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@Lo Pellegrino

As part of my character's history and equipment (I guess), she has an old doggo, this doggo is very important in her story - would this be okay or nah?
Potentially working on a female, early/mid 40s surgeon.

edit; more background/brainstormy
- a very accomplished career surgeon;
- very depressed, introvert type - perpetually gloomy but still doing her best to help people.
with @Spoopy Scary

17th Suns Dawn,
Aboard the Kismet, Daggerfall





Dro’Sintaba had been enjoying the gentle swaying of the Kismet on the waves. A closed fist held his chin up, and his other hand held a distance away from his face a weathered looking book, not too big of a tome, perhaps a collection of poetry or short story. He was concentrating on the words from behind his bespoke spectacles. The spine was cracked, and he held it mid-way through the pages.

A long sigh left his nostrils, and his tail flicked at the sound of a distorted voice. It was not the time to be annoyed by it, he was sitting on a boat after all, in the open. He’d wanted a quiet moment but they couldn’t always be afforded in public places. His mouth quirked slightly at the gentleman’s words. “If I was on a honeymoon, do you think I would be out here with a book?”
The Cathay-raht asked with a careful measure of humour, bending the page back, and placing the book away into the folds of his jacket. Next off was the glasses, and he squinted his eyes before re-opening them, turning his head to the owner of the voice. A Dunmer. A rather modest looking fellow too, thin and covered in his threadbare clothing, the warm hues setting off the rich crimson of his eyes nicely. Modest, but clearly knows how to dress himself, and most likely more than that… Dro’Sintaba’s eyes narrowed with curiosity.

“Business trip. We’ll go with that,” the khajiit concluded, eyeing up the Dunmer still. “What about you then? A holiday away from the politics of Daggerfall is it?”

“Quite bold to pry into my affairs after hiding your own.” Garil chirped without much admonishment or subtlety, craning his neck forward and invading Dro’Sintaba’s personal space as he deliberately avoided the inquiry. The stranger was tight lipped, and yet was quick to question Garil’s own motives. It was like staring into silvered glass, so he couldn’t bear to criticize the khajiit’s conduct without criticizing his own, but he could safely call him out without repercussion -- after all, he had asked first. Fidgeting with the red shawl that was draped over his shoulders and shirtless body, shielding his pecs from the cool ocean breeze, he continued, “But let’s suppose you were on a business trip, I wonder still what you would be doing with a book. What awaits you in Cyrodiil, friend? A scandalous affair? Don’t you worry, us dunmer tend to be a promiscuous sort ourselves…”

“Can’t a man enjoy a hobby?” Dro’Sintaba retorted, closing his eyes and making a mental note to look around next time before sitting for a moment of quiet contemplation. “Nothing waits in Cyrodiil except the other half of a payment for a job.” He hoped that would satisfy the Dunmer’s curiosity enough - and he was certainly not about to entertain the idea of anything seedy, as he had tried to suggest. It seemed to satisfy the Dunmer enough as he nodded and withdrew his head.

“What are you planning in Cyrodiil then?” he asked after a pregnant pause, his tone flat as he cast a sidelong glance at the man. “Don’t tell me, you’re going to find yourself a harem perhaps?…”

“That’s one possibility.” Garil answered as he reached his hand into a pouch of nuts and seeds, acquiring a small handful before pouring them into his mouth. Then he proceeded without much consideration, “Mmf, Sheer-o-dill ish phull of wonderth, sho thereth pwenty to shee ofer d’ere, ah’m shure.”

A quick swallow of half the food in his mouth he added with barely any clarification, “Old Ayleid ruins, swaying grain of the Gold Coast, the White-Gold Tower-- they must be beautiful sights. What do you think of that?”

Dro’Sintaba openly curled a lip at the sound of the Dunmer’s chewing in his ear, and he rolled a shoulder in response. “I’ve seen them before. They do have a beauty about them if you like that. Maybe I’ll head to the Gold Coast,” he offered with a shrug. The truth of it was, he hadn’t paid much thought to further plans once he arrived there. Just his payment, really. High Rock had been interesting enough of course but he’d long grown impatient of it. “Perhaps I’ll cross over to Hammerfell, who knows, really…” Dro’Sintaba certainly didn’t.

“Been a while since I was in the company of a Dunmer,” he added with a sigh, it was an attempt at being friendly, even if the rumble of his words in his throat felt more accusatory when they left his mouth. “Do you have a name?”

“Garil,” the Dunmer answered with a dismissive wave of his hand, as if to downplay the significance of his answer, “but I’m not like a lot of Dunmer. I’m what you’d call a n’wah -- I don’t come from Morrowind, but by Oblivion, I can hardly say I come from anywhere. Truly, I suppose you could call me a child of the road and stars for they are what have guided me all this time. I’m a farmhand by trade, and you, sera? Your manner’s quite unlike your kin, so could it be you’re quite like me? Outrunning your ghosts, going where the wind takes you, and finding work along the way? To be so old for a cat and to wear so many stories on scar-sprinkled skin, surely, there’s one or two of them worth telling!”

Garil twisted his neck around, left and right, prompting a string of popping sounds to crack from his neck, before taking a long, deep breath. He swept a long glance across the sea before it landed on Dro’Sintaba and added, “I hope to hear a few of them before this voyage is over. I smell a storm coming. It’d be a shame to see you done in by a spattering of water, khajiit, there’d be something ironic about that.”

Dro’Sintaba didn’t appreciate the suggestion of drowning - or the level of humour in his voice as he spoke, he raised a brow in suspicion and in a way, disbelief. “You talk a lot, don’t you?” he asked with yet another sigh. “And you’re nosy.” He held a breath for a moment, meaning no offense - it was just a correct observation, and he was quite often just a man of few words. It seemed that Garil had more than enough to make up for it. He was slightly poetic in his speech too, and in a way Dro’Sintaba was envious of that quality.

“Indeed.” Garil replied with a toothy grin.

“My name is Dro’Sintaba,” he said, pre-empting the Dunmer’s next question or curiosity; “I'm a travelling mercenary. Have been for many years, trying to retire. Maybe this is my last job but I can’t seem to stop.” His tail flicked at his own admission, he tried to keep his cards close to his chest but at the same time, he was old enough to realise that the truest facts of a person were not always worth hiding, and that his life wasn’t that interesting. “If you like talking, you should meet my companion, she’ll have your ear off.”

“Is that so?” Garil chirped before unraveling his foot from the dockstay and stood atop the rail. He clutched one of the backstays for support and, smiling wryly, looked down at the khajiit. He would still probably stand only at an equal height if Dro’Sintaba decided to do so as well. “Well then, that makes me a lucky mer! My apologies, sera. I might be nosy, but I’m not daft. I’ll leave you to your peace. Hopefully soon you are willing to share your stories, and in turn, I, mine. Over supper, friend?”

