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Good to know. I look forward to seeing what you've got cooking up. Remember to ask any questions you need to for clarity's sake.


Any naming conventions? Specifically for Lune's Shelf residents (where MC was born) and the Cascades (where his mom was from).
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not sure where everyone else stands


CS under construction.
On The Compromise


The Eternal Throne of Man is not the first time that mortals acted against Ihlo's design.

When Man was made, Ihlo bestowed upon them a mote of her divine strength in the form of magic. Naive to the influences of Aramais, Ihlo believed that Man would be capable of great things with this power, able to transcend their pitiable forms and flourish well into the future with the First Blessing. However, a nameless individual sought to manipulate this power for their own benefit, intent on drawing more and more magic into their being so as to rival the very gods themselves. Nachma-Sol, Knowledge Unending, foresaw this slight against his divine brethren and warned Ihlo of the mortal's machinations. The Mother of Creation lamented, and woefully ripped her divine might away from Man. The individual who sought to overthrow the gods was summarily excised, and Ihlo warned of the misuse of such power.

Nihalla put forth an alternative—to allow Man access to this thing they've deemed to be 'magic', but at a great cost. Those willing and intent to learn the complexities of magic and its uses must enter into a new contract called the Compromise. They must give something of themselves, something vital and important, something that would become unrecoverable—and in doing so, they would be granted the ability to learn magic. Their body would become a vessel of arcane power by the sheer offering of a piece of themselves, but to use magic was another arduous task entirely, only sped up by the offering of more of themselves. And so, the Compromise was born.

It is easy to discern those who are capable of magic, as there is always a piece of themselves missing, given freely to the gods in exchange for such a gift. No mortal can escape the contract and come away from the Compromise unscathed.


Out of curiosity, can someone enter into a contract for someone else's benefit? I. e., one person pays the price, the other gains the ability to learn magic.
Thinking about an Ylva from Lune's Shelf, a shepherd/caretaker with the magic of death sight who's sent out on a mission to seek lost/forgotten/abandoned remains in the world and ensure they're brought to the Saltlands. Maybe even to find corrupted lands and attempt to purify them (if such a thing is possible).
Oh, absolutely! Still have some left to read, but so far this is enthralling. Lovely work, and I enjoy it being told by the characters.
Moren



“Uhm-mm, hello?” A tinny voice called out from behind. Moren turned to see several more souls had appeared on the shore while she’d been busy.

A small group of ur-human spirits huddled in her vicinity while a few predators circled from farther away – they could detect her nature as Death, and were cautious of her. At a glance, she could tell how they had died: the child who spoke to her had drowned, the mother with her arm around her had dived in, while the father, uncles, and a cousin had their raft torn apart when they’d followed to retrieve their corpses. A pair of wolves had been caught in a landslide, a snake battered by a fallen branch, a bear trapped by quicksand. Farther away were spectral, green-tinged patches of grass, outgrowths of shrubbery, and copses of trees: trampled by escaping herds, choked by remnants of fire, felled by ur-human hands, uprooted in avalanches.

More would be coming. So many more. A veritable exodus of the lost would descend upon them – a shiver in her spine ascertained her of this.

She needed to act, and fast.

With a crafting of divine will, Moren spawned new entities into existence. They were small balls of immaterial flame, each its own colour, ranging from pale blue to gold to fiery red, and others. They felt inviting and warm to the dead, who would be compelled to follow, whereas the living would experience an unbearable cold if they encountered one on Ashuru.

“Go now.” At those words, the myriad flames dispersed. The ur-humans, noticing that each predator group followed one flame, eventually went after another leading in a different direction.

As for the goddess, she meant to witness the disaster she had felt the echo of.

When she emerged into Ashuru, volcanoes belched fire and smoke while rivers of lava eroded the surface as the newly unleashed energies threatened to rip apart the world from within. Wherever she looked, wherever she traveled, there were ever new, grander sights. The plane thrummed far below, brimming with energies capable of destroying it. It had been granted a heart – but would its body survive the implant? Veins of magma were threaded throughout, pumping that immense power into each corner and crevice. The earth rumbled in protest as its innards were consumed, tectonic plates forming as it was ripped apart by forces it could not oppose. Great fissures swallowed thousands of surface-bound species, and earthquakes claimed them by the hundreds. The skies were choked by smog, and the heavens wept black, poisonous rain. Birds fell from the skies, no safer than the critters upon the ground.

No one was safe.

