@BenG85 There's still something about the character, on which I can't quite put my finger, that doesn't really click. Could be the concept itself, since the refinements don't seem to have cleared anything up when it comes to me feeling the character for the RP.
@Le Fay You don't need to edit it so heavily. Just understand that it's very abnormal for Japanese society. Adjusting small details accordingly is more welcome than large changes.