Solace

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Terrance is accepted; the Nomads are probably my favorite class. :D
Only question I have is that he is fighting for the rebellion against Cliace, correct?
Also, is there a better picture that you can find for him?

Aelia and Royce are also accepted.

Diamanda is accepted.

Thanks for going through the changes, Oblivion. Neela is accepted. :)

Looks like we have access to every weapon type except for Anima and dark but I think Innsert might be making a Shaman so that might be covered.
So this should is a good range for the start of RP.

@Bornlucky

Yeah, I have two characters coming up. One is a Soldier who is fairly basic to begin, and the other is a Laguz who is unable to transform due to stuff that happened in his very long and painful to write biography, so he is a Fighter in "Beorc" class.

Hopefully, I'll have their character sheets up by tomorrow or even tonight.

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I'll get a CS up the day after tomorrow. I won't be on all day tomorrow; I've got a fight to watch :)

@TheHangedMan

Pacquiao, man. Can't wait!

I'll be available at around 5PMish to check on things. I've got a baby to take care of. :o

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I'm not in the best condition to go through all of the current character sheets right now, but when I am, I'll do my best. From sifting through Lucky's CS, I think you're fine, but I'll go through it completely at after time.

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Can you provide some insight as to why or how you chose these classes/promotion trees/equipment choices? It's odd that youre using mostly class progressions from Path of Radiance and yet Sages cannot equip Daggers? And there seem to be no mention of Crossbows.

Furthermore, I think many of the Awakening classes add color and variety to the class list. In particular the Trickster, War Cleric, Griffon Rider, Dark Flier, and Dark Knight.

@Innsert

Classes such as the war cleric / priest (in particular) make no sense to me, as a healer isn't going to suddenly decide and start mashing skulls with axes. I'm not a fan of the Awakening classes, so they're not in my roleplay. Take it for what you will, but what I decide is what I decided. I might expand the class list in the future, but as of now I see no chance of it happening.

There is no particular reason for my class selection, other than me not wanting them in for balance/their absurdity.

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While trying to decide what class to make for a second character I noticed this rp focuses heavily on the class system from Path of Radiance though there are still differences. Below are class options that are not available in this role play that are available in other Fire Emblem games (English games only). It might be important to note these differences on the OP or to explain that this game is using the class system from what ever game you used.

Hider

Tactician, Conqueror, Dread Fighter, Bride.
Trickster, War Cleric, Griffon Rider, Dark Flier, Dark Knight.
Hunter, Ballisticians, Chameleon.
Vanguard, All Tier 3 Promotions (Radiant Dawn).
Summoner/Necromancer, Wyvern Knight
Manakete, Taguel.

Sword/Lance/Axe Knight cannot promote to Great Knight.
Priest/Cleric cannot Promote to Sage.
Shaman cannot promote to Sage.
Monk cannot promote to Sage.
Mage cannot promote to Mage Knight.
(None of the plethora of possible class promotions from Awakening or Shadow Dragon)

Nomad and Bow Knight are the same.

Sages cannot equip Dagger/Knife.
Dancer cannot equip Dagger/Knife or Sword.

@Innsert

The classes I chose for the list were the ones I would allow. The rest will not be allowed. I think people can read the list and discern this simply.

I mentioned before that third tier classes will work differently than normal, but it's too early to talk about it.

I personally request that everybody focus on making their characters and getting through that process.

My first character, a relatively simple fellow, is already completed. My second character is fairly complex in his biography, which is kind of long but provides a bit of insight on Estron + the Laguz situation.

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YOUR CHARACTER SHEET WAS HERE

I wasn't sure if we had to introduce how we were related to the current conflict/war. In any case I was figuring a Lord (probably one of the players) would have information about Daisy and would promise Daisy her land if she helped their cause. Idk. Just a thought.

@Innsert

I like your character, she has a very intriguing biography. Classic brotherly jealousy :^)

Though, the only conflicting aspect is the last bit of her biography, which ties into your question. I'm not entirely sure how she would necessarily fit in with the force trying to stop the rebellion.

Perhaps the province that her family, Rhegall, is amongst the separatist collection of southern provinces, and through the guise of trying to stop the rebellion, she could just be going to try and reclaim it?

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Species (if Laguz): Cat, her cat form is primarily light blond, but with a blue streak going down the back of her head and back, all the way to the tip of her tail.

@Oblivion666

Same as Twilight said before; with the inclusion of all species for Laguz, the "Leopard" species would be more fitting for the combative feline species, since a Caf in this sense would be like, the average housecat. It's just a matter of titling, really, no big problem here.

Personality:
To her fellow Laguz she can be seen being most nice and respectful to them. Being kind too all her Laguz brethren

To Beorcs now, she can become slightly aggressive. Having a hatred of them ever since she was a child(Or kitten if I want to use puns) Going such lengths as to rather dying than to be saved by one, even if she is being rescued by nothing more than an innocent child.