As the ship swayed on the water, the dunmer swayed with it along the railing’s edge, kicking out a foot to balance himself while his back hovered over the water, and by pulling on the mainstay was he able to right himself before hopping off and landing on the main deck. His bare feet slapped against the woodwork, and he slipped them into a simple pair of sandals before walking backwards away from Dro’Sintaba.

“If you know anyone in need of a private room, send them to me! I find the still air stifling and the beds uncomfortable, but I’m sure there’s someone who enjoys that sort of thing.”

The khajiit sighed again, closing his eyes. He'd been a rude git, again, hadn't he? It felt too late to change the Dunmer's mind about their conversation, not that he really had much to talk about anyway. He felt an embarrassment sitting on his chest over the whole thing. Maybe later he'd approach the gentleman and try to make up for his social faux pas. But Dro'Sintaba knew already that he wouldn't. Supper would involve him sitting as far away from the din of idle small talk as he could.

This was going to be a long, long voyage. "Fucking hell," he growled under his breath, admonishing himself.
Rorikstead I


18th Sun’s Height, Evening
On the road to Rorikstead…





Their days of the road had so far felt long. They only had each other for company, and there were stretches of absolute silence, and then hours of conversation. Sleeping was hard. They had agreed to take it in turns, but Fjolte let Raelynn sleep while he sat and kept vigil over her. She needed it more than he did, and so he found time to sleep on Lady’s back here and there while Raelynn walked her. It was exhausting, but they both knew that Rorikstead was close by. It was exhausting, but it was temporary exhaustion.

It was the crisp air of the province that kept them both refreshed too, that air that swept down over the peaks of the mountains, carrying with it serenity and the comfort of familiarity to those accustomed to Skyrim and its harshness. To Raelynn and Fjolte both, that wind was warmer than anything they could have found in the desert sands of the Alik’r.

This evening was not one of those instances where silence would be found. The closer they came to Rorikstead, the more Fjolte deigned it appropriate to be jovial -- in ignorance of Raelynn’s pain perhaps, or just in his own unbridled elation. Home was on the horizon.

“You’ll be our guest of honour you know,” he said, smiling at the side of his mouth - the other side filled with a large mouthful of a fresh apple, taken from a tree earlier that day. “Yeah! My good friend Raelynn, healer and hero!” he laughed, swallowing down the fruit, savouring the sweet taste.

“I’m no hero,” she said quietly. It was always the evening, just after sunset that it hit her hardest. Their hours were always the late ones. Midnight blue and hearthfires, dry red wine. Together, they were invincibly passionate by moonlight. Where had those flames gone?

Fjolte scoffed, damn near choking on another bite. “Don’ be foo’ish,” he spoke through his food. “You sewed Mazrah’s arm back together with magic, tore Finnen out of the arms of death himself. That’s the work of a hero if I’ve ever heard of it.” He then glanced up at her, and was relieved to see that it had brought a semblance of a smile to her face, but it hadn’t lit the fire in her eyes. He didn't succeeded there yet, but he’d keep going until he did. It would only take one spark…

Raelynn listened both to Fjolte’s voice and the breeze as it ran across the path, sprawling rugged mountains to the side of them, and forest to the other. Birds sat in their trees watching them move past. “If I’m a hero, so are you. I heard you punched an arm clean off one of those machines. That’s real hero behaviour, hmm?” the Breton mused, watching the last of the sun sink into the horizon.

That only made Fjolte laugh, it was true of course - he had helped to bring down the machines, in a theatrical way too - but he disagreed with his friend on that. “I don’t believe it, anyone with strength and muscle can fight a beast that fights them. Real heroics come from choices we make day by day, things we do for others, intent behind what we do.” He gave a relaxed shrug of his shoulders, moving ever forwards on the road - and those very words sat with Raelynn.

Everything that Raelynn had done had been for the good of the party -- requesting Gregor to kill Zaveed, their attempt to assassinate Razlinc Rourken. Even hiding his true nature, had been to protect them just as much as it had been to protect she and Gregor. The party had been left fractured since the revelation, and that was only because he’d ascended to his Undeath, the very thing she had begged him not to do. Every which way that she looked at it, from every angle she turned and probed at her choices - they were always with good intent. Behind her was a string of failures, one right after the other, that all led them to the circle and trial in the Alik’r.

If only she had done better. If only she hadn’t accompanied Fjolte in the prison, Gregor would have been under her control - he may never have revealed himself… ”I should have been at your side,” she told herself - or him. He couldn’t hear her thoughts, not from this distance. ”Or I should never have stolen you from your own path… I should never have stepped onto it. Where would I be, Gregor? Where would I be without you?”

Raelynn thought of the room that Zaveed had kept her in, that he had told her she’d bleed out and die there. Without Gregor, and without the confidence he gave her to stand up and deny Zaveed anything - would she have died there?

Then, where would Gregor be without her? Would he have collected the soul of N’Blec without her there to give him confidence? He would never have been attacked and left for dead… Without what they had, he would have no need to chase down a Khajiit to avenge the death of some woman in their party. Would any of them have avenged her? If she had not of died, would she have left Gilane with her father and returned to High Rock without… Without everything she’d gained from the ashes of loss?

Without Zaveed, would she feel so strongly for Finnen? He had become like a brother to her. She pictured him again, in all of his broken forms, every time he was broken she only saw his beauty, his eyes. Oh his eyes…. If eyes were the window to the soul, she knew from his he was a good and strong man.

Daro’Vasora. Her dear friend. Someone who saw the good in her just as Raelynn had seen it in Finnen. ”Daro’Vasora, I abandoned you. I left you when you needed me more than ever… You believed in me and I abandoned you…” She turned her eyes heavensward. Blinking back tears at the clouds above. Would her friend understand her choices?

“But yeah, that’s just what I believe, Blondie. Enough about that, and more about home. Tomorrow we’ll make the Dhjarikson hog roast!” Fjolte exclaimed, it was enough to pull Raelynn away from her thoughts.

She’d learned so much about her Nord companion in the two days. The most surprising of those things, was that he was something of a handy chef and forager. It made sense, Fjolte lived his life on the road for the most part - he was bound to have picked it up. The night before, he’d made a meal out of a wild hare that could have been served at a High Rock banquet. Raelynn did wonder if it was just the absolute hunger that made it taste that good, he clearly loved and respected food. He could teach Brynja a thing or two about providing meals on the road, that thought made her smirk. Raelynn decided that the two Nord’s would get on well with each other.

“I’ve heard a lot about this since you joined us Fjolte, I hope it lives up to my expectations…” she teased, her eyes remained on the road but that same smirk quirked at her lips.

