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So this is why the page took ages to load.


Quoting it will make it take twice as long as the delay it caused.
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I'm sorry. Who do harm.


And yet you target those here first.
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Then who was? And Alright.

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Of course. The group i am with is trying to take down those who wish to harm others.


"Who wish."
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Less death among innocents. Preferably none. I do appreciate that Mr. Waternaux has created a base at a uninhabited planet. But the enemy of you all and even your friends still harm innocents through indirect actions.


Does that not apply to all beings?
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reword


The way you set up their personalities, 3 acted the most realistically, and 1 or 2 sounds like setting up for a fanfic while 3 sounds like an actual work.
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And that's more realistic for a 16 year old girl?


The reactions based on the personality were, not personality based on the actions. And it felt the least cliche.
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elaborate


The other two felt much shallower than the third. The first two were "Woe is me, I'm depressed, bad things happen, a wish can save everything maybe." The third is "How can I tweak the system to the extent that all of your loopholes are broken?"
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dead little brother doesn't count as sad lol
Alright but why are two and three better than one?

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3 is the most realistic?
These are rough drafts, so development is notwithstanding.


Character-wise, yes.
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My brother helped the "originals" here. He was Spirit Blitz's apprentice. And my homeland was Equestria.


I see. And what do you hope to eventually achieve?
I'm sorry, it's probably just me, but the question is greatly confusing me.


It's fine.
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