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OK, I finally managed to have something ready for the go.

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@MagusDream, Greece does not exist in this setting.
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Greece could still exist, but the greek gods wouldn't necessarily be greek gods. Every culture probably has different names for all the gods. Though if the god was in greece then he'd probably refer to himself with a greek name.
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Greece could still exist, but the greek gods wouldn't necessarily be greek gods. Every culture probably has different names for all the gods. Though if the god was in greece then he'd probably refer to himself with a greek name.


I mean, this setting isn't Earth.
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I mean, this setting isn't Earth.


Oh right, whoops. Guess it can be not-Greece or something.
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@MagusDream

As an aside, I know from experience that if this RP has any one fault, it's that the same free-form freedom that makes character creation, backstory flexibility and worldbuilding so great also has the downside that there's honestly very little established about the world directly other than the primary location of the RP, the city of Rhea.

So, this RP’s world-building can be summarized as Not!semi-modern irl countries + Magic: YES. It’s a very free-form setting that can be hard to wrap your head around when first diving in, mostly because there’s always something new to discover, especially when a new player joins up. It hasn’t really absolutely stabilized into any one thing beyond those parameters, which leaves it incredibly flexible to most exotic backstories. For the most part, Rhea (the independent super-city the RP is based in) is the most technologically and magically advanced society in the lands and has no real IRL country equivalent. Other lands vary in modernity, with the likes of Vauquelin effectively being stuck in the post French Revolution (the equivalent of which occurred 3 years ago).

So, there’s definitely some mixing of eras in this RP.
Part of that is that the only place the GMs really directly fleshed out personally is Rhea and some of the broad world lore. Everything else? The players. We’ve been essentially collaborating on the lore.

GM(s) did -and still continue to expand upon- the independent Supercity, Rhea.
Dezual did Vauquelin (Not!France)
Letter Bee did Izumo (Not!Japan)
Pariel did a bit of Albion (Not!Britain)
Crowvette did Yekaterina (Not!Russia)
Instead of an (Earth) country, I did a lot of the lore for Demons and fleshed out a bit of the Gods and Great Evil history.
Just as some examples.

I lead with this context to preface that this RP's setting is most definitely not Earth.
So, in regards to your character's setup, for all intents and purposes, neither Greece or the Greek Gods/Pantheon/Myth exist. Certainly, for your backstory, you can absolutely conjure up and flesh out a bit of what would then effectively be the Not!Greece of the RP, but we aren't dealing with an Earth setting. Also, in regards to Lambda's godly patron, as the Greek Gods don't exist, neither do the Titans.

Gods in this setting are one and all living fundamental aspects of reality. The death of even a single one would devastate their entire domain of reality. As such, any and all potential lore reliant on or involving the deaths of gods is kinda nonviable. And the Greek lore is definitely such. Also, most gods are a little more specific/narrow in their domains. A singular god that has domains over stars, planets and astrology is a bit of a stretch, and you really lose basically nothing by merely having him be the God of Astrology or God of Stars alone.

Anyway, let's get to the powers.

Character approval generally goes through a bit of a "trial by fire" 'round these here parts, as the Discord server sits in a circle, looming ominously over potential incomers. Which is to say, GMs and fellow players alike usually have a bit of voice in what looks reasonable. That said, let's get to it. We'll handle the easy stuff first.

Sub-2: Stardust flight
The only real gripes seem to be that it might be a little out of place with his theme, but overall, mechanically, this ability almost trivially got a pass, enough that it didn't even provoke mentioning except as an afterthought.

Sub-3: Starlight Healing
The description and listed feats are incongruent. If you could clarify what this ability can actually do in a bit more detail, it would likely go by without issue. We have some pretty strong healers, but you were indeed correct to assume that actual resurrection would likely not be viable. In short, if you could list out a couple of the most severe things he could treat (physically and spiritually), instead of the minor stuff, that should get this a pass.

Magic Item: Astral Bearer
There were a number of concerns with this, namely because the flowery description implied some potentially crazy capabilities. However, a closer look seems to say this is merely intended to allow Lambda to cast his magic during the day, when it normally could only work at night. If that's the case, then this is an easy pass. Although, for clarification's sake, some pertinent questions would be: What would happen if this thing were broken? And does it provide any other benefits other than allowing casting/star communication during daytime?

Now, we get to the actually troublesome bits.

Demigod:
So, you want to play a demigod? Sure. Great even! Given the flexibility of the setting, your method of his semi-ascension is viable. You're actually the first one to take this route. However, it should be noted, unless you specifically dedicate a power slot to it, being a demigod will not provide him any tangible benefits beyond flavor. He should still operate within generally human limitations physically and such otherwise. We weren't sure what you were intending for this, but this is just to clarify.