“Oh aye it will,” he answered back, a hand steady on Lady’s shoulder as he walked the path. “I salt it, score it, season it…” his voice trailed off as he closed his eyes and kept on. All he could think about was walking through the threshold of his home, seeing his mother, sister, and nieces there. He hoped his arms were strong enough to hold a niece on each, he didn’t know how big they’d be by now. They were getting so close. “The best bit is the skin though, the way that it crisps up over the top, with the rendered fat underneath. Some of it gets charred but that’s even better… And the smell, oh the smell! You’ve never smelled anything til you’ve smelled my pig, kissed and caressed by fire!” he said, glancing at her again even if she wasn’t watching him. He found himself lifting his chin to take a deep sniff of the air around him, and since he’d conjured the image of it in his mind, it was as though he could smell it for real. “You’ll love it Raelynn, you really will…”

For a while, nothing else was said - it was just the quiet sounds of Lady’s hooves and Fjolte’s feet on dirt. The Nord could sense a change in the atmosphere soon, the telltale sign that rain was coming. Maybe thunder too, but they’d be home soon - possibly even in time to miss the storm completely. Even if his impatience grew, it probably wasn’t good form to have Lady speed up and jostle Raelynn along the rest of the way. Nor was his next bright idea…

“Do you miss him?” he asked rather frankly, tossing the finished apple away.

Raelynn’s eyebrows furrowed and she clenched her fists. It had been unspoken, but his shadow had nonetheless hovered over them anyway. “Yes.” Was all that she said in response, feeling the darkness of approaching evening creep in when he came to her mind again.

Fjolte felt awkward for it, but he knew she needed to address it sooner or later. It wasn’t healthy to bottle things like that, at least that’s what he believed. “You’re doing the right thing, he’ll understand that…” he sighed.

“I know…” She breathed, going to reach at her chest but finding nothing. She’d left him her flowers, but hadn’t taken anything of his as a keepsake of her own. Just memories, and even they were blurred. So much had happened to them both that she couldn’t even picture his face. Not as it really was, or used to be. Now she could only imagine the lights of his eyes behind the steel prison. “They’ll all understand one day, when this is all over.”

As they neared Rorikstead, the road became lined with scorch marks, and there was a light smell of burning in the air, being traced across the landscape in the wind. A fog had appeared, and the Breton knew it was too early in the year for snow or hail… But she was still taken aback to feel something touch her cheek. She brought her finger to touch it, rubbing at what she thought was a droplet of snow, or rain. As she observed her finger, she could see a smudge of grey...

She squinted ahead, the growing dark obscuring much of her view until she looked down at the ground.

A pair of shoes, child sized. Just a marker on the road now in a dry circle of blood, ground cracked beneath. Raelynn held tightly to Lady’s reins, stopping the loyal mare in her tracks. She couldn’t move her gaze from the shoes - and she instinctively placed a hand tenderly against her own stomach. Just a pair of empty shoes.

There was a bitter breeze dancing through the canopy of the trees that howled, as if in mourning down below at the Breton and Nord. Fjolte saw the shoes too, his reaction was not as silent as Raelynn’s; “fuck,” he said sharply as his heart began to race in his chest, his entire body froze and tensed like it had never before. Lady dragged a hoof across the dirt of the road, her tail swished from left to right. She was keen to move forward, but waited for one of them to tell her. “Fjolte…” Raelynn said, reaching out to touch his shoulder.

Rorikstead was in their vision.

What remained of Rorikstead was in their vision.

The rock formations that surrounded the town had not saved them from whatever had been through, barns and houses lay on the ground. Some wooden beams and foundations still standing, threatened by the wind to collapse and bring down what was left of the roofs. The walls had been taken by fire. The interiors had been engulfed by flame. And the people...

Fjolte couldn’t have moved fast enough, the lines of scenery around him became blurred and his breath failed him as he sprinted only to collapse in the centre of what was once Rorikstead. It was now just ash drifting through smoke. In his eyeline, a pile of corpses, blackened husks of people - identities long burnt down but there were plenty of them. Bodies torn at and shredded by animals that had passed through since.

Raelynn dared not move, Lady fidgeted and fussed beneath her for the first time. Fjolte’s distress had taken control of the mare too and she nickered and whinied. There was nothing the Breton could do as she watched Fjolte desperately work through the bodies. Prying them from each other, hot tears stinging his cheeks in between gasping screams.

The rain came soon after, heavy. Streaking lines of silver that distorted her vision and soaked her through within seconds. Thunder turned the sky over above them, tumbling across the landscape in a growl, the clouds thick and dense with rain. What remained of Rorikstead began to succumb to it, the dirt quickly becoming a pool of thick mud. On his knees, Fjolte sank into it. His own town consuming him into the dark.

Fjolte could not speak his words. His iron stomach betrayed him when he met the scent. The sound of a throat blocked by vomit, desperately trying to find the air to fuel cries of hoarse anguish and loud, choked sobs. It was the most disturbing sound that Raelynn had ever heard.

Hope was lost.


You’re It


@Leidenschaft & @Stormflyx




The party had long died down - while their energy was abundant, even Nords had their limits it seemed. The fire, too, was dying down to its embers, and people had either taken themselves to quieter spots to stargaze and share conversation, or taken themselves to bed. The only music to be heard now was a chorus of cicadas and crickets chirping, and a light breeze that ran through the long grass on the outskirts of Falkreath. Somewhere, wolves also sang out to the moon that was watching down upon them all, like a giant pearl suspended in the sky on a string of stars.

Ivy, the acrobatic Dunmer, was once again weaving through the people as they meandered away to wherever they were going. Flat on one hand was a platter of food. In Falkreath, septims had little value to her than they would have if they were not in the middle of a war, so in place of coins, Ivy had grown used to receiving food as gifts for her trade. Tonight’s platter was rather special. Berries, bread, cakes, and a skewer of grilled chicken which she was very much looking forward to enjoying. She balanced the platter well, while her other hand was reached around to her back, tugging at a hanging piece of fabric, her bandeau was unravelling from underneath her leotard. She pinched at it, trying to wind it around her finger - all the while, balancing the tray and trying to avoid the stumbling drunks.

As she dotted through the square, she thought of Daro’Vasora and her party. The new arrivals had really seemed to have enjoyed themselves for the most part, but still the woman couldn’t help but feel that beneath the smiles they had managed to find, melancholy still sat below the surface. They were certainly a special bunch of adventurers, that was for sure. Maybe even the ones she had been waiting for, but she’d been waiting for such a long time now and while mostly endearing, there were some… issues within the group too.

