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yoooo it's the zoester
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Halloo! Dropping my interest and starting work on a Hero archetype character. c:
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@Dead Cruiser@Mintz
Just wanting to check in on you guys, see how your CS progress is going or if you need any help!
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@TruthHurts22 My monitor is busted so I won't be able to write a CS until my new one comes in.
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Spent a bit too long thinking things through, and now someone else is looking at doing the Hero Archetype; but hey, that's just on me for not saying what I was up to. xD. So I'm working from the ground up, trying to think up a new concept. I think I'll have something in store before next week. :)
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I suppose I should say I'm gunning for The Lover, just for clarity
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Hello hello...here's my character. Let me know if there's anything I should change or add or if I should just toss the whole thing out the window and start over. @TruthHurts22

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@Mintz Hey there, sorry about that. I definitely feel you on spending too long thinking things through, though. Until now I'm still mulling over a reasonable backstory! D:>

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Feel ya on that! Though recently an idea's cropped up in my mind for someone relating to the Jester Archetype, so with any luck I'll be getting that up soon. Maybe today, if I'm lucky!
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@Zoey Boey Looks good! EMily's part of the group.
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@TruthHurts22 hooray! thanks for working through it with me
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Here's a shit-head high schooler with a knack for burning stuff and causing trouble. All in good fun!....Normally.

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@Mintz Huh, never expected someone to transplant a whole concept from Psychonauts... other than me, obviously. I'm not sure how Mental Connection would work just yet, since the interactions and changes would largely be confined to physical, uh, "physical" actions taken when Diving, but I won't discount the power just yet! Sure I can cobble something together.

Nothing seems out of order, so Declan's in!
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I hope I made this on enough understanding of what's going on here. If I'm off the mark, feel free to slap me silly.

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@Wayward I appreciate the effort put into the writing of this, it's really something. That said, the flowery nature of the sheet is, uh, leaving me with a few gaps in description for the character.

For one thing, the Powers section. No problems with the actual powers he's got, but instead I wanted clarification on what you wrote in the Dive section. Are you saying that Liam's version of the dive can be of a potent enough nature to fully 'damage' a person's psyche without the prerequisite of the Dive occurring? Is this just a default thing that can happen, like he's a speeding bullet, or is it a thing he needs to consciously do?

Then there's the History section, which is missing a couple of key points - namely, what Liam's use of Diving was and the consequences of it. The way you wrote it makes it come across as if Liam only reflected on himself after he Broke and hadn't actually used the power. There'd be no reason for the ESP to capture him if he hasn't done anything, you know?
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Dropping my incomplete sheet here to reserve the Everyman! Will be sure to complete the history and break soon after I'm done with assignments.


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Fair 'nuff! Yeah, I'm pretty big on Psychonauts, and when I was crafting him, I thought that it made for an interesting inclusion. If it don't quite fit in, I'll be happy to remove it, but otherwise be sure to tell me whatcha got in store for it! I'll be eagerly anticipating it. :3
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@Wayward I appreciate the effort put into the writing of this, it's really something. That said, the flowery nature of the sheet is, uh, leaving me with a few gaps in description for the character.

For one thing, the Powers section. No problems with the actual powers he's got, but instead I wanted clarification on what you wrote in the Dive section. Are you saying that Liam's version of the dive can be of a potent enough nature to fully 'damage' a person's psyche without the prerequisite of the Dive occurring? Is this just a default thing that can happen, like he's a speeding bullet, or is it a thing he needs to consciously do?

Then there's the History section, which is missing a couple of key points - namely, what Liam's use of Diving was and the consequences of it. The way you wrote it makes it come across as if Liam only reflected on himself after he Broke and hadn't actually used the power. There'd be no reason for the ESP to capture him if he hasn't done anything, you know?


Ah. OK. All makes sense.

In terms of his Dive's function... if it can ben worked in the way I'm thinking, I would consider it in terms of his entering of peoples' minds results in less of a full immersion and more of a "pop the door open, throw something inside that goes boom and get out." Only Diving in a short ways, if you will, and focusing his psychic power to briefly disrupt another's mental state; I reckon it would be akin to causing a power surge in a person's mind, a telepathic equivalent of an emp. Or am I completely missing the point of Diving?
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@Wayward You're missing the point a little bit yeah. Dives aren't just a means to an end, they're what the roleplay is gonna be based around. If Liam is incapable to "fully" Diving then that leaves him in the dust. Plus, I don't think the ESP would let him do anything if he's a walking brain scrambler.
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I was thinking of it more on the lines of like a very dangerous form of telepathy in which instead of simply reading the individuals mind you can go in and do some serious damage which makes it forbidden because of how dangerous it is. I could be wrong with my assumption on what I thought it was.
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