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@MiddleEarthRozeFixed the things and stuffs on my charry.
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Noice.

Now get on the discord, I need to dole out roles.
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Is there still space here?
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There certainly is!
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Great!

I'll start a character sheet. It could take 2 hours or 2 days... Depends on how easily ideas come to mind.
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It's all good, there's no rush. I look forward to seeing it when it's finished!
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This look good?


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Goooooooood! Just a couple of things:
With his mother being a Nord, you're good just putting "Nord" in the race bit.

If you could flesh out his personality a bit more that'd be awesome too - it's a great start, just looking for a wee bit more detail. Maybe say how easily he trusts people/makes friends, or the difference in his personality between cool people and not-so-cool people?

For his skills section, the handed part and the blade/blunt part are like... one skill. I don't think I've explained it very well, but as he uses a Battleaxe, his skill would be Two-Handed Blunt. If it were a shortsword, the skill would be One-Handed Blade. So, if you stick Two-Handed in front of your Blunt and Blade skills, you have room for one more skill.

And finally...

WHERE IS MY PUPPER????

Oh, and if you take the periods out of the [.hr] bits, the formatting will be all fixed up too.
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Oakflesh changed to protect, backstory revised (end of prologue, part 1, and part 4), the first sentence in appearance was edited slightly, and I added a few illusion spells.

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@MiddleEarthRoze Is it all right if I have a different reason for my character being in Kvatch than the arena? I'd like to make a healer, so arena fights probably wouldn't fit very well with that. I mean, maybe she could be there for medical assistance, I don't know.
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@LadyTabrisNO!
She has to be there to fight, with bare fists, maybe a small knife.

jk

Yeah so long as she is in Kvatch at the beginning you can have any reason you like; she could even live there.
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As the good man said, they don't have to be at the arena, no.
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IC is live y'all - have fun! Once we've got a few posts done, I'll introduce our Hero of Kvatch.
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@MiddleEarthRoze IM FINALLY DONE WITH HER.

Okay, so the personality is kinda awful because i can't really explain her well, but I hope I got it across. And her backstory should be correct in regards to Elder Scrolls Lore (Khenarthi's Roost and kwama are from ESO) however i could have gotten some things wrong here and there. Plus i may have made it a little too dramatic lol but whatever :D



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I'm finished this (I think). Pick out anything I missed and I'll fix it up.

I didn't edit very thoroughly so there could be a few typos, I will check back over it (I'm just worn out from looking at it now), so don't worry.


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I am having hellish formatting issues right now. Post is almost corrected.

EDIT: Everything is right in the world.
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Ahh... there's that angsty heartbreak I was looking for. First Leos with his depressing Grandpa, and now a poor, unstable kitty-cat. Next up, my own Nord widower with emotional baggage heavier than his 8 year old daughter!

Tsavi is good, barring the translation skill she has. You haven't stated what language she can translate; if you're keeping it, you'll need to describe how she learnt it. Unless her translation skill is Ta'agra, in which case she'll have probably been brought up on that language and Tamrielic simultaneously.

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Thanks for getting the sheet done so quickly - she looks great so far, but there are some issues.

Now, I can't find information on entry requirements to do with age when it comes to the College of Winterhold - but I have doubts they would allow a 13 year old girl with no prior knowledge in magic to join. In Skyrim, you do have to demonstrate a spell to be allowed in, and that's as an adult.

This could be easily rectified if she learnt some spells from a mage prior to joining; perhaps when she was 13, her father hired a guard for their travels; or perhaps a friend joined them. They could have taught Aveca some basics in magic, and say after 2 years, she joins the College. I'd say 15 with knowledge of magic is more applicable than 13 with no magic.

Oh, and from what I can see all of those spells are from Oblivion, but please make sure none of them are from Skyrim, just in case I've missed one.

Other than that, I can find no fault with them! Unless @Leos Klien has something to add, if you fix those things I've mentioned, these two fine ladies can go into the CS tab.
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Ahh... there's that angsty heartbreak I was looking for. First Leos with his depressing Grandpa, and now a poor, unstable kitty-cat. Next up, my own Nord widower with emotional baggage heavier than his 8 year old daughter!

Tsavi is good, barring the translation skill she has. You haven't stated what language she can translate; if you're keeping it, you'll need to describe how she learnt it. Unless her translation skill is Ta'agra, in which case she'll have probably been brought up on that language and Tamrielic simultaneously.

@LadyTabris
Thanks for getting the sheet done so quickly - she looks great so far, but there are some issues.

Now, I can't find information on entry requirements to do with age when it comes to the College of Winterhold - but I have doubts they would allow a 13 year old girl with no prior knowledge in magic to join. In Skyrim, you do have to demonstrate a spell to be allowed in, and that's as an adult.

This could be easily rectified if she learnt some spells from a mage prior to joining; perhaps when she was 13, her father hired a guard for their travels; or perhaps a friend joined them. They could have taught Aveca some basics in magic, and say after 2 years, she joins the College. I'd say 15 with knowledge of magic is more applicable than 13 with no magic.

Oh, and from what I can see all of those spells are from Oblivion, but please make sure none of them are from Skyrim, just in case I've missed one.

Other than that, I can find no fault with them! Unless @Leos Klien has something to add, if you fix those things I've mentioned, these two fine ladies can go into the CS tab.


Oh shit sorry, I thought I changed that to leather and fabric work lol, I'll change that in a second
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