Her mouth pulled to the side as she finally got a grip on the fabric, only to be nudged out of the way by an Imperial woman - and not by the woman herself, but by the round metal shield that was strapped to her back. It thunked into her tray and before she could tear her arm from her back, instinct had kicked in (literally), and she raised a leg swiftly to catch the lip of the plate on her toes, remaking perfectly balanced despite being in something of a knot. The woman, of course, just carried on her way. Ivy had not managed to save everything, despite her best efforts a sweetroll did in fact fall from the tray and started on its way rolling across the ground, the stickiness of it’s icing did nothing but pick up dirt as it went. She muttered something in her native tongue, watching the useless treat escape her…

The toe of a boot stopped its advance. Up and up her eyes went until they met Sevari’s own. He regarded the sweetroll by his foot before his eyes went to Ivy’s. He gave a small smirk, apologetic, “We’ll have to get you a new one.” He said, before he offered her one of the cups in his hand, “Until then, I hope this is worthy of you.”

"They're not my favourite anyway," she said with a sigh of resignation before a smile returned at the sight of the stranger she had made her way to more than once. "I thought you might have disappeared away to bed by now, you and your companions must be exhausted, no?" Ivy asked with a twinkle of mischief in her eye. She had a firm hold of the plate again, and so she let her leg fall back to where it was meant to be, and she released the troublesome fabric so that she could take the cup from him. "If it's liquid, I'll take - don't think I caught your name though…?" She added, turning the intonation into that of a curious question as opposed to a statement.

“Sevari.” He smiled, which for him was but a mischievous uptick of a lip’s corner, “Ivy, is it?”

"Sevari," Ivy repeated, rolling the r at the end. "And yes. Ivy." She would have offered a hand to shake, but they were both full and since Sevari was only part gentleman she supposed he wouldn't mind. The Dunmer took a step forward to carry on walking in the direction she had been headed. "Walk with me?"

“Of course.” Sevari smiled, tipping his head. As they walked, Sevari spoke, “I’ve been here once before. Would you believe me if I told you why?”

He had piqued her interest, and she narrowed her eyes in thought at his question, "I think I would, but you have to tell me first."

Sevari stopped in his tracks, holding her gaze. In the moonlight she had a beauty about her, and he caught himself staring before he remembered he had something to say. He felt young again, like the tempestuous flings of his past had revisited again. He leaned in close, beckoning for her ear to share in the conspiracy, “An urgent mission for the Empire. Hunt down the Dark Brotherhood.” He said, “It was the height of the war. I needed hide my identity everywhere I went, because my mission was so veiled in secrecy. Its importance perhaps more dire even than the Civil War.”

He held her gaze, leaning back and offering a small laugh, “I kid, I kid.” He said, “Me? An Agent of the Mede Empire?”

“You, though. You are such an impressive person to be in the presence of. There’s so much history in every bit of you and it coalesces into such a rich and storied woman.” He gave her a small smile as they walked, “Tell me one? A tale? Perhaps the one that brought you here.”

His staring did not go unnoticed by the Dunmer and she took a quick step to his side, tipping the brim of his hat again over his eyes before she continued forward. “Watch yourself there, Tiger. You’re going to lose your eyes again…” she cooed at him with a giggle. “You flatter me though, so why would I interrupt you letting me know how special I am to tell the tale of how I found myself here?” Ivy turned on her heel to face him again, tilting her head as she took in the sight of him. She enjoyed how different he was. He had the look of a man who had carried the weight of the world on his shoulders. She stole a glance at his smile and wondered how long it had been since he had really allowed himself to be carefree.

“But alright, I’ll indulge you…” she began with a twinkle in her eye. “Would you believe me if I told you I was sent a dream from something higher than us? A dream that was vivid enough that I followed the stars and wound up here?”

Sevari chuckled. He looked her over, his smirk still remaining even after the chuckle faded. The way she looked, the way she carried herself, spoke, moved, everything… “I could.” He nodded, “You have a look unlike anything I’ve seen. What was it? The vision? You give me more things to be curious about with you every time we speak.”

"Oh I can't tell an Agent of the Mede Empire that!" She chuckled, winking at him before she slowly lowered herself down onto her knees, not daring to break eye contact. The plate of food still resting on an open palm. Her bottom followed until it met the grass, and the plate found its way to the ground in front of her. She patted the place beside it expectantly, for him to follow. "And you can speak for yourself about my look," she purred quietly as she flagrantly eyed him up from toe to tip.

His grin widened a hair as he too sat, and his eyes held hers in turn. He placed a hand to his chest, “Would it loosen your tongue if I told you I was not here on business?” He said, before adding, “Just pleasure. A small vacation from the humdrum of protecting the Empire and all its citizens.”

He allowed himself a wry chuckle, “And now there is a real imbalance of what you know of me opposite what I known of you.” He held his hands up, “No spying. Just an observation of things.”

"Something tells me you're all business and have been for a while Sevari," she remarked, "just an observation…"

Ivy sighed and looked upwards to the canopy of stars and let herself lower further so that she was lying on her side, her head resting in her hand, propped up by her elbow. "But alright, I dreamed of green lights - and then more recently of a group of people who would make them go away. I've been waiting for those heroes here… have I satisfied you with that?" She asked in a coy tone, being playfully selective of her words.

“Did you get a feeling they might be here now? Because I’ve already died twice, I don’t know if I’ve got another in me.” Sevari smirked. He sighed, then, as if Ivy had seen through him to the man underneath. The one who made a life of killing and lying. “What do you know of my life then, Seer?”

“I think I do,” Ivy’s brow sloped down, as she was momentarily brought to the reality outside of the excitement. She pondered on it for a moment or two, before turning back to Sevari with another smile, her eyes fixed onto his as if she was looking deep into him. “I think you’re a man of depth. I think you put others before yourself. I think it’s been a long time since you just shed all of the weight and let go…”

“There’s a lot of weight,” Sevari gave a rueful grin and a chuckle, “Always thought it was meant to be there. Now that I’m talking to a Seer, I don’t know. I’m never as sure as someone as sure as a Seer.”

He glanced to the side, looking at Ivy after a spell, “I’m a man of depth? What do you see in them?” He asked, shifting where he sat and crossing his legs, clasping his hands at his bent knees, he asked more mischievously, “How will you make me let go?”

Ivy shifted too. Occasionally unsure of whether someone was mocking her, or believing her. She wasn’t without her own insecurities after all, even after all these years. She brought her hands together and her fingers interlaced as she thought on Sevari’s words. “It doesn’t matter what I see. It matters what you see in yourself, foremost and first.” The Dunmer sat quietly for a moment, a small smile playing on her lips. “Do you want to let go? I can’t make you do anything – I’m not that powerful…”

Sevari’s smirk grew a little wider, “What if I’m willing to let you be?”

