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@Username Khata Nyarlith, the Faceless One. Once again, well done - cool character with a well-written sheet. Accepted. Get in there and grant us some eyes.


My name is not 'Username' dear lizard wizard sir. But I'm assuming you simply don't have enough eyes to see~

that said, yes. I shall move them to the CS and start fleshing out some more details about her realm and the forsaken desert which it was built upon.
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My name is not 'Username' dear lizard wizard sir. But I'm assuming you simply don't have enough eyes to see~

that said, yes. I shall move them to the CS and start fleshing out some more details about her realm and the forsaken desert which it was built upon.


Ack! That's what happens when you get interrupted by dogs every ten minutes when you're trying to post. My bad.

Please do - I intend to finish up my CS and then I'll make the locations tab - I hope none of you mind if I include some of the already-written descriptions of places (with credit, of course).
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Does this mean I need to make a name for Aesir's crib? Gotta think of something creative....
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And here we are at last.

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I have actually included a slight reference to Kil’threx in the Elder's reprise. The elder is telling the story to the emissary of Kil'threx who seeks audience with Zhystkrexas.

I'd imagine Kil'threx and Zhystkrexas may have some history together, thus I have staved off a direct interaction between both as they would seem to naturally work together. One embodies evil, the other embodies hunger. One is a creation of morality, the other of nature. But each feeds into the other as I see it. Hunger in itself is natural, but to go beyond desire into gluttony? Perhaps it was Kil'threx that had corrupted Zhystkrexas. And perhaps Zhystkrexas which has corrupted Kil'threx in turn to desire the pure destruction of the world.

That being said, until we explore the possible connection between Evil and the demon that breeds it, I would prefer to leave a direct interaction between Kil'threx and Zhystkrexas at the table if it is alright with you. Since after all Zhystkrexas is less of a god and more of a demon. Maybe rumored to be one of the first creations of Kil'threx or an entity that had aligned itself with Kil'threx long ago.

Although in all honesty I'm imaging them as primordials in a cosmic bar that get drinks together every now and then to discuss old times. Neither quite sure who came first, Evil or Hunger.

I would also posit that Trenton Baker would also have some connection with Zhystkrexas given both use souls as a source of power. Perhaps the good captain cares to raid Zhystkrexas' vault, and the Demon would love to capture Baker's soul and end his curious case of unlife. Else they can be on good terms and trade souls like collectable trading cards (as a bit of black comedy). I imagine they live/unlive in rather opposite geographies.

And strange coincidence, I used to roleplay with a Ex-Ex-pirate-Ex-ex-Necromancer (an undead pirate who was a necromancer prior to taking up a life of piracy but has since returned to being a necromancer after raising himself from the dead). Rather fun chap to play as, he stored the souls of the dead in bottles of rum littered about his captain's quarters, and had the penchant to drink his spirits. Supposedly his phylactery is held by his own resurrected left hand which holds a bottle of rum so foul as his soul manifests in it. And said hand and bottle is implanted into the flesh of some terrible sea creature, rendering him nigh immortal as they would have to first find the sea creature, kill it, retrieve the phylactery, destroy it and his hand, then destroy him.
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Well I have to say that I'm interested. Everybody knows it's good to be bad, and bad to be good... or... yeah that makes sense...

Anyway, I'm going to have to put some thought into my character to be a right proper cut from an odd cloth. Now, now... What should be fun to be?
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I hope this bloke is reasonable, Marquis Lucien Dowling.
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Okay, power toned down, modern items removed, and story completely overhauled.
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@The Grey Dust So you did. In hindsight, I probably should have specified a specific place to include the contact with Kil'threx - I feel like I keep missing it because I don't know where to expect it. And I'm inclined to agree with your notions about Zhystkrexas and Kil'threx; Zhyst is probably just as old as Kil'threx, though not as powerful, and I imagine his role as Harbinger will be less 'servant' and more, like, 'independent contractor'. I don't hate the idea that maybe Kil'threx's influence long, long ago had some role in Zhystkrexas becoming as dark as he is now, but that's of course up to you. In any case, you're good to post him in the characters tab.

And I think there's definitely room for Zhystkrexas and Trenton to be acquainted, especially because Trenton is well familiar with hedonism and hunger. They could have met once or twice, perhaps when Trenton made a trip to I'Zhystana - it certainly seems like the kind of place that he'd want to at least visit, even though he doesn't usually stray too far from the ocean. In that case he'd almost certainly have heard of Zhystkrexas and had an audience with him. It's just a thought - I'll let you read Trenton's full CS and get back to me, but I imagine they would have parted ways rather quickly when they realized that they had very little to gain from each other (as what remains of Trenton's soul is probably way too warped and twisted to be of any use to Zhystrexas, or maybe that would make him even more interested? Up to you).

