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Writing up my submission now :)
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@Spriggs27

I had an Idea of a Transformer race. Alien race that was highly adaptable and when war came to their planet they turned into the Weapons that waged the war. I was thinking of having my Char change to a All Terrain buggy and also his robot form. He won't be as giant as the Transformer cartoon/movies where a Seven foot long and Four foot high car turns to a Forty foot robot. Probably be max Ten feet. I know you said you don't care as long as it looks good, but I'm asking first since I felt it might be pushing it.
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Any thoughts or feedback would be appreciated :D
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@Sophrus I think you should add a bit more to the personality, besides that you seem okay really, I would suggest a smaller fighter image but I think our ship can hold it, I'd also suggest a primary but if you don't exactly want one it's cool too.

@MonachromeX2 Looks good, don't really know what else I could say about him but he looks okay.

@bloonewb Um, I don't know if your character would fit in this group honestly, I think you should edit the personality and history to give him some experience or training of some sort to be a sniper really, but I mostly feel as if your char wouldn't really fit in with the rest of the group and think you should make edits.

@Dark Light When you're finished it mention me, I'm not sure what to think of them yet.

@KatKook Interesting, I hope you can keep up with the android machine act when you post, looks okay.

@Zelosse He seems edgy, I will allow him.

@Thecrash20 I'm sorry but I feel that is a bit much.

@GingerBoi123 So Rambo first blood in space, I don't think much is wrong with him besides all the edgy names, but it seems okay.
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@Spriggs27 Why do you say that? If you could give me a couple of suggestions, then perhaps I can change the character to fit the group better.
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@bloonewb Well I'd like to remind not just you, but everyone that we're space pirates as well as people fighting against the big bad space billionares. It's more of bad vs evil.

I feel your char simply wouldn't fit from his personality, He seems more of a religious type journeying with space pirates, it seems kinda strange that a man of the faith would be journeying with us also he doesn't really know the religion that he's trying to preach to others who may or may not want to hear it from him, also he's a sniper who's mainly quiet on a team of people, when snipers work within teams they can't exactly be silent for large amounts of time from what I know. Then there's the fact you want him to be a philosopher with a group of pirates.

Plus on the other side you haven't really given him any real training or experience with a rifle, just that he was enraptured by a religion that he doesn't fully know.

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But Idk what I could suggest, maybe dropping the religiousness, I don't mean to be rude towards it if it's your actual faith, but I think it would be kinda strange to have that in a pirate, I'm sorry.

I would suggest adding some experience with handling a rifle in his history or personality because you don't have anything there for sniping or any skills in it.

I just personally feel as if they are a peaceful character or a non-violent person among people who would be annoyed by his faith or useless in a fight, I don't mean to call your cs useless but I feel as if your char just doesn't fit when we have someone like Hadovich who's all rip and tear and feel as if he'd go against us or want to leave us for the crimes we might cause, do you see where I'm going? I don't mean to be rude I really don't, but like I said I'd suggest dropping the religious part of your cs, I'm sorry but I don't think it will work here.
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@Spriggs27 I'm sure there is a way to keep the personality and goals of my character, while still integrating your suggestions. Allow me to tinker around with my character a bit, I'll see what I can do.
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I don't necessarily see a problem with a religious character or a philosopher pirate. The character could work with the right execution though I would think that it's a bit tricky. Philosophy wise, there would be plenty of time traveling on a ship and laying low from the law so I expect most characters would have hobbies to occupy them during such times, why not philosophy?

Skill wise I do agree that there should be something.
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@Spriggs27 I see a lot of "looks okay" which to me reads as "I'm not particularly enthusiastic about approving it but I'm going to."

If I may backseat GM for a moment, you're gonna burn out if that's the case. You're going to grow bored of your own RP and burn out. If you're burdening yourself with a character cast you have unspoken issue with then your motivation is gonna dry up fast. Its not fun to put your foot down on stuff and it makes you feel like you're an ass. I know firsthand, I know that for me I would regret not putting my foot down more later down the road.

Disregard all of that if I'm not reading your reaction right (I'm only so good at that through text). In the meantime, I put together a thing ... formatted to my own tastes in aesthetics and organization but all the relevant info is there and hopefully sufficiently prominent (lemme know if any of the required info fails to jump out at you sufficiently).

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FINALLY!!! Another Alien. Though I was going to be the only Non-human there for a while. lol
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So I'm in right?
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@Spriggs27 A heavy WIP, but I wanted to see if you like the base Idea before I come up with his Personality, History, and fine tune the sheet. If you're not a fan I'll go with a more Basic alien Concept. The idea is like making him the Attack dog or 'Groot' of the Pirates. He will be way more intelligent then titles just given, but he is a powerhouse for the team. While strong he has key weaknesses, but when they hurt they really hurt.



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@Spriggs27Haha, lol xD

Should I move him over to the CS tab then?
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@Thecrash20 Lol. I was looking for pics for my character and wanted to use the one you used 😂
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@Sierra It's pretty good, hopefully someone will try to ask if they can ride her drone into battle or if she does.

@KatKook No you leave with your 2A pictures, I'm joking your in. Sorry if I seemed unclear

@Thecrash20 Wait what? "Depending on the heat of the Weapons his Plasma cannon will actually begin to melt his skin, Liquid's skin is exactly that, Liquid." What? How do you burn liquid?

@GingerBoi123 Yeah man it's cool

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@Sierra It's pretty good, hopefully someone will try to ask if they can ride her drone into battle or if she does.

@KatKook No you leave with your 2A pictures, I'm joking your in. Sorry if I seemed unclear

@Thecrash20 Wait what? "Depending on the heat of the Weapons his Plasma cannon will actually begin to melt his skin, Liquid's skin is exactly that, Liquid." What? How do you burn liquid?

@GingerBoi123 Yeah man it's cool


Ah, well I made sure to put this: "The only thing Biological left in liquid is a few important Organs and his Skeleton structure. His Synthetic liquid skin is closer to loose Clay than actual Liquid" because you can't have an actual liquid body, that's absurd. Although to someone actually looking at it, it looks like a Liquid body. Swirls, splashes, falls off. You technically can burn liquid(Sorta not really its the vapors the liquid expels). Liquid skin just rolls off the tongue better than "Watery Clay skin" too...
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I don't necessarily see a problem with a religious character or a philosopher pirate. The character could work with the right execution though I would think that it's a bit tricky. Philosophy wise, there would be plenty of time traveling on a ship and laying low from the law so I expect most characters would have hobbies to occupy them during such times, why not philosophy?

Skill wise I do agree that there should be something.


Well it would kinda be hard for him to be religious when he doesn't know that much about the religion he's practicing or even understand it's language.
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Well it would kinda be hard for him to be religious when he doesn't know that much about the religion he's practicing or even understand it's language.


Why? If executed well, it could make for an intriguing character. I'm curious to see how it's implemented. I've listened to music and the like without understanding the lyrics and still found it beautiful or powerful. This char does the same with the religious sermons? That's my guess.
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@Thecrash20 Wouldn't that just heat up the clay and harden his skin? Making him more easier to kill?
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