[OOC] The War of the Three: Exodus (Page 10)

[OOC] The War of the Three: Exodus Page 10

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Why am I looking at a four pages long NPC CS?

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No KoL, here's a better question; Why create a Fire Mage when over half the PCs have some form of Fire Resistance or immunity now?

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No no, I have a much better question...

Why so rude?

(And no KoL it wont be four pages long whatever Im doing)

(Shaved some things off to be more NPC like)

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Name: Charlie.
Title: The Swordsman's Basilisk.
Type: Familiar / Pet.
Race: Plant Construct, Specifically Basil Serpent.
Age: Unknown.
Gender: N/A.  Referred to with male pronouns.
Height: Varies. Normally has the diameter of 4 feet.
Weight: Varies.
Quantity: Solo.
Appearance: A large snake, made from basil and with varying different styles at his disposal. Normally seen with his master, but can be left alone for decent periods of time.
Powers: 
- Demonic Detection : Can detect and differentiate demonic aura, but has no potency against demons.
- Form Manipulation : Can change form to accomodate larger sizes and different styles of combat at will.
Resistances & Immunities: 
- Slight plant-based resistances.
- Can regrow if given time alone from combat.
Weaknesses: 
- Incredibly weak to fire damage.
Skills: 
- Digging
- Sensing Emotions
- Slithering Around
- Unhinging Jaws
- Dodging
- Propulsion out of holes at incredible speeds.
Weapons & Equipment:
- Anatomical Advantages : Large fangs, tipped with potent venom. Thorny spines along back. Solid tail able to dent steel if hit hard enough. Not much else aside from that.
- Dented Armor : Broken armor made way in the past, but does exist.
Other: Nothing Yet.

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I tried to keep it short and sweet. I can elaborate on anything if needed.

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Looks complete to me. Approved by me.

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It's alright for me.

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No problems here.

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Fine by me.

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This CS is much better. Fine by me.

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Fire Midget is accepted by me.

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ok.

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My post will most likely come Friday.

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Name: Nina Dracalius
Title/Epiphet: Bahamut, The Dark Dragon King of Hell
Allegiance/Faction: The Demons of Hell
Race: Dragon King
Age: ???
Gender: Female
Height: 6'2
Summary: For as long as any could remember, there has been one constant in Hell. Despite how many rulers may come and go, despite the warring tribes that take each others territories on a near weekly basis, there has always been the Dark Dragon King. She slumbers on her mountain of gold, demolishing all who would dare challenge her for the right to be king. As of recent she was roused from her eternal rest by a wily thief who stole from her horde without her notice, naturally this could not go unpunished. The gold itself meant little to her, but for someone to have the audactiy to steal from her and run was unthinkable. She has decided to fight for Hell in hopes she might find the thief in her travels across the Nexus so she may punish the for daring to steal from her. And if she gets to crush some bugs for fun while she's at it, all the better.
Powers: Nina is a dragon, but not just any dragon. She is the ruler of all dragons who reside in Hell, so naturally she is the strongest of them as well. She uses overwhelming firepower and brute strength to power through foes, stomping anything in her way. 
Dragon's Darkness- Within Nina resides a darkness that she can channel into an overwhelming breath attack, the darkness sucks the life out of anything it touches and smothers all forms of energy. Holy beings have an innate resistance to this darkness, but even they will fall if they are foolish enough to stay in it.
Obsidian Greatsword- Nina wields a superheated Obsidian Greatsword to crush her enemies into a bloody pulp. It's not very good at cutting, but it's weight more than makes up for that fact. Only Nina can touch it without being burnt, for the flame within this greatsword is attuned to her alone.
Bahamut's Wrath- Nina continues to grow more and more wrathful in battle, her power increasing exponentially until she unleashes her true form...

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Plot twist: The thief was none but Diana!

The image is broken by the way. The Guild doesn't accept danbooru links for some reason.

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  Can a character be slightly related to something that already exists or no?

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Depends. Show us the idea or CS and we'll work from there.

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I may get a post to describe the ravine/crevasse and what you all are expected to find beyond it later today, if I can get done with around 50 more pages of reading and exercises today. If not, I'll have it during the weekend, very much likely in the Saturday.

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Right. I always forget about that.

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@Dealdric

Well, before any further evaluations of your character, I have to say that we don't take fandom based PCs. Mythology can be used as a theme but other fandoms not.

The reasoning is simple: This isn't a crossover RP or anything similar.

You are however encouraged to rework your character, cleaning any fandom elements as well as explaining some of the assumptions that your CS has, such as knowledge of her race, technology and background. Because all of this is very, very vague at the moment, relying only on others knowing the source material you used as base for this character.

Another, even more important note is to use blank lines between your paragraphs to make the sheet readable.

When these two issues have been addressed, we can work on evaluating your CS again.

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