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I keep forgetting to mention some stuff, so I'll do it now that I won't be double posting.

-RP's gunna start at the end of next week, on the 18-19th.

-I'll be adding more NPCs to the character tab. Some will be new, some will be returning like the cat girl I added.

-Watchers are 100% meta and have no real effect on how the horrors regard your characters in story. Heiphorion and Bicoradoon might seem similar to Aigorost in that they do nothing, but that won't be the case in SoM. Their gimmicks just aren't compatible with a short form RP like this. Heiphorion makes it easier for brooding loners to be brooding loners and Bicoradoon wants to see your character go out in a blaze of glory.
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Interesting. Nina will be naturally inclined to broodmax if other players don't engage with her, but if people like her I might change her watcher to Aigorost for SoM if that's acceptable.

I also nominally picked Maverick Alternative because it seemed like the least popular choice from the last thread, but my half-baked idea is that it's still early enough that she can be convinced by other factions if all the newcomers decide to go Maverick this time, only the GEMINI players really want her, or some other interesting thing happens with the freelancers. The image I originally had in mind for her mundane form was much more Maverick-appropriate, so there's a noticeable sidestep of continuity there in her CS, but that aesthetic had a lot of overlap with Cirilla and I felt like bucking the female water mage stereotype of showing midriff. I really like her new image, but I can be swayed if it's really important for her to look a certain way.
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@Emeth Watchers are pretty easy to swap between, so that sounds fine by me. And it's not like a watcher will ever lock you hard into doing something. It just tends to provide incentives for certain play styles. If you intend for Nina to be hard to get along with, you might find it thematic that her watcher prevents her from reaching her full potential when trying to work with others.

There's no issue with the sheet, 'twas but a meme. Tacticool uniforms tend to be seen as a GEMINI aesthetic but there are always outliers. Mika looks like an Arabian dancer when transformed despite being GEMINI. Nina was a freelancer and dances to her own tune so it makes sense that she wouldn't look like the metalheads/cyberpunks of Maverick Alternative.
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@Nakushita

Your genre doesn't have the max MP listed next to capacity, which should be (30). You also have 5 notes at the three casting levels when you should only have 3. Increase your capacity (while reducing an other attribute or two) or lower the number of notes you have.

You've shorted yourself 20 credits. Redistribute a grade of wealth onto something else or buy 20 credits worth of items.

I don't typically like Aigorost name drops in backstories (or any horror really) but Himiko does seem like the only person other than Oros the Mad that might ramble about a patron she's never met before. Nothing needs to be changed, just commenting.

Also what's "Squisy"? I noticed you underlined those letters and I can't make heads or tails of it. Also you have a strike through a random "h" for some reason. Squishy? I dunno, seems kinda silly.

Take care of that and we'll see about getting you approved.
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@Nakushita Looks good. Squizzle is accepted. But before swimming her over to the character tab remember to list her max MP, which should be 30.
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I probably missed / messed up something, but we'll see. Better to get feedback, so here she is.


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@The World I hadn't realized our cast was so socially awkward.

Her backstory might need to be updated a little, since I'm sure she's been in Pax for more than a week by now. But I'm not gunna stress over that for a returning character.

Marrie "Gale sometimes" Knight is looking good. She can *Gara Gura theme* her way to the Character tab.
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A GUY JOINS THE RP! SORT OF!



Roland can be moved to the Character Tab and get this party started.

In case anyone was wondering, the trick weapon was discussed with me in PMs, and will be possible when the feature system goes live. Normally an esper can't have a transforming weapon or one that does two different damage types.

EDIT: Actually, it was brought to my attention that you have double-cast listed as a note. You do not need to list double-cast to use it, it's simply yours if you meet the requirements. So you can swap that out for something else. Given that you have a few notes that would be good to cast on yourself, might I suggest Backfeed? If they are going to cast a melody on an enemy and then themselves, it's a less expensive option than double cast.
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Oooh I see, thank you I'll go with your suggestion!
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With the first GM post just a day or two away, I should probably bring up "proper banner etiquette."

Your banner can be as complex or as simple as you like, but traditionally we've posted a "stat block" under the banner in a hider that keeps track of relevant information that you don't want showing up in the body of a post. Things like your max and current MP, the formula for any melodies you're casting, and things of that nature. In the past there was an attempt to put a condensed version of a character sheet under your banner, but 80% of the information is irrelevant or so condensed I needed to end up looking at the actual character sheet anyway.

