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Overlord - Mors Inimicos Nostros

Demons have subclasses: Succubus, Incubus being the obvious two. But there's probably more along the lines of Death Cultist, Hell Warrior, or Hell Lich that could have feasibly existed in Yggdrasil.

More over the guild in the game was not run by justice worshipers, nor were they all good. Doux, and Greybeard made the guild with the intent of it just being a PVE thing but Doux would later help turn its aesthetic into more of a roman empire sort of deal. The guild's style was 'Man was King' hence why Claudius says 'Man is great for god needs man to bow to make him strong' or something along those lines. They're not goody two shoes they're law bringing, Knight Templar, conquerors. There is a branch of them like Dolton who see 'justice is the solution' but they only do so because 'law bringing is needed for order to exist'. They're not all Lawful, or neutral good. Claudius is flat out chaotic neutral. Severnus is Neutral Evil.

The argument could be made because guild founder, and world disaster, BorntobeBad was undead. But he was also specialized heavily in damage magic, and the like as he was basically a walking talking AOE Nuke by the time the game ended. The closest they let in were undead, black mages, and the like. They didn't exclude others because of their race but because they didn't fit the aesthetic of the guild. For example having an overlord like Momonga would be weird when the primary defender of the guild are a bunch of knights in full armor, and grunts in silver armor its jarring.

Rogues don't typically buff stack. They debuff, and deal quick damage, and disable traps. They stab, mark, and allow allies to do additional damage.

Overlord - Mors Inimicos Nostros

Yes but then there comes the whole question of what a demon is doing in a guild specifically grafted towards humanoid characters. There were undead, and such in the guild but they were a minority for the most part due to the aesthetic nature of the guild. More over demons don't resist holy by nature hence why exorcisms work. That'd be a subclass of demon, specifically mage.

Overlord - Mors Inimicos Nostros

@Jangel13Then they should be mentioned as a part of his racial class. Resist blank implies either your main class, or one of your subclasses involves the ability to resist something. Resist holy for example would probably belong on something like an elder litch, or demon.

Overlord - Mors Inimicos Nostros

Detect Holy
Protection from Holy (master)
Resist fire (master)

make no sense. He has no holy subclasses, and he's a rogue on top of that.

Star Wars: A Veiled Threat

I'm just popping up to read the OOC stuff until things come along. Don't really have much to say on the matters at hand. Matt has made a character specifically made to be a foil to mine but it will probably end up extremely one sided in a way. "You're group attacked me at one point." "And? We have no organized leader. And I'm former Hutt muscle take your issues with my brothers to someone who actually cares what happens to your silly planet."

Matt's character assumes that the Reborn Mandalorians are a group dedicated solely to one end goal. But in reality they have no mandalore, and they have no head. They're a blanket group for smaller sub-groups of mandalorians who live and breathe their old culture while still being able to call themselves brothers. What one member strives for may not necessarily be what all of them want.

Overlord - Mors Inimicos Nostros

@Jangel13 It doesn't mention how he ended up joining the guild in the bio. You clearly have him labeled as a part of the Empire's ranks.

You're skills are clearly lacking. I just want to point this out.

You have: Savage Assassination, Poison Master, Malicious Shadow, and and Cobra Strike

this is my character's basic skill list not including his specific skills

Strength Boost (Greater, Mastered, Almighty), Defensive Stance (Greater, mastered), Protection from Undead, Protection from Magic, Protection from Evil, Temporary Bless Weapon, Healing Touch (Greater, mastered), Shattering Blow (greater, mastered, almighty), Unfaltering Stance (Greater, Expert), Crushing Blows (Greater, mastered), Ward from Magic (Greater, Mastered), Contain Evil, Exorcise Evil (Greater, Mastered), Detect Evil, Detect Evil Intentions, Ward Magic, Holy Aura, Immunity to Mind Alteration, Turn Undead, Holy Protection, Greater Luck, Discern Enemy

Overlord - Mors Inimicos Nostros

@Jangel13 You're missing the entirety of the bio, and personality section. You also only have one skill. What level you want to make your character is your choice.

Overlord - Mors Inimicos Nostros

I'd like you to keep in mind you're massively weaker than a good number of npc's. 50 is not awful but 70 is said to be a level where PvP becomes a priority. Meaning your character is relatively new. If I had to give you a rank in terms of the show it'd be steel, or just above so in the adventurer's guild. So while you're doing ok damage it won't be much. Otherwise I'd like to say that is fine with me so far but you still need to finish the Cs.

Overlord - Mors Inimicos Nostros

@Jangel13Probably a lightly enchanted dagger, and some decent armor.

@Salvia you post it on here not the CS section thats for accepted characters. I'm going to say around 90. Letting a level 100 at this point would be counter-intuitive to who we have. I do not like power gaming but that was a thing in the game.

Kingdom Hearts: Seekers X Chasers

Fair enough but at no point do I think that's fair for Abel at the very least. He's had a fairly hard life, and has trust issues having been raised by rather dubious parental figures. He's rude, and arrogant but he's willing to listen to other people when they make a good point. He respects power but doesn't crave it like some anti-heroes. His ambition comes from wanting to make something of his life. He had nothing, and wants to get stronger to prove it but only of his own hands he's not willing to give into darkness to make himself better. Short cuts to him are just an bad way to end up in a bad position.

All I'm saying is I designed him to follow the closed fist path of Jade Empire-
jadeempire.wikia.com/wiki/Way_of_the_…

-Specifically this aspect:

...An evil man ignores a plea for help because he does not care, but a man on the "low path" ignores the plea because that person will survive on their own if they are strong enough.

But even then I mention that he's just as willing to throw himself in the line of fire for his friends. All I'm trying to say is I don't view him as edgy, dark, or broody. @Double