It was magnificent. As terrifying as it was beautiful. Who knew ruin could be so glorious? Even as she mourned the countless deaths caused by the extinction-level event, Moren couldn’t help but admire how lively Ashuru now was. It groaned, it wept, it screamed – it thrashed in defiance, striving to keep whatever semblance of life it had. Through it, she experienced a facet of existence, the desperate attempt to cling to survival which was intimately known to mortals, yet nearly unfathomable to the gods.

So, this was what it was like to fear your end.

Moren tilted her head back, closed her eyes, and wept. For as much as she marveled at it, as much as she felt enlightened by it, all those pitiful mortals had been the one to pay the price. Gods played games, but it was hardly they who reaped the consequences, was it?

She felt a sensation akin a note playing within her mind, she focused on it. It was one of her Ethereal Flames alerting her, so she reached out to it. In her mind's eye, she caught glimpses of her Afterlife – the initial area was filling with spirits even as the ghost lights rushed to and fro to get them all sorted out.

The goddess sighed. Time to return then, and continue imbuing her realm with more anchors.

Even in that period of endless work, she popped back into Ashuru here and there. While the eruptions had calmed, the smoke had only thickened. Great clouds snaked above, filled with gray and black particles, while an ashen blanket had covered the surface below. It was quiet – sounds stolen away, a preternatural silence had enveloped Ashuru. Those fragments of life which still remained were secreted away, as if afraid their breaths would be snuffed out if they were heard.

Moren met countless dead and dying in that time.

One day, she was drifting across her realm, securing yet another anchor. A glance at the area after she was done – and a small form curled into a ball lied where there had been nothing before. Moren approached, calling out softly, “Welcome, little one.” She hovered a palm above its spectral shape; darker spots covered a lighter gray body. Its rounded ears twitched, its whiskers trembled. Then, it jumped up and away, appearing surprised it had been able to do so. Its pale, transparent green eyes looked this way and that, then it ran off. It dashed atop ghostly grass that had a definitive tinge of colour, past trees that were more plentiful now – all signs of the vast quantity of vegetation destroyed upon Ashuru, whose essence had leaked into her domain. A small smile played about her mouth as the phantasm of a cat disappeared into an immaterial forest, chasing after an ephemeral butterfly.

Perhaps…perhaps there was yet more she could do for her charges.

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Ethereal Flames/Will-o’-the-wisps: Immaterial balls of fire which does not burn. To the dead, it feels warm and inviting, whereas the living experience a deathly chill if they encounter one in Ashuru. Largely, the ghost lights are scattered across Moren’s Afterlife, acting as non-sentient managers of her realm. They are drawn to death, so will at times cross into Ashuru, gathering in areas where many have died – though a singular but ‘impactful’ death might also lure one in. They can ping Moren if something unexpected happens, and she can also choose to focus on one and get a brief distant view of the situation from their perspective.

Soul anchors: Adds more spawning points for the deceased were placed around the Afterlife.
Moren



Moren was in the company of the Hollow Tree when it all began.

A ring resounded in the goddess, not a sound, but a pressure, a voiceless cry originating from the world itself. It rolled through her being in waves, crashing against its core which wrenched from it a psychic pain unlike any other. It rang of destruction, of irreparable damage, and brought with it the scent of imminent ruin.

The world hadn’t truly begun yet, but it was already facing its doom.

But wasn’t that how it was? Life could be snuffed out at any given moment.

So, why did this feel wrong? As she understood it, one of her tasks was to oversee death. Would it not be right then to witness the end of their world?

Moren could only assume their creator had built in them a self-preservation mechanism. Or perhaps the gods sensed the world’s wish to continue via their innate connection with it. It was logical; without anything to rule over, what would they be? If they perished, what then?

She still believed it was natural that one day, all would end. But that ‘one day’ was not today. She hadn’t yet witnessed the world’s completion, had barely got a taste of its growth, development, and decay. There was so much more to experience – and only in life would there be death.

She journeyed through the lands, away from the Hallowed Tree. Its territory of peace and repose was one which she was proud of, but it was not where she was needed.

The seas were receding deep bellow, swallowed into her sibling’s precious domain. An odd choice on his part; just what did he mean to do with all that water?

Moren wasn’t concerned with that just then, however; far more imminent was the mass death of marine life. Bleached corals, stranded fish, desiccated mollusks, dried algae, beached whales…hectares of land which had been under sea were littered with such a variety of corpses, she could only marvel at the collection. With each of the beings dying, she felt that intangible essence pass – some into nothingness, others into her recently created realm. As they alighted into her dimension, a sensation akin to a light tingle brushed the back of her mind.