For this RP with V2, I just need you to list the following information

-A link to your sheet (It makes navigation easier)
-Max and current MP
-Items from your Backup
-Features relevant to your post (When Implemented)
-Attributes relevant to any actions you may be taking (Purely Optional)

Bionca's Banner Stuff might look like this on a round where she uses a melody to pull a target.



Including the effect of each note isn't mandatory, but it does help communicate what you're doing when melodies get more complex.
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Sorry, sorry, took too long but I found a temp to fill in for Finn!


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@Majoraa One of Naku's favorite face claims!

Alright, so a few things about All Ice:

-I'm going to assume you're taking the Lunatic variant of Astoponio. You should note that only because there are 3 of them.

-Watchers aren't really espers. I'm keeping the sheets the same mostly because it makes things easier to manage, but she wouldn't have a true grimoire. It's fine for her to have the bolo. Normally travelers have a disguised and true form (similar to monster's in Ari's CYOA RP) but it's fine for Alice to function like a magical girl with her "true form" being her "transformation." She just isn't a true esper.

-Alice has 15 notes. At A Capacity, she can have 8 of each type or 24 total.

Make those changes and then Alice can traverse the omniverse and land in the character tab.
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Yeah I was kinda confused at how many notes were needed since everyone else had different numbers, probably should've just asked you about it. I'll let you know when I made the proper edits to this poor intern rq. 👍👍
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Here's an update to my CS from before, and struggling with Genre like Notes and stuff. I have ideas to get Summon Minion/Elite, Craft for weapons or mods to Instrument, spiderman swinging with threads (Push/Pull I think), and possibly Transplace to swap between caster and Instrument, but hard to figure out how to put it all together.

Edit: Finished Genre section.
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I'm glad talking to the other players were able to help you along.

Nukkelina Is accepted. You can string her along to the character tab. Just be sure to change "Summon Minion Elite" to "Summon Elite" as the first one isn't a real note/confuses me.

After you're caught up, you can have her arrive in the Golden Trove's lobby with the other Mavericks.
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Alright fam, we doin' features now.

I didn't have as much time to work on this as I'd like, but hopefully that gives you an idea of how things work. There isn't enough in there right now for everyone to get something unique, and most of what is there was to match old players or was put in because I knew a new character would want it. But remember that you can suggest something. Also I should mention that the idea of a system like this is that there will be some overlap. I don't think two espers having the "Diverse Elemental Affinity" feature is going to be a problem.

My advice is to suggest something you might want in very general terms and I'll work out how to make it fit with things mechanically. Drop an idea here, in the discord, you know where to reach me. Don't worry if it sounds OP or not, I'll tune it into something that you can use. Probably.

Things aren't too frantic right now (in story) so with any luck we'll get everyone squared away in a week or two.

In case anyone's wondering when perks are going to drop, they aren't. Perks pertain to long term goals and aren't going to have an effect or be relevant over the course of this RP. As an example, if your character is performing research on something, perks would be how you track your milestones towards your eventual goal and, if it's not too stupid, shape the future of the RP. Stupid ideas shape the future of the RP too, just in a way that's less good for your characters, but hilarious for me.
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If this is correct and okay, this'll be Marrie's Features and new Spell List:

Spell Changes:
MASTERED NOTES: Storm, Flight, Blink, Transplace, Heal, Intangible (Darkness, Diverse Elemental Affinity)
PROFICIENT NOTES: Damage X, Shield, Reflect, Purify, Stabilize, Portal
BASIC NOTES: Magic Sense, Restrain, AoE, Quicken, Dispel, Bounce

Features:
Instrument: Emerald - 12 points
Mana Extract 8
Throw Mastery 4

Style: Gold - 8 points
Hover 4
Aegis 4

Genre: Platinum - 10 points
Subtle Spell 6
Diverse Elemental Affinity (Darkness) 4

Backup: Silver - 6 points
Pocket Change 4
Enhanced (Clip Light) 2

PR: Bronze - 4 points
Skilled (Hacker/Programmer) 4
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Time's up. Thanks to everyone who got their characters sorted before the deadline!

@Nakushita Add the following features to your esper.

INSTRUMENT:
Extra Appendages 10

STYLE:
Gelatinous Physiology 8

GENRE:
Routine Poison 2
Routine Transform 2
Routine Restrain 2
Routine Portal 2
Routine Blink 2
Routine AoE 2

Backup:
Cache 4

PR:
Skilled Charlatan 2
Silver Tongue 4
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