I'm sorry, it's probably just me, but the question is greatly confusing me.
I'm sorry, it's probably just me, but the question is greatly confusing me.
@DarkwolfX37
The first and second ones are sad, although the second one is sad for the sake of several lives. The third one is tamer and quite interesting, but I'm hovering between that and number two.
@DarkwolfX37
3, because it seems the most realistic and developed, but all three adopt very similar tones, themes, and motifs.
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Cute!
You monster.
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dead little brother doesn't count as sad lol
Alright but why are two and three better than one?
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3 is the most realistic?
These are rough drafts, so development is notwithstanding.
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Character-wise, yes.
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elaborate
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The other two felt much shallower than the third. The first two were "Woe is me, I'm depressed, bad things happen, a wish can save everything maybe." The third is "How can I tweak the system to the extent that all of your loopholes are broken?"
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And that's more realistic for a 16 year old girl?
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The reactions based on the personality were, not personality based on the actions. And it felt the least cliche.
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reword
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The way you set up their personalities, 3 acted the most realistically, and 1 or 2 sounds like setting up for a fanfic while 3 sounds like an actual work.
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So this is why the page took ages to load.
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Quoting it will make it take twice as long as the delay it caused.
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Habit.
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