In truth, he wasn’t keen on turning his eyes inward. It was never a place meant to be observed until he was forced to in dreams or quiet moments. And he avoided those as often as possible, lonely mountain passes in the misty crags of his mind he dared not go. “Teach me.”

Ivy let his words work through before so did anything else, truthfully she was thinking of ways to help him shed his weight – the layers. Then it hit her, it was obvious, wasn’t it? She thought of caterpillars that wrapped themselves up into shells – only to literally shed them and become something new. She smirked, taking a strawberry from the plate. She bit down into it halfway, letting the taste savour. “There is a game… Maybe you played it once,” she said quietly and playfully, stealing a glance at him from the corner of her eye. “A game of tag, only tonight I think I can make it more exciting…” Something devilish flickered over her orbs, and she finished the last of the strawberry – watching him closely as her lips touched the fruit.

“I propose a rule. If I catch you and tag you, you must remove something that you wear… If you catch me and tag me, I’ll do the same.” Ivy smirked again, running her hands over the shawl she was wearing that sat over her only other garment – the leotard. “The odds favour you in this game…”

His face changed to surprise, then curiosity, then a devilish thing. He chuckled, “I like this. I’ll warn you though, I’m quick.”

“And I’m hard to catch,” Ivy teased, getting herself to her feet. “But seeing as you’re soooooo fast…” that was the beginning of another idea. There was a dash of trouble in her husky voice, and her narrowed eyes meant that she was absolutely up to something. “I should have a head start… You stay put…” The Dunmer wagged a finger down at him as she rocked on her legs.

She didn’t run at her countdown; “ten…” She turned away from Sevari, and bent down to place her hands on the ground. “Nine…” Ivy leaned further forwards, completely aware of what she was doing. “Eight…” She stood back up, but not before taking a hold of her ankle. “Seven…” she sighed, raising her leg into the air in a stretch. “Just limbering up for a run… Six…” she giggled. She couldn’t see his face, but that was part of the fun, for her anyway. “Five…” She did the same with the opposite leg on four and three. “Two…”

Then she ran off--

Sevari was left sitting on his ass, memories of hers persisting even after it had gone. When he realized she was suddenly nowhere to be seen he shook himself from his boyish stupor and chided himself at his inability to keep his head level when it mattered. “Shit…” he grunted to his feet and looked around himself, finding only forest dark enough even to thwart his feline night vision after a few paces away. “Shit.”

He decided he’d walk, picking no particular direction and instead of focusing on finding her, would rely on his other senses. He closed his eyes, listening for footsteps or breathing. His own breaths came in through his nostrils and he sniffed at the air, searching for perfumes or any smell that seemed out of place in nature. “Wherever did you go…” he smirked, now amused by the stakes and the challenge. He’d let her come to him, at least then he’d know which direction to evade her, “I can smell you.” He lied, hoping to draw her out.

Sevari would have found himself under a tree, and in that tree was Ivy, just low enough to hang down and tap his shoulder with a light touch. "Boo…" She giggled and flipped out of his way. She would dance circles around him if she had to. "Off with something," she purred, taking slow steps away from him, his figure in the moonlight was hard to turn away from after all. "The hat doesn't count either…"

His fingers retreated from the brim as he swore under his breath. How could he not have seen her. Immediately, his eyes factored in the tree branches, every shape in them seemed to be her. He smirked, deciding on good humor instead of fretting about a loss. After all, what was there to really lose?

“Oh, I hope I don’t have to wander around naked.” He chuckled as he removed his coat and hung it from a branch, “However will I cope with baring my Gods given gift to the world, to the world.”
She giggled off into the night. Ivy had expected Sevari to enjoy himself, and to loosen up but she hadn't really been anticipating it to be something that she enjoyed in the same way. Of course, there was excitement… She hadn't really had opportunity for simple pleasures since she'd been in Falkreath. Her heart skipped a beat at the thought, just like the Ohmes-Raht, she wasn't immune to charm. "Oh Sevariiiiiiiiiii," she sang out - looking around for him again - ready to see him without an article of clothing. Ready to pounce yet again should he get to her first.
Aha! With a quick movement, she pushed herself over into a cartwheel and it was when her feet touched the ground and she came back up, that she this time slapped a hand against his buttocks. There was sadly no time to give it a squeeze. She was off again.

“Damn!” Sevari was already sans jacket and now he worked at the buttons of his shirt. As much fun as this was, he mentally chided himself. Had he grown this rusty? “I’m going to get you, you know that?”

In truth, he needed to hear it from himself to believe it. He stalked through the woods, again taking this seriously. If Bosmer rebels and even Kilvayne One-Eye couldn’t get him in their own damned jungles, this Dunmer wouldn’t be the first. He took a breath, steadying his senses. He crouched close to the deep roots of an old tree, closing his eyes and listening to everything around him.

It was when he heard a rustling that his ears perked. His eyes shot open and he snapped his head in the direction it came from like a hawk. A hint of movement between the trees. He listened further and when a hand came from around the trunk at the head of careful footfalls, he caught it by the wrist. He gently pulled her into view, leaning close to her surprised visage with a triumphant smirk of his own this time. “One to me.”
He let her go and bounded through the underbrush, making sure to keep quiet and make a hard turn from the trail he’d cut while running, slinking through the forest and again listening to his surroundings.

She threw the shawl off, slightly vexed at him for catching her. She’d have to be sneakier now - it was time to use her skills to her advantage. He was only one tag away from ending the game, not that Ivy would mind that, she was feeling especially frisky now… But this was also a lesson, it wasn’t just about a naughty game. It was time to squash her own desires for the time being. With a shake of her head she took off. Her footsteps were near silent until she reached another tree. To win this game, she’d have to go up. They didn’t call her Ivy the Spider for nothing…

It took some time, but Sevari eventually made his way back to her. She felt almost like a cheat, but then again - her only rule was that clothes had to come off… It was a sturdy enough branch to hold her weight, and so she got ready to drop. Sure, she’d done it before but this time she had an extra sprinkling of razzle dazzle to add to the mix… If she’d got him from behind the first time, then this would be from the front.

Ivy had to fight the urge to giggle again, but it was easy to find a centre of focus when he was below her. Once more she let herself drop down, her legs holding her weight. She was higher up this time and she brought herself level with his face, setting a hand against his cheek before he’d have time to register. “Hello sweetie,” she purred at him before swinging forward with the slightest momentum to briefly touch his lips with hers. She was almost tempted to let it linger… But while her lips worked their magic - so did her hands, and on her swing away from him there was a bold smirk lighting up her expression. She’d stolen his hat.

