vietmyke

Falling Skies: 7th Mobile Armor Suit Team

Whoop! And the Incursion dlc is coming out tomorrow :D

Also, I'm super sorry for the delay, but my own post should be up tomorrow! finalizing it now.

Also, @Hexaflexagon, do you require assistance on obtaining your new toy?

Waeldeshore: The Wars Beyond [DISCONTINUED]

The small halfling- was as always, filled with energy. She spoke of the traitor Isabeau, whom had been mentioned earlier that night, but more importantly that she had entered the home of the sage. The halfling seemed ready for a fight, and asked him and the others if they were prepared. Emil looked at himself rather sheepishly- he had not been anticipating a fight, and as such wore no arms or armor. He felt rather bashful actually, as a warrior he should've been ready for any situation.

Emil was jostled out of his thoughts as the huntress- the beastwoman Sakaala growled for Regina's speech to end. Interrupting her increasingly agitated rambling with solid logic and rational. The Huntress was also the first to realize the massive man Ajax was not with them. The huntress expressed the need to find the large warrior that was Ajax- a sound move. Consolidating their strength would only be better for them should they come across.

"It would be in our best interest to find the fighter Diagorides," Emil agreed. "When you summoned us, I did not anticipate it to be for the purpose of hunting someone down. It appears neither I nor Sir Hepburnberg are properly armed for this task."

With that, the group began to locate Diagorides- their first place to check being his room. Which was, surprisingly easy enough to locate in the house, since the group of them had been housed in relatively close proximity to one another- it would only make sense for guest bedrooms to be in a specific wing of a house if it was built specifically to house large amounts of guests. As they approached they walked down the hallway, Emil was almost certain he heard Diagorides' voice coming from the his room. He couldn't make it out very well, and the footsteps of their group in general made a bit too much noise for him to make out any words. Emil began to slow down, his steps quieting as he did.

"I... I believe I hear voices coming from Diagorides' room." Emil said quietly to the others.

Tales of Lucenrai: The Fallen Kingdom

a protecting cloak and shield amulet would require magical power on the part of the user to sustain- or at least have a mage 'recharge' the spell after every so often. But it wouldn't be too much to have one of those items. Utility enchantments are fine.

Tales of Lucenrai: The Fallen Kingdom

The enchantments and items seem fine to me, though how big is thus cart?

Waeldeshore: The Wars Beyond [DISCONTINUED]

Yes, will get something up after class

Crisis Mars: Evolution [Super humans on Mars]

I didn't make all the weapons in the galaxy... I simply made all the ones that the USF primarily uses. So yes, you can make Enson weapons, just pm them to me and I'll sort them out into another OOC section for Sep

Tales of Lucenrai: The Fallen Kingdom

Character reviews! Doctor, I've already reviewed your character on the other thread, so I'll just touch up on @Mcmolly

Hider

If I'm reading your CS right, your character became a tournament fighter at age 15? Was there any resistance to people fighting him? People not wanting to hurt (or worse, be beaten) by a 15 year old tourney fighter? That seems a bit young to pick up such a dangerous profession. Also, what caused him to join the caravan instead of the Edessan army if he was being treated as an adult in an arena?

Falling Skies: 7th Mobile Armor Suit Team

Add vietmyke on uplay :D

Crisis Mars: Evolution [Super humans on Mars]

@Sep Sorry mate, you are not allowed to do that as a GM.

Oh and also, about the STAKEN. Chemrail is a system that basically utilizes a light gas gun, so it must have a rapture disk, or a really fast release valve. Cause we are int eh future, and cause Enson made it, I will say that it is somewhat ok to have it that way, but as some people are grammar nazis, I am a science nazi. Sorry for the interruption, but I had to put it out.

Also are these the guns that WE can get?

@6slyboy6

It all depends- Most of the weapons are available in civilian models- which are typically semi-automatic instead of fully automatic. Tobias might be able to get access to the STAKEN because of his connections to Enson- but that won't stop Peacekeepers from trying to arrest him if he does walk around with one. Ray has access to all military grade weapons because he's just been hired by the USF to hunt yall down. As for the rest of the characters getting their hands on military grade weapons, they won't be able to do it through official channels, so they'd have to know black markets.

Tales of Lucenrai: The Fallen Kingdom

Alright! Time for some character reviews! Before I start these reviews, I would like to point out that sometimes, people may find my reviews a bit harsh, because I typically avoid beating around the bush when it comes to pointing out discrepancies or things that could use a bit of spit-shining. Know that none of the constructive critiques I make are personal, and that they are all made with the intent of polishing your character. My critiques are not necessarily final, and compromises can be made with proper reasoning and discussion- though there are some things I will not budge on.

In the words of a friend from the oldguild: "Myke criticizes because he cares."

Moving on! I will be putting everyone's critiques in hiders, starting with:
@DoctorFB

Hider

A bit plain, all in all. There's not that much to correct, because there's not that much that stands out. He's a bit different than what I had originally anticipated for characters in this RP, but not necessarily in a bad way. I honestly don't have that much to say about this character. He's very average, in just about every respect. Though I will point out, shooting and hitting a moving rabbit with a bow is not something I'd call 'novice'. Have you seen how fast(and erratically) those little shits move?

@CorinTraven

Hider

Professional penmanship is an interesting skill, but I suppose this also implies that she is inherently well learned. It was partially my mistake, but I failed to mention that the princess should've been in disguise as a plain refugee, but I actually like what you did with her, so I think I'm going to leave it. Overall, I'm very happy with the feel of this character- a child in the middle of her growth, suddenly torn away from her world.

@Dark Light

Hider

He's not a teen refugee, but he's not exactly a grungy mercenary is he? How would he find himself in this caravan- a group of carts filled with children and teens, protected by some worn out mercenaries and city guards no longer fit for hard combat? Personality section is a bit sparse, but serviceable. If Vallen was bought from his father by a performing troupe, how did he also take his father's "greatest masterpiece" with him? Its also almost too convenient that his father's greatest work was a set of throwing knives- which Vallen happened to learned how to use while in the troupe. A Royal smith crafting weapons for nobles and knights? Giving them daggers as opposed to fine swords?- I feel like it would make more sense for his masterpiece to be a single piece.