Sub-1: Wish Granting
So, to say the least, this was not received all that well. The general consensus was not just "hell no", but (to quote the main GM, STK) "Hell to the no, to the no no noooo". As written, this power has way too much room for abuse and misuse, no matter the character's personality or intentions. We've tossed around potential limits to add, but in the end, it was really only decided that this either needed to go entirely or be narrowed down into a far more specific and/or crippled wish power. It's hard to say what the final result could be, however, without asking you directly. So, before we go any further, what are you hoping for the character to do with this kind of power?

Core: Wishes of the Stars
We've already established that Gods from Earth mythology aren't possible, which means this needs rewording. This also says he can "Generate Stars"...? Did I read that right? If that's as literal as it sounds, it's probably getting noped. Aside from those bits, this power is fine. However, it was noted that this doesn't really feel like an actual "Core" power that all the sub-powers branch off of. Granted, his "star child" theme is pretty clear across the board, but this power doesn't really mesh with the flight or healing. If I were to suggest anything, I'd actually say to make this Core power to be his Demigodhood outright and have everything else branch off of that. Something like: Core Power - Demigod of the Stars would be far more flexible and not leave the overall powerset feeling so janky.

Anyway, that's pretty much it on the powers end. I'm sure I've missed a thing or two, but this was the major stuff that bore mentioning first. His backstory may potentially need some adjustment (there were questions about that whole "abandoned infant" thing and the fact that a full-on GOD is just walking around in the mortal realm). In the case of the latter, given what I've just told you about the nature of gods in this setting, you might be able to see where that could be a problem, and the need for an Avatar or something might be pertinent, depending. Just a thought. Overall, however, besides being a bit on the "pushing it" side of exotic, his backstory is generally fine.
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Name: Austin Brightvale

Age: 16

Grade: St. Laurel's, Second Year.

Biography: Austin was born to two 'Ungifted' parents who somehow avoided the lure of extremist organizations like the 'Null Meta' creed, and were able to blunt the sharp edges of prejudice by being skilled enough at what they do - accounting and handicrafts - to live in a well-off manner. In time, they were even able to adopt two children - sisters - who did have Gifts before conceiving Austin as they were growing older.

Austin was an average child, although he was intelligent, but his parents took care to raise him right, so that his intelligence did not isolate him. He loved music, sweets, and even playing kickball. He loved his friends and family, and adored his two older siblings. He didn't care that he didn't have a Gift yet, although one of the few sore spots in his life was when he was reminded that his parents didn't have those either, that no God had chosen them. It didn't matter; he loved them anyway.

When his power finally shone, when he was able to lift up others' hearts with a Gift from the God of Hope, he hoped his parents would accept him anyway, that the pain they had gone through would be lifted, not sharpened, by the revelation that he had a gift. And his hope was rewarded when they embraced him, before inviting his sisters to join in as well.

Austin vowed to live a life worthy of his family, neither taking risks or trying to grow up too soon like most others his age, but also not backing down from a fight if it did come down to one. He wanted to make others happy, he wanted to make his family happy, and as he grew up, he wanted to find love with a boy or girl of his own age, and lift their spirits up as well.

But for now, he was content; will he stay that way?

Powers:

Core Power: Child of Hope - Austin emits a golden aura that in addition to increasing his own and other people's luck, also boosts his physical health and resistance to diseases mundane and magical. This aura, when meeting an equal and opposite Core Power, is canceled out and cancels out said equal and opposite Core Power (sorry, Crow!).

Note that he can choose to turn off his aura so as not to draw attention to himself.

First Power: Uplifting Spirit - Austin can dispel negative energy as a reflex, dispelling curses and similar powers and weakening Undead or Demons. Note however that if a person's curse is inflicted, on themselves, by their own Core Power, Austin can only dispel it for 24 hours and only if it is willingly accepted.

He can also choose to refuse to dispel a source of negative energy after a moment's consideration, which is useful as negative energy and its users are not always evil in intention.

Second Power: Wings of Light - Two bright wings made of pure 'hard light' spring forth from the back of Austin's jacket, allowing him to fly as fast as a civilian helicopter; these two bright wings can also be used as weapons and makeshift shields as their glowing feathers can detach themselves from the wings to throw themselves at an enemy or form into sheets of light which can block bullets.

Third Power: Song of Avalon - Austin stands up and sings, and holy light rains down on a space the size of an area the size of a suburban home, passing through mundane roofs and floors in order to reach Austin and his friends, whose physical wounds are healed by contact with the light. As it continues to rain, more wounds are healed, although Austin can exempt any foe he has from the light's healing effects. When his voice gives out or he depletes all his Mana reserves, the rain of holy light ends.

Relationships:

He loves his family and may or may not be preparing a love confession to Ken Illustrious Ikari.
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OK, I'm willing to try this again, after giving it much thought based on @Lewascan2 told about my first try, and after gathering the info needed to understand the lore in general. I have some more to show today, so I want to see if these three work now.