Finding solid ground again, the Dunmer moved a slight distance from him as she pushed his hat onto her head. “Ooooh, I like this,” Ivy remarked, “but not as much as I liked the taste of you Sevari…” Then she was off, again.

the only thing Sevari did when he saw her was give a startled huff from his nostrils and a slight flinch. He was definitely not expecting her lips on his, but just as he tried to reach for her and sink into it, she was off again.

And with his hat.

Instead of frustration, he gave her a sincere laugh and nodded as she posed with his hat, and were he younger, she would’ve left him red-faced with her last remark. He only smirked and bit his lip, “Only one more to me, Ivy, and we’ll have a winner.” Sevari said, scanning the trees and their branches, making abrupt turns and double-backs when he could, “Are you as excited as I am?”

Ivy had the upper hand. Ivy knew these woods, she knew Falkreath, she knew where she was - and where was going. She only had to lead him there now. She got her bearings back by holding a finger out and feeling the wind, and then a glance up to the sky. She ran straight forwards, not caring if he could see her. Truthfully, she was excited - but the woman was still competitive and not about to lose at the game she’d suggested.

After a few moments she found herself where she wanted to be. As close enough to her tent - her palace, as she needed to be. Then, something strange happened - she simply stopped running. She was allowing him to catch up, and so instead she began dancing around on the grass. Performing more cartwheels, flips, splits, and spins. Sure, Sevari could see her - and the thrill alone of him only having to lay one more touch on her was enough to rile him up. She didn’t need to run and hide to win this game. She was a master of unpredictable movement. What better way was there to win the game too? Everything up until now had been a warm up. Now she would really challenge him.

He caught on to what this had become. What he had let her lure him into. And he couldn’t contain the grin on himself. He began to limber up in his own way too, stretching his legs and swinging his arms to loosen up his muscles. “Any rules, dearest?”

“I trust you’re not going to cheat, Tiger,” she purred as she bent backwards into an arch, kicking her legs to flip herself over and away. “Come and get me if you think you can,” she smirked, and kept moving around. She wasn’t going to make it easy - but she also still wanted to get that man’s trousers off…

“Only evading, no blocking. A touch still means clothes off.” Sevari edged closer to her, not even assuming any stance, but readying his body to move like a coiled spring, “And I only need to touch you once.”

“I wonder what the winner gets.” Sevari chuckled.

“Oh everyone gets a prize,” she smirked, her feet carrying her across the grass - arms outstretched and her hair whipped around furiously as she began spinning. Ivy moved with the breeze that drawled in from the east, letting it carry her and her spins to Sevari’s side. She was not growing dizzy, but maybe if he watched her closely then he might. She was like a spinning top, the red paint on her skin becoming but a blur. Just like the breeze the caressed Sevari, she did too - just a slight touch of her hand, her fingertips but a tickle on the back of his neck.

Sevari let it happen. A tingle down below and a mischievous need that grew more and more as the night went on bade him do it. He calmly reached down and unbuckled his pants, a thought thrown to whether his gunbelt counted as a piece of clothing, but he slipped off his pants one leg at a time either way. He smirked, “Even now. One touch between the both of us.” His smirk grew into a cheeky grin, “Of course, we could just touch each other for the hell of it too.”

Ivy twirled all the way to the parted fabric door of her tent, stopping to take a look at Sevari in this form. For a moment her breath faltered, and her lip found its way under her front teeth. "Tell me how it feels to be a little more free…" were the words the Dunmer left him with before stepping over the threshold of her tent. She beckoned him to follow with a slow and seductive curling of her finger.

Sevari shook his head watching her, a slow turning from left to right as he bit his lip in turn, “Mm.” He chuckled to himself, wondering just what the hells he’d gotten himself into with this strange woman, and not disappointed in his choice to humor her as he followed her inside her tent, “Mm mm.”

The Box





Having left Aurora to her own devices, Dro’Sintaba made his way across the deck. She had left an impression on him that was just as troublesome as anything else on this journey was going to be. Namely, Ms Vasellius - a woman who had also been left to her own devices. He shook his head, an attempt to stop thinking about the blonde. It didn’t take much to do so, it took only a redhead struggling with cargo to erase Aurora from his immediate thoughts…

He watched her for a moment, she was strong looking. Must have been 6’3”. A nord too, most definitely. Thick auburn hair in a single braid over her shoulders. Her arms toned and freckled - kissed by the sun itself. He smiled, feeling that voice in the back of his head warn him about staying out of yet more trouble. Of course the khajiit ignored it as he approached the woman, removing his hands from his pockets to take up the other side of the barrel she was attempting to lift. It was indeed heavy, but between the two of them it’s weight was not an issue. “Let me help you,” he said, meeting her gaze.

“Oh thank t’Gods! I’m running behind schedule as it is, yer saving me hide.” She replied with a relieved sigh, “I need to get all this down t’below decks. Rex fuckin’ nipped off… Captain aint gonna want this on the deck when he sets sail,” the woman added with a shake of her head. “You’re a strong one like, I shouldn’t really let yer help me, but it needs doing… I’m Cerys by t’way.” If she’d had a free hand, and if his had been free too - she would have offered to shake it.

“Dro’Sintaba,” he replied in a low rumble. “Happy to help,” he smiled. He did wonder what Vas was getting herself into, but knowing that they were on quite a busy ship, he saw no reason to worry about her.




Meanwhile, Vas had set about for a look around the ship. She was a nosy woman, and unashamedly so - and perhaps if she’d stayed with Dro’Sintaba, or with Beren, one of them might have advised against her traipsing around and into the staff quarters. There was also the very real chance that she had no idea that was where she was walking, and the airy smile and happy eyes signalled to that. She quietly hummed and stepped across the timber and absent-mindedly wondered about what would be for dinner later. She was hoping there would be lots of sweets.

It occurred to Vas that she no longer had a curfew, and that each step that she took was of her own volition. Nobody to tell her what she must do, and more importantly what she mustn’t. She stopped for a moment, dead in her tracks - pressing the tips of her forefingers together. She bit down on her lip and stifled a laugh.

What was able to pull her from the whirlwind of her own thoughts were the faint sounds of conversation, and something important at that… “-At the feast, you’re to bring him to me, understood?” It was a distinctly masculine voice that she heard, from behind a door. Serious and somewhat nasal. Vas stopped in her tracks, her own quiet humming tapered off and she instinctively took her place against the wall. “By any means necessary…”

“Aye, if only weren’t for passengers we’d ‘av easier job o’it-“ was the sound of another voice, a boy, no - not a boy, and older man for his voice was cracked and hoarse. “But they’ll at least be a distraction…”

“We can’t waste more time, The Ritual is important… do you understand?” The nasal one asked, and Vas could sense the importance of those words on her own skin - it began to grow cold and the atmosphere was frail enough to collapse beneath her feet. ritual?? she mouthed until she found herself holding her breath, cupping a hand over her mouth. There was a choking sensation of something terribly wrong in the air - even she could tell. She wanted to find Dro’Sintaba and tell him, to tell anyone what she’d heard… It was too secretive and intense to be anything other than malicious.