There has only been one Beorc that she DID trust and liked, but with him gone

Her hearing is pretty great, sometimes great enough that it even annoys her sometimes

Although their are ways to figure this out so its slightly useless, her sense of direction is top notch.

@Oblivion666

For every underline in the quote, I'll reply separately.

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I think it's the way that this is worded, but I am under the impression that, if rewritten, it is saying that Neela has such a dislike for Beorc that even if her life was endangered, she'd rather die than bludgeon her pride, even if it's a child saving her.

like*

I think it should be "pretty good" instead of pretty great.

there* and it's*

It's orimarily just the wording. I think her personality, as a Laguz, is standard and good enough; she'll definitely like one of my first two characters who shares almost the exact sentiments as she does.

Though, I do have a question: why is she aiming to volunteer for the Beorc's call to stop the rebellion who started their revolt because the Emperor declined allegations of endorsing the enslavement of Laguz in Cliace? Is she going to be against us, and something happens where she ends up joining us?

*biography here*

@Oblivion666

I'm actually kind of confused. So the person who acted as her guardian for however long just up and left after Neela defended herself? A number of Beorc may be racist towards the Laguz, but if he willingly looked after her, I don't think he was one of these Beorc, nor do I think he would just leave. He also seemed to have just left without making the observation that the man was armed, either.

I mean, I can accept your character, it's just that the biography was fairly.. strange. Like, things just happened spontaneously, almost as if it were solely for the sake of just happening so there would be a biography. I don't know, it's just not my cup of tea. It's nothing that would make me not accept it, though.

What is holding me back from doing so is the question from before: what is her involvement in Part I? The biography should lead up to the plot, but with how her personality is, it seems like she would be against us first.

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@solace "Travelling" is also correct and used quite a bit outside of the US.

@Jester Acharis

I personally prefer a single l, since it's the way I was always taught to write while growing up. I do know you can use two l's, it's just my OCD.

It seems I may have some more free time in this class, so I'll try to go through the next one.

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Time to begin the overview of character sheets.

I get down to the little details when it comes to it, like the spelling of words; this is because of my intense OCD / perfectionism. I request these changes to be made before I accept your character(s), or if I have any questions / issues, we discuss them before posting in the Characters tab.

I'll also, uh, comment on stuff that I like a lot.

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~Equipment~
Staff, Vulnerary x3

@TwilightDragon

Should be "Heal Staff" if that's what she has. Or "Mend Staff", and so forth.

~Appearance~
Her legs are long and toned from travelling on horseback

@TwilightDragon

traveling*

~Personality~
It is not uncommon to think that a Troubodour such as Aelia Theroux would have a sunny and upbeat personality, but she does not fit the common healer stereotype. She is brash and bitter and is not afraid of stating what's on her mind, no matter if people are likely to punch her in the face. When it comes to healing, her hands do not have the "tender touch" of other medics; she is rather rough with her patients and will often tell the ones who are making a fuss to be quiet.

Despite being a sour woman most of the time, Aelia is known to stress and fret over the people who she cares about. Unfortunately, the stress only makes her become aggressive, rash, and even more blunt than she was before. She is known to charge headlong into battle to rescue a fallen comrade without a moment of thought during these times of extreme anxiety.

Surprisingly, there are instances of some people approaching Aelia to seek advice. Due to being painfully truthful and not holding back in telling someone they're being "idiotic" or "stupid", she is known to be a good consultant.

@TwilightDragon

troubadour*

The issue that I have with this portion pertaining to her status as a healer, the magic associated with healing is considered holy and would technically require a kindred spirit to operate in order to be effective.

It's similar to how, in order to master the fell arts of dark magic, the chances of the individual not succumbing to the fell arts itself would be near impossible, if the principle of light magic/healing requiring some form of purity would be applied.

~Biography~
Ever since Aelia was a small girl, she was the prized possession of her father. Being a member of House Theroux, a minor Cliacian noble family known for its practioning in magic, her parents made sure that she was treated well by others. It was her father that taught her how to heal using staves while her mother showed her how to ride horses. She would become one of the many Troubadours that House Theroux raised as per tradition.

Her father left the household to fight in a war when she was only six years old.

*snip*

Unable to deal with living in the city any longer, Aelia left and moved north when she was twenty.

@TwilightDragon

practice*

The issue with your biography is that there has been no major war/conflict for a very, very long time, as mentioned in the first post. There have only been small disputes over land, which are just that; small disputes, that of which are not armed conflicts and end in brevity. Though this is a small detail, it seems to conflict with the entirety of your biography, so I'll leave it at that.

The biography should also detail up until the synopsis of the plot for Part I, where people are volunteering along with the army to stop the rebellion, and et citera.

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I actually only have time to do this one character sheet, but I'll see if I have time next block. If not, I'll be home in a few hours to continue working, but I guess you can say this is an example of how I analyze character sheets. :^)

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Is there room?

@Demous

Yup.

I'll check out character sheets later 'cause school.