@Orlan@MauveMarauder@Zendrelax Imma read these tonight and hopefully get back to you tonight, but if not I will tomorrow. We're nearing our eight character limit, and while so many of you are doing really good work, I don't think I'm gonna stretch that any further so that the RP doesn't get too ponderous and bloated. I really do appreciate all the interest and all the creativity that y'all are putting in, whether or not you get one of the three slots remaining.
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Not a problem. I do like to throw in small things peppered into the story. Hence if it was well hidden, I have accomplished my task :)

And "Independent Contractor" indeed. Both certainly aspire to see an end of the world. Although Zhystkrexas prefers the long, slow, game. I mean as something he would say "I have hungered for eons. I can wait a few millennia for a feast." That being said, I'm sure they have a mutual agreement to get on with it, and Kil'Threx can contract Zhystkrexas' support in return for the right to devour everything and anything that falls to sate his insatiable hunger or something of that nature. That said, perhaps Zhystkrexas began as merely a motive force, that is, how hunger and desire were primal instincts that drove the universe (consider the atoms seeking to find a more stable electron configuration, etc). Then Kil'Threx somehow managed to warp the entity into something darker with his creations. Creating evil, and thus introducing hunger beyond satiation. Thus in a way I suppose Kil'Threx has "created" Zhystkrexas.

And of course Zhystkrexas would be interested in Trenton's soul. A powerful soul empowers him even more. Trenton after all, seems to be a man after Zhystkrexas' own heart. Another hedonistic rake who drinks when thirsty, eats when hungry, but for all the joys it can give him, he is still empty, and hungers for more. And Zhystkrexas, being the generous malevolence that he is, would give Trenton what he wants to indulge his friend's every wanting desire. All done such that he may get Trenton to agree, that in the unlikely event of the Pirate's death, his soul would be surrendered to Zhystkrexas, and unlike most souls trapped within his collection, be allowed to sail the seas as a collector of souls for Zhystkrexas (i.e. a Davey Jones from PotC). It's a win-win for both parties right? Zhystkrexas would offer him such an "insurance policy."

After all, Zhyst isn't a fighter but a crafty politican, a shrewd businessman, and cunning negotiator. And Good help is so hard to find these days.

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So yeah...like Lizard Boss said, how do our characters all know each other again?
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So yeah...like Lizard Boss said, how do our characters all know each other again?


Maybe we all shop at EvilCo?

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@TheWizardLizard First try at a CS here!


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Alright, so, I've reviewed all the CS submissions I've gotten so far, and I've made my decision about which three are going to be accepted. This doesn't necessarily mean that these were the best or that the ones I'm not taking aren't as good, but I think these three fit the theme of the RP the best and will be the most interesting to play with. I do appreciate all the good work that everyone else put in, and I hope you'll continue to look for a home for your villainous urges.

Anyway, the three I'm taking are @Zendrelax, @Legion02, and @FrozenPhoenix (who submitted his CS via PM). I think these characters fit the world and the themes of the RP the best, and I was pretty impressed by the level of detail these guys went into, so... y'all are in. I have completely run out of steam for this 'secret part of the CS hidden in the rules' business, so just make sure a mention of how Kil'threx contacted your character is somewhere in the sheet before you post it in the characters tab (if it already is, cool, go ahead).

So here's what's gonna happen now: I'm gonna have lunch and then make the Locations tab, where I'll start by pasting the descriptions of places we already have and then we can add more in the future. After that, I'll make the first post in the IC, which will be about my character arriving at the meeting place Kil'threx specified to them (a ruined cottage in the middle of the woods in the outskirts of Melaron). After everyone else makes an introductory post, we'll proceed and the story will begin.

To answer your question, @TheWindel, most of our characters will be meeting each other for the first time there - but if anyone thinks that their character might have history with another (like Trenton and Zyrthrexas), then that could be fun to work out. Oh, also, @The Grey Dust; I like that idea. I like it very much.

Alright, get excited folks, we're in the final countdown to evil kickoff!
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Yay!

*Lay down a pertinent song:*

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I think this would serve better as our evil overlord theme:

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Name: Deos “Johnny” Risleth


Title: The Sovereign of Eternal War

Three-Word Description: Burning Demonic Warlord


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When Kala- I mean, niddhog, shows up to the meeting.
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So I noticed that you have the Locations segment up and running on the OP. I feel like I should probably get to writing some stuff for Aesir's realm now.

Edit: Or are you just pulling descriptions from what we've already written in our CSs?
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Now that I see it, we have the Nine Virtues twisted,that seems kinda symbolic somehow.
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