“We’ve waited a long time for this Rex, everything is ready - he is ready… This is what I’ve been waiting for,” came a sadistic hiss.

Vas stepped to move away…

Creeeeeeeeeak


The loose board of timber bit back under even the soft weight of her foot. Groaning out a sigh of defiance against her feeble attempt at stealth. The Imperial took in a sharp breath and silence followed from behind the door. Silence, and then footsteps. It swung open a face leered around the frame. Wrinkled, with drooping jowls - the skin of his face like tanned leather. Just worn and worked by the sea. He appeared older than the strength that was in the hand that grabbed at her collar, pulling her inside.

Behind the door was a taller gentleman, who would have looked more refined if it wasn’t for the oily sheen in his hair. His eyes were piercing, small downturned grey beads in his gaunt face. Were it not for the colours of his clothes, he would have looked like a phantom.

“Well well well,” he spoke at last - head cocked to the side to eye up the woman like a hawk might clap eyes on his prey in long grass. Fingers twitched at either side of him. They were long and bony, like claws. “Who do we have here? A little rat perhaps?” He asked, a smile playing at the corners of his mouth, a thin and harsh crack in his face.

“I’m…. I’m Saffine,” she answered, breath catching in her throat and her heart racing. “I got lost, that’s all.”

“Don’t lie. Did you hear something you shouldn’t have?” He said accusingly, taking a single step towards Vas. Had she not been in the clutches of the other man, she would have taken one back in turn. She nodded, swallowing back anything she might have wanted to say.

“Oh dear, oh dear, little rat” he replied - a bitter sugar stained his tongue with derision, but his eyes were alight behind his pupils. Two bright lights dancing and Vas couldn’t look away. “Are you scared?” He asked, lip curled in delight as his hand reached into the inside lining of his cloak. She had no answer to that question, and that was enough of an answer for him.

The grip around her collar tightened and she began to feel her pulse in her throat, a heat in her forehead. “Let her go, fool,” spat the greasy one - and Rex did as asked.

“B-b-but Bronn she’ll run off, she’ll say summink,” he stammered - seemingly also frightened of the other man. He however, simply sighed out a rasp of a laugh.

“No she won’t.” He smirked, removing his hand at last from his pocket - there in his palm was a small wooden box.

“But Bronn, we can’t — we’ll have to,” Rex began, his eyes widening at the sight.

“Hush, there’s time. Now wait outside,” Bronn snapped, the hypnotising lights behind his eyes flashed red and Rex slunk away like a tortoise recoiling back into its shell. He waited behind the closed door - standing watch in the hallway. Vas finally took her step back to move, but was met with the solid wall, blocking her from escape.

Bronnl held the box in front of him, and started to turn at a handle in the side and as soon as he did, a soft melody began to play. “What is that?” Vas asked, a bold inflection suddenly in her voice— resistance.

Bronn smiled, his smile like a crack through porcelain, “It’s going to help you relax.”

“I don’t want to relax,” she replied - that resistance forming a barrier from within that gave her the posture of a vanguard. Strong, and growing stronger. “If you knew who I was, you’d stop that at once,” her green eyes flashed and narrowed, but the melody was in between her ears now, like a quiet and enchanting purr from somewhere unknown. A beckoning jingle, pulling her to rest.

“And, just who, my dear, are you?” He asked with an amused look on his face.

Outside of the room, Rex clasped his hands over his ears and looked to the floor, counting backwards from ten, over and over.

“My name is Car… Car…” Vas spoke, the words slurring until she found them; “Carlotta Va—,” her eyes glazed over as Bronn drew nearer.

“Carlotta? But you told me you were Saffine…” he hissed, that mocking tone had returned and was sharp as a knife. “You don’t know who you are now, do you? Perhaps opportunity has knocked sending you my way. What are you running from?” he grinned, words laced with curiosity and mockery of the young woman in front of him. In the now dim gloom of the room his teeth looked sharp too - misshapen in his mouth. The melody was playing over and over in her head, in her heart, in her body, in the room - and in the lights dancing in his eyes. The lights that she followed with her own.

Vas moved, as if to grab for her rapier - but her fingers found only air.

Bronn closed the distance between them, and she was able to break from his eyes to look at the box - the lid was stained with an etching of a skull with smudges of something else in russet, and when she opened her mouth to scream the lid sprung open on the final melancholic note with an eerie pop. She felt a twist in her chest and from underneath the lid a smoke burst out. Bronn held the box right up to her face and Vas inhaled it all. Her eyes rolled to the back of her head and she dropped to the floor almost immediately.

After a long pause, and having heard the thud, Rex returned to the room. He pushed the creaky door ajar, moving Vas’s limp body in the process. The corner of the door caught her forehead and he winced at the sound of wood meeting bone. ‘B..Bronn?” He asked as he looked down at her, he wasn’t sure if she was…

“She’ll live.” Bronn answered in a cold fashion with a nonchalant wave of his hand, staring down his nose at her on the floor - giving her a gentle kick with his foot. “Take her. Quickly, back to her quarters,” he commanded, placing the music box back into his pocket.

“We keep an eye on this one. She could be another… She has potential...” he sneered, looking at the filthy, lying harlot with disdain.

“She’s going to tell the Captain what she heard…” Rex muttered, words that brought the red back to Bronn’s eyes.

“Saffine here is not going to remember a thing,” he tapped his chest - the box. As if it wasn’t the first time he had to remind Rex of his skills. Bronn’s eyebrow raised as a warning, and Rex shuffled awkwardly. “Take her back upstairs. It’s quiet still,” he hissed, moving to the furthest wall of his suite, placing his claw-like hands on the paneling which he pulled back to reveal a narrow gap. “You know the way Rex.”

“I’ll have to convince our Captain to close off our quarters to wandering strangers… We can’t risk more… rats infesting our living space. That would be bad for everyone involved...” Bronn continued, his lips pulling into a smirk again. He walked to his desk in the corner, opening a drawer to remove a vial. “Besides, it’s time for his tea…” He gave one last look in Rex’s direction and watched him struggle to load Vas over his shoulders. “This might all work in our favour… They’ll be pleased with us. Pleased with you.

That was enough to bring confidence back to Rex, and he found an extra ounce of strength within himself to make the climb, reappearing in a corner away from the entrance to the space set aside for the passengers. Bronn was right, it had been quiet indeed, there was only a gentleman seemingly sleeping in his hammock, still, he stepped carefully toward an armchair and placed Vas into it. He felt the woman stirring back to consciousness - and took it as his time to leave.

