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@BeautifulSnow no worries, sleep is important! take as much time as you need :3
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@BeautifulSnow no worries, sleep is important! take as much time as you need :3


I've finished my CS :D
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Hello!

First off, I love your faceclaim! I have her in my reserves to use for a character someday as well. Looking at your character sheet, I would say that all around the personality and history sections are a little bit short. If you could, please add a little bit more depth to these sections. Free Pass is a high casual style roleplay, IC posts tend to be on the lengthier side, so the GM team likes to see strong, detailed writing in our CS applications. Luna looks good so far, but really sell your character's personality to us! Also, how long ago was the crash/Luna's move to Westworth? We are trying to avoid having characters that are from out of town. Westworth is small, and our vision was to have a RP with a lot of close, longtime childhood friends engaging in highschool shenanigans.

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Hello!

First off, I love your faceclaim! I have her in my reserves to use for a character someday as well. Looking at your character sheet, I would say that all around the personality and history sections are a little bit short. If you could, please add a little bit more depth to these sections. Free Pass is a high casual style roleplay, IC posts tend to be on the lengthier side, so the GM team likes to see strong, detailed writing in our CS applications. Luna looks good so far, but really sell your character's personality to us! Also, how long ago was the crash/Luna's move to Westworth? We are trying to avoid having characters that are from out of town. Westworth is small, and our vision was to have a RP with a lot of close, longtime childhood friends engaging in highschool shenanigans.

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