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Yes, these are what I'm looking for.


I've made the requested changes :)

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I edited my sheet, added in two families she works for as well as fixed the little formatting issue.
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@Gcold I might be going in over my head in terms of my capabilities, but I 'believe' the revisions I've made should give Morris enough of a motive to stay in Sopahn -- and perhaps even a little bit of tension when trying to make choices? As for the Vyas Family themselves, I hope I got the main outline down well enough to understand the pickle Beni's supposed to be in.
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@Kingfisher, I'd like you to go deeper with Delilah's personality. Specifically, how did she develop her caring exterior and ruthless exterior? Also, tell us how she got her gun.

@Greenie, good. Just add in Kamala's birth place and specify her current residence when you drop the sheet in our roster. You can use Ghaverdasanna Townhomes, Southside, which is also where Veejay lives.

@Virgil, you've given Benjamin some connections to Sopahn, however, his bio is still vague. As it stands, Benjamin's background isn't well-explained, and is confusing to read with a lot of metaphors. I don't think you are making a lot of improvements to your character. Sorry, I cannot include you in this RP based on your submissions.
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@Greenie, good. Just add in Kamala's birth place and specify her current residence when you drop the sheet in our roster. You can use Ghaverdasanna Townhomes, Southside, which is also where Veejay lives.


Oh shoot, I didn't realize I never wrote where she was born. Sorry about that, I'll get onto it ASAP.

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And posted ^_^ Hope all's well!
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@Virgil, you've given Benjamin some connections to Sopahn, however, his bio is still vague. As it stands, Benjamin's background isn't well-explained, and is confusing to read with a lot of metaphors. I don't think you are making a lot of improvements to your character. Sorry, I cannot include you in this RP based on your submissions.


Fair enough; Take care you all.
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@Peik, approved.
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@Kingfisher, I'd like you to go deeper with Delilah's personality. Specifically, how did she develop her caring exterior and ruthless exterior? Also, tell us how she got her gun.


I've got a 10-6 shift today, but I'll try my very best to get these changes up tonight :)

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Opening post is slightly delayed due to my busy schedule. Will try to get it up ASAP.
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I've added the additional changes to Delilah's CS.
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@Kingfisher, approved. You may add in Delilah.
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Not sure if I'd have the time to join in something so detailed and wonderful looking (plus it seems I've missed deadlines and what not), but I'd just like to say I'll be reading along with ya'll and should your doors open I'll likely try and get a CS up.

Also hey Kingfisher... I don't stalk you...much...
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Not sure if I'd have the time to join in something so detailed and wonderful looking (plus it seems I've missed deadlines and what not), but I'd just like to say I'll be reading along with ya'll and should your doors open I'll likely try and get a CS up.

Also hey Kingfisher... I don't stalk you...much...


Wouldn't have it any other way, old friend ;)
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@Tsar Gatto, welcome, good to have your interest.

We defintely still have room for extra players and characters. You can still apply right now. Have any ideas in particular?
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Splendid! I believe I will have a good go at getting a character up.

So far my main ideas would be:

Some sort of anti-capitalist eco-terrorist type character, but one whom is 'undercover' within an organisation (CDA maybe?) and has been for some time. Currently he/she is split between their own ideological beliefs and the more and more extreme action being pushed by the group and if it's all worth it anymore. Likely drug addiction as well as stressful and overly dramatic love triangle type situation.

Criminal mastermind of sorts - like a 'Cat Burglar extraordinaire'. Also lots of fingers in lots of pies. Probably a high class 'better than everyone else' type of person. Maybe a little bit of bounty hunting on the side, but only specific jobs. Abhors 'the rules', whatever they may be. Almost definitely sociopathic and very manipulative, unable to develop deeper relationships due to this and very narcissistic ways.

I need to sit down and get cracking and see which flows better, but open to thoughts/suggestions at this stage definitely.
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This better not die goddamn
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I'm still working on my CS - weekend now so will be knuckling down and getting it done and up with upmost haste!

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This better not die goddamn


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