described as "fight now, talk later". He typically relies on instinct and impulse. He sees most everything in a black and white morality: you're either with him, or you're against him - there is no 'in-between'. However, those who can actually count Vor as an ally can expect massive amounts of loyalty from him, as he believes loyalty is the best trait a person can have, and will use his strengths to protect his friends to the death.: Vor's preference to react to most situations with a relentless, often aggressive way causes him to rush headlong into danger. He does not bother trying to determine an opponent's strengths or weaknesses, he simply rushes into the fray with the goal of victory. The more he fights, the more he ignores his defense, the more he loses focus on his surroundings, and the more danger he puts himself in.: Like most Jedi, Vor knows Form I. However, Vor quickly adopted Form V, which favored aggressiveness and domination - greatly suiting Vor's personality. His primary training in Form V was Shien (strong vs blasters), but his Master insisted he also focus on Djem So when possible. When Vor is using Shien, he is commonly seen utilized a reverse grip. If Vor becomes frustrated he resorts to using his personal blaster to finish off his opponents or gain an upper-hand.: Vor wields a blue-hued lightsaber with a standard hilt, a personal blaster, a personal Holocron, and a wrist communicator.: Telekinesis, speed augmentation, Force push, Force pull,:During the Clone Wars Vor Dane was mostly associated with the Outer Rim campaigns, where his contacts would provide him with useful intelligence. Vor was known to be an aggressive general, never hesitating to rush into battle and push the enemy back as quickly as possible or decimate them entirely. Vor's tactics, however, inflicted high casualties on his Clone Troopers. During the waning years of the war the Republic fixed this by stationing Vor on more defensive priorities, such as overseeing outposts.: Vor Dane is fluent in many languages used throughout the Outer Rim.
BKburke said
So what are we to determine? Cuz I was honestly hoping to be a republican commando. Unlike your average clone trooper, commandos had much more free will and some even refused "order 66" because of personal reasons. Not to mention they were skilled enough to fight alongside Jedi and after the clone wars, Vader used them to hunt down surviving Jedi.