With the sheer number of deaths, it was a constant hum, spiking every so often.

Having seen enough, Moren shifted, traversing from the realm of the living to her realm of the dead with but a thought. Familiar black shores greeted her, but the seas were changed here, too. Oh, they still spanned their original expanse, but the previously darkened waters were now shining from within. From schools of tiny fish, to drifting jellyfish, to the larger shapes of dolphins, each of their essences had taken on shapes they’d been familiar with in life. They were not creatures of flesh, but of spirit and soul, so the colouration they had had had was more of a suggestion here; generally, they were motes of dull light gathered into a cohesive, individual form reminiscent of the one they had held.

The coast by the shore corresponding to the one where the gods had first appeared was so lit up, it could be seen from miles away. Moren realized she had unconsciously designated this as the spawning point, thus drawing most of the deceased souls nearby. Strangely, many a fish were flopping on the beach itself – they needed no water to exist, but the memory of their existence was so ingrained into their being, she watched them cease to be by the scores. Those who managed to move into the sea or who had spawned there were the depiction of pure chaos; bigger fish rent apart the essences of the smaller ones, squids ejected part of their spirits as a facsimile of ink, jellyfish evoked their memory-of-stringing to cause echoes-of-pain in their opponents, and so on. There was simply too large a gathering of essences in one small area to peacefully co-exist; though none were driven by hunger, they retained their territorial instincts as well as their drive to hunt.

Realizing her misstep, Moren sashayed into the lapping waves, and affected her godly powers to create temporary currents in the sea, sweeping away the essences every which way. Some were scattered into nothingness, ceasing to be, but most were simply dispersed far away enough that they wouldn’t shred each other in their confusion.

Now, this wasn’t a permanent solution, she knew.

So, she closed her eyes, extended her palms, and let her mind wander. It expanded outwards, along the metaphysical seafloor, and here and there, she created tiny ‘anchors’, areas where the essences of marine life would be drawn to in the Afterlife.

Moren had no idea how long she worked, and she stopped only when she was forced to; a haunted scream assaulted her mind as the world itself thrashed in the throes of death. She was nearly sent to her knees, water splashing around, as her awareness suddenly snapped into her godly manifestation, alerting her to yet another world-changing event.

Now what?
TBC...


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Creates miniature 'anchors' beneath the Afterlife's oceans; multiple areas where the essences of deceased marine life will be drawn to after crossing into her realm.
@SilverPaw Do it faster! I want some reincarnation fun to happen


Patience.
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Sirna's been wanting to check out Moren's Afterlife pocket dimension


Yah, same here for Moren and the dream world, I just had so much to catch up with for my last post :o Whenever I write next I should hopefully establish the Afterlfe a bit more...not to mention Moren has to do some proverbial home cleaning before guests come over!

@Eisenhorn Renard, @VitaVitaAR Rylia



“I don't know,” Eustace hedged. “Renard. Hound,” he tried the options, rolling them on his tongue. “I don’t think you’re supposed to give yourself your own nickname…How about Knight? Spike? Hm.” He didn’t sound convinced, but then, they were getting closer to the fort. Chatter sputtered out as the guttural sounds of goblin talk could be heard.

Past the walls, there was comparatively less clutter, and here and there, they could spot a goblin skulking around in the shadows. There were more bones now, a decoration or marker, the young man supposed. Renard took the initiative, launching an ambush before the enemy could notice. After one last glance at the group’s flanks and blind spots to confirm no goblin had wandered where they’d not be able to react to it, Eustace turned to the front.

Following the hundi’s actual knife throw, he mimicked throwing a knife himself. Instead of an actual weapon, an illusion of light was weaved, a blurry facsimile that wouldn’t stand up to a thorough inspection. But then – what goblin could possibly inspect a knife that was seemingly flying at it? The illusion was launched at the second goblin Renard attacked; the idea was to distract it, so the hundi could kill it without much fuss.

That done, Eustace released the strap where his buckler was tied to his hip with a swift motion, and took up the small shield in his left hand. He held it in his left hand, in front of his body, his rapier in his right ready to pierce at anything that came too close. His gaze darted here and there, studying his allies, enemies, and the situation at large. He always had to make decisions on the spot on when to cast a spell; he never had much time to ponder, yet mana was a limited resource. So, Eustace would do his best to predict and react as approapriate.
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