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So, is there anything that I need to explain, fix, or delete about Lambda, Kurogane and Zephyr? If not, can I move them to the CS tab or not yet?
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So, is there anything that I need to explain, fix, or delete about Lambda, Kurogane and Zephyr? If not, can I move them to the CS tab or not yet?


Perhaps ping the GMs?
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So, is there anything that I need to explain, fix, or delete about Lambda, Kurogane and Zephyr? If not, can I move them to the CS tab or not yet?


I don't think there is, actually, but that's just my gut feeling. The GMs have yet to chime in, but I'm fairly sure these sheets will get accepted. Just a matter of when they get looked over fully, as the GMs are busy for various reasons currently. So definitely don't drop them in the CS tab yet though.
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Perhaps ping the GMs?


No, that's not necessary. I can wait for the approval, it's just to see if someone else has a personal input about them.

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I don't think there is, actually, but that's just my gut feeling. The GMs have yet to chime in, but I'm fairly sure these sheets will get accepted. Just a matter of when they get looked over fully, as the GMs are busy for various reasons currently. So definitely don't drop them in the CS tab yet though.


Sure thing. IRL can be difficult sometimes, so I can wait.
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@MagusDream I wouldn't worry about any of your characters, from what I can tell they are all good to go. But I am not one of the GM's. Hope you will come to enjoy your stay in the RP, we do have a discord channel aswell which you can join.
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Thanks @Dezuel. And I'm sure I will enjoy, the premise is pretty interesting and enjoyable.

About the Discord, can I join in even if I'm not approved? If yes, I'll gladly jump in.
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Thanks @Dezuel. And I'm sure I will enjoy, the premise is pretty interesting and enjoyable.

About the Discord, can I join in even if I'm not approved? If yes, I'll gladly jump in.


I asked the GMs, but they have not answered yet. However, there are a few non-players on the Discord, so...
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OK, I'm willing to try this again, after giving it much thought based on @Lewascan2 told about my first try, and after gathering the info needed to understand the lore in general. I have some more to show today, so I want to see if these three work now.







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@supertinyking, I'll be moving Kurogane and Zephyr for now, but I had to edit Lambda a little after discussing it with everyone else in the Discord server, so he's resubmitted for a new evaluation.
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Hey lads, mind giving these a formal approval? I know I'm a GM and all, but like still. I'm going to use them in the next arcs. Speaking of which... I should probably post what they're going to be...



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So here's the next upcoming arcs, everyone! I've hashed this out with STK before, so it should be alright on the official side of things. Once again, it's two from me and others from I don't know where... but at this point in the RP, if you have something you want your character to do, just ask us and we can help you do it!!

It's a bit of a free-form section in between our major story-arcs, and the previous RP worked something like this in the first place too... So if you don't like the current plots, don't mind them and just try to have fun!



Lord Kiburi's Wonderful Team Building Exercise!


Lord Kiburi has taken an interest in the powerful students who showed up to destroy the plans of Dr. Nightman. He has arranged some kind of formal training excursion for a select group of students. Invitations and enquiries have appeared through the proper channels, but this is Lord Kiburi after all. His definition of "formal" has always been... rather loose. Who knows what exactly is going to take place there...

[GM Notes] This arc is open to a few participants! While I won't want to spoil too much, the door is open for two 'sides' so to speak. A protagonist side and an antagonist side. One slot for the protagonists side is reserved for Chinami, the ghostly super-being currently being played by @Lewascan2! Because it is a continuation of the Therapy arc, I'd originally wanted Rev from @Dezuel and Ken from @Letter Bee as well, but Letter Bee has expressed he wants Ken doing something else in the meantime.

On the antagonist's side is going to be at least one slot filled out by me, but I will add a couple other characters there if need be! If you feel like your character is the best of the best, and is likely to have caught the eye of Lord Kiburi, feel free to volunteer them for this arc!


A normal day at St. Laurel's...

It's just an ordinary day at St. Laurel's. The classes have yet to begin. The sun is shining on the massive campus, with happy students milling about, attending to their morning club duties or simply hanging out with friends. Nothing out of the ordinary is happening. Nothing out of the ordinary at all. That being said, there is a small celebration that had decided to be enjoyed on this fateful day. Founder's Day, a celebration for the founder of St. Laurel's School of Divine Excellence. Not something to even skip classes over, a school assembly in the middle of the day and that would be all.

The more troublesome clubs are being kept under close scrutiny by the St. Laurel's Disciplinary Committee. Surely, nothing is going to happen under their stalwart supervision! And surely nothing that could end up rousing the entire school in the process...

[GM Notes] This is the designated arc for ALL St. Laurel's currently in play in the RP! But don't let the ominous description disturb you!! This is intended to just be a slice-of-life arc for the most part, to introduce your various characters in a more natural setting than the previous arcs might've had! You can have your characters talking to their friends, or going out and making them!!

Take the chance for some player interaction as well if you so desire!!
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