@tanderbolt After the conflict was over and retreat orders were given. Being mad at Atlas is fine, but it's a little asenine of a reason, don't you think? Now, your CS was well written, but it's not exactly Remnant flavor if you know what I mean.
@tanderbolt I like the character. While having graduated the Atlas Academy technically makes him Huntsman qualified, he seemed to have taken the military route? Either way is fine I guess, based on the outcome. Also, I don't think Atlas has a Court Martialing thing? I don't know, but they don't seem that strict. But that's just me. We'll have to wait for Enter on that.
@Ryougu I like it, but you, ahem, accidentally called her three different names? You get a yes. @Mercurial I like what I've read. Unfortunately, my brain checked out at the longer personality description, so I'll have to get back to it. See no problems at the moment though. I trust it makes sense and isn't randomly absurd. @AtlasRizeNot bad. I apologize to anyone whose CS I haven't fully read yet.
@Rune_Alchemist Nah, you're good. Synneva reminds me of sylvan which means forest green. You pass. Even if it wasn't intentional. I clear you for submission, so as soon as Enter says everything's on the up-and-up, you can put your CS in the Characters tab. Love her Semblance by the way. So cool.
@Eisenhorn Thank you. I like it. He's interesting. You have my half of the approval stamp. Also your weapon is really cool, and your Semblance has great utility.
Name: Tzain Shian (Cyan Zehn) Sex: Female Age: 25 Phenotype: Alligator Faunus Region: Vacuo/Mistral Appearance: With average height and a small build, Cyan doesn’t always look that threatening. With a pale, round face that reveals her Mistralese heritage, she often wears a wide hood made from a long scarf with a broad middle, which shade her from the harsh sun. She often wears adjustable, kimono like sleeves which can cover or expose her shoulders, along with a black body suit, and a short kimono styled tunic gi, and soft shoes. Personality: Cyan can be described in a few words. The most of them, however, is kinetic. She’s an energetic individual who, while enjoying her relaxation time very much, is quick to involve herself in social activities. However, this isn’t merely for pleasantries sake. Biography: Cyan was born in Mistral to a nobleman and a traveling Faunus woman. Despite being unmarried, the nobleman neither asked for her mother’s hand, nor sent her away. Instead, he gave her a small sum of money, which allowed her to live comfortable in one of the villages outside of Mistral. Despite living comfortably, however, Cyan and her mother moved to Vacuo when she was still young, in order for her to grow up in an area with slightly more Faunus, despite it being more dangerous in some ways.
This danger wasn’t lost on young Cyan, however. From a young age, she developed a nearly pathological fear of Grimm, despite living in a relatively sheltered area of Vacuo, near the northern cliffs. While not unfounded, Cyan did not have any particularly dangerous experience with Grimm, whether by some great fortune, or by having a fairly capable mother. By the time she was in her teens, she had entered a combat training camp, set up by local Hunters in favor of having children travel to a combat school, named Oasis. During this time, she practiced with ferocity, her fear turning to distaste, and a drive to eliminate every Grimm on Remnant. This furious, selfish drive continued entirely through her combat training, and well through her years in Shade. However, as the beginning of the third year, Cyan became much more calm, relaxed, and observant. After graduating from Shade, she quickly left to patrol the deserts and settlements of Vacuo, but not without visiting her mother first.
During her training in Oasis, she was mostly instructed in combat by the Huntsman Dusk Narakajin. Known for his fierce bravery, he set Cyan on her track to be the warrior she is today. Though she was a slower student than he would have liked, and than she would want to admit currently. Aura Color: Cerulean Semblance: Soul Beast- By concentrating on the essence of her inner Soul, Cyan is able to conjure a Fylgja. Weapon: Helfrost is a dual hand combat set in multiple parts. In its default form, it consists of two climbing claws with back-hand guards. The right guard holds twenty shuriken, while the left a single kunai. The right guard is also capable of launching either the shuriken or the kunai, and while this offers great distance and power, it isn’t the weapons’ intended use, so Cyan avoids this practice. In actuality, the shuriken are used for speed takedowns, aided by the climbing claws on her palms, and Dust aided distractions. The kunai is used as a backhanded slashing dagger, short range throwing weapon, and hand-shovel/trowel. Upon being disengaged, the two guards combine into a simple handgun, capable of firing Aura rounds, or utilizing Dust tipped solid bullets, creating an elemental hollow-point effect. Cyan also keeps a pouch of needles, a spool of metal wire, and a mortar and pestle for mixing various kinds of Dust on her person. Favors: Speed Takedowns Self Paced Jobs Open People Privacy Portabella Mushrooms Personal Time Water Meditation Dust Disfavors: Nosey People Narrow Mindedness Brutish Individuals Overly Complex Situations Metropolitan Areas Long Periods of Time with Very Little Choice in What to Do Stupidity Affinities:
Cyan is skilled at mixing Dust, and has so far crafted little-known or new varieties, such as her signature Mirror Dust.
Her abilities lend themselves well to surreptitious activities.
Cyan almost always can find a means of escape.
Cyan has a preference for laying out a situation, forming a plan, and executing said plan in a quick, direct way.
Possessing an Aura honed for offense, Cyan exhibits great strength.
Cyan moves in a quick, fluid way.
Faults:
Cyan hates having to alter her course of action mid-move. This stems from her preference for one solid plan, which leads to her becoming overwhelmed should circumstances change too quickly in a way for which she could not calculate.
Despite showing great power, Cyan’s Aura is not as defensive as that of some others. While her Semblance makes Aura breaks easier to avoid, a strike to her Flygja damages her Aura equally.
Despite her usually cool and focused manner, there are certain instances where Cyan will either stay in combat longer than is sound for her safety, or perform over-aggressively when it is not called for.