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We are always accepting new people. The Machina and Hell factions are a little emptier than Heaven, but feel free to make a character for whatever.


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I just got done with my character’s history, took some time to come up with something that wasn’t complete trash for a demon of pure hunger.

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Storywise, everything is fine except for her title as Jörmungandr. The real Jörmungandr is currently being controlled by a GM so that's prohibited. Furthermore, for her Soul Consumption, can you describe exactly what kind of power souls give her. Is is a physical boost, an elemental ability like her heat powers, etc.

Aside from those points, I see nothing wrong with her. Edit them and she's fine by me. Await the others' opinion.
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Your character is pretty much ok, however, be aware that if she ever mentions that title of Jormungandr that's written on her backstory to anyone in the Nexus (or if others get to know about it), the reactions will easily vary from being laughed at on spot to being killed and laughed at on spot. It's possible that humans from a random world outside of the Nexus may have mistook her to the actual Worl'd Serpent but there's quite a wide gap between her and the true one.

She's ok, anyway. Just take note that the Nexus is not a kind place for people who don't like to kill, especially for Demons who don't like to kill. Everything else in the world is out for your blood after all.

Anyway, just wait for @floodtalon's word before moving her to the CS tab.
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I feel like she's a little underpowered to be honest. Enhanced strength, speed, and durability are all kind of a given in this setting, I suggest you maybe add some additional powers at least. I approve of the character as is, I just think you're going to have a tough time against other PCs.
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Thank you all for the incredible advice on how to improve her! I added two more powers to her list, Acid Reflex and Aura of Hunger to offset her underpowered ways, and I changed what the Norse called her, instead a spawn of the World-Eater.
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This is a lot better and I certainly feel like she has a much better chance in the Nexus now. Do keep in mind she has the opportunity to learn more while in the Nexus, such as upgrading her heat powers or learning to be more efficient with her soul magic. The sky is the limit here, the Nexus is a realm where the mighty thrive. As is, I accept her.
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Hey it's been some time and I was wondering how things have changed since last time I played. I have less rps I'm playing in so I should be more free. Would you give me a quick rundown of what has happened recently so I can/if I can jump in more easily?
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Not much has changed since you left, you can jump in with a new character whenever you please. You will need to reapply since this is a new thread, preferably with a new character as well. No offense but Harvester kinda gave us headaches.
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@Floodtalon Before he was finished I saw how he might have been annoying, but everything was approved by the time he joined. I'd prefer to keep him considering I really am not looking forward to creating an entirely new cs. I can change things to fit this new application thing however. I'd appreciate you letting me know what you all decide, thanks!
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Is this CS just here for reference? Because it doesn't use the new format required.
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You didn't use the new CS format. There are no weaknesses listed and no sample post. You just copy and pasted the CS from the last thread as far as I can tell.
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Hey yo man, glad to see you trying to get back in.

I had forgotten about Harvester, but way back in the original thread when BCtheEntity had let go of Maceroy, he also gave me control of Harvester for the future. Now, I liked Harvester as a concept, but I think it would be for the best if he stayed out of the setting. He was a messily made character with a lot of inconveniences for the GMs and the actual players.

I'd like Harvester to stay out of active playing, but overall I can't force you to do anything. At most, I'd like a request to make his character a bit less crazy and a bit more understandable and balanced (if that word even applies).

Edit - Sorry if I'm overstepping my authority as a player, but Harvester was too much of an inconvenient beast for me to control.
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It was posted for reference, I'd prefer not to have to craft an entirely new character.

Thanks garde. Isn't Wot known for its'insanely strong characters though? I'm fine with tweaking things here and there but I'd like to keep the core concept of his character intact. Since the character was given to you Garde, you have final say whether he lives or dies.

Like I said, this is entirely up to the GM's, and I really appreciate you all taking the time to address this.
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I leave the decision of Harvester to @Gardevoiran. Regardless of needing to make an entirely new character, you do need to reformat whatever CS you make into the new format.
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@thewindel Alright thanks. Up to you @Gardevoiran
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@Spiffy@TheWindel@floodtalon
Harvester does not return. I apologize, Spiffy, but the headaches it will cause to the GMs and myself are too great for me to comprehend right now with my semi-depressed mind.
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@Gardevoiran Alright thanks guys. Have a good night.
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