There was one thing that Rex did know to be true. Cerys was going to be angry at him for leaving her with the cargo for so long…


Addison rose from sitting, her mouth agape with slight shock, the despair that had been eating at her seemed to have all but gone now. With everything that had happened, it had been a long week but the row of supers in front of her had now made it worthwhile, hell - she barely even felt that chill that had been gnawing her for the last six hours. All that was there now, was the hope she’d been reaching out for.

Ever the optimist, it didn’t occur to her that any of them might have had ulterior motives. They were here.

The brunette eyed each of them individually - the woman that she recognised as Stardust. Older now, obviously, but she still carried a powerful presence with her. Then a gentleman with facial tattoos, in a suit of some kind - Arbiter. He was only human, yes? She thought about it some - glancing down at her own armour, or lack thereof… They were not so different. The Tower was here too, a man that sounded so heavy and his name did speak volumes about him. He was frightening in his approach, but his words were mellow and calmed down her racing heartbeat. He spoke with doubt, or disbelief - but not with malice.

Did she know what she was doing? Perhaps not. In fact, the more she thought on his words, the more out of her depth she felt. She’d gathered these people here and they’d answered her call. But what now? What was next? The cold chill met her once more as she continued sizing them up. Avant Garde was here, she remembered him - she knew that he was wanted for, of all things, vandalism. She gave an out of character giggle at that, a mixture of nerves and incredulousness at the ridiculousness of it. She’d put out a call to supers, not knowing the history they might have with each other too - and she observed that some were already having reunions of their own.

Biomancer, Spellbound. The latter being more on the intimidating side than Addison would have liked from whomever joined her and answered her message. Where was Captain Rainbow? That said, the woman had answered. She was here, and she was going to help. Biomancer, on the other hand… If there were any in the group she wanted to keep an eye on more than others, it was him. She’d had access to Hex’s files… She knew what Hex thought of each of these people, and Biomancer and Spellbound were both featured in his logs quite heavily. As was The Tower, as were Avant Garde and Stardust. Arbiter? Not so much, but enough.

Finally, after they had all addressed each other, and their energies had wound down, Addison spoke. It had been hard to find words, but she did eventually - clearing her throat, the cough reverberating around the warehouse. “Thank you for coming.”

They were expecting her to be every bit the Special Agent she said she was, that she was, and it took several thoughts and internal affirmations before she stood up straight. They had powers and abilities that she did not, and admittedly it was difficult to stand and hold herself confidently amongst them.

“If you’re here, it’s because you got my message concerning Mr. Moore, about your colleague Hex,” Addison began, hands held in front of her. “He was found not long ago, in his apartment. My department wrote this off as being a suicide or accidental overdose - just a normal death… Just another fucking tragedy of Cedar Fort to be forgotten tomorrow” She sighed, bringing a hand to her face - her features sharp, bags under her eyes. “I know it wasn’t. This wasn’t an accident. I believe he was murdered by the being, or by an associate of the being he wrote about in his journals… Reality Bringer Hell, I even think he knew I was going to find him. There’s a lot that he knew.” She stepped back towards her chair, towards the box she’d brought in.

“I… I didn’t tell anyone about his identity. As far as the force in Cedar Fort are concerned - it was a damn overdose of a nobody. I’m under the radar right now myself,” she explained, taking the lid off the box. She’d expected more help, it occurred to her as she looked inside. “I… These are for you all, so we can stay in touch now.” Addison took out six small devices, no bigger than the palm of her hand. Ancient little remnants of technology for decades gone by. Pagers. She readied herself for the laughter, the disbelief. But these were, surprisingly, some of the safest technology now. Completely outdated and used by so few people, on a network that wasn’t looked at. It was like hiding in plain sight. “I know, it’s… old stuff - but hey, kind of vintage?” she shrugged, passing them around. As she handed each super the equipment she realised that this was really happening.

“I think that Hex was trying to stop the Reality Bringer, from his journals I learned that he was in New Mexico only five days before his death…” Her voice trailed off, and she scratched the back of her neck. “We need to go too, retrace his steps. Something happened there. You’re all here because Hex meant something to you at some point, and maybe you want to find out what happened to him -- maybe you’re just here to finish off his work. All I know is, Cedar Fort is about to be swallowed whole by something huge, and I’m the only one in the force who gives a shit now… I can’t do this alone.”

Her brown eyes scanned the small crowd of assembled heroes, and for the first time she smiled. “What do you guys say?”

I have never been so intimidated. Also, I have a lot to read.


No need to be intimidated!

But, the fate of the roleplay rests on your shoulders~~~~~~~~!!!!!
Name: Fred Enado
Alias: Electronica
Age: 45













Some facts
He prefers light beer
His Electro custom suit was his best
He invented Lit Up shoes
He doesn't skip exercise
He likes simple detective books


Alright,

I think we still need work on this one, it's a little scattered and not quite to the level of the other characters just yet. Coming face to face with someone stronger isn't a weakness unique to him, so I'd like you to really think about what his weaknesses are. Look at some of the other sheets for good examples. ET sheet has good ones.

There are parts in the CS that should be elsewhere, you have a short sentence about Fred killing someone and then he was reprimanded. That's only the power section, so keep it succinct to powers. Tell the death story in Origin. It just helps to keep the sheet coherent, so that later if I wanted to check what the powers were, I can pick it out - I don't want to dig through.

I know what he wears, but I don't know what he looks like - how he moves, what kind of expression he has... what's his posture etc. Little things that flesh out an appearance section beyond eye and hair colour are my crack.

I'm finding the sheet to be a little hard in places. I think strip Fred down to his very basics - he's an electric hero, lets build from that. I'm not sure who this character is, really. I need to be confident that you do too, so thay you'll enjoy playing him enough to go the distance of the rp.

If you can work on the appearance, weaknesses, powers, and personality section we can look at working him in.

Also, I'm not doing this to be discouraging of your efforts - what you have here is a cracking start and more than a lot of people can do! But I'd be doing you, the rp, and myself a disservice by accepting the sheet as it is now when I believe there's a lot of ways we can flesh this out and make Fred more well rounded and with more depth.
Draft 2:



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Great changes to the sheet.

It's not cyberpunk in the slightest, but actually I really appreciate that point of difference. While everyone else is with their technology, Nina has all of this experience with otherworldly happenings. I'm wondering how it is that I can incorporate it all into my own storyline for the rp and it does worry me only about 2% because my plans are already pretty wild. So yeah, thank you for your patience too, I've been pretty slow in gettinf back to you and you've been very active and helpful in our discord!

Also, just wanted to take a moment to tell you how beautiful your writing is in the sheet, I think Nina will really add a nice layer to the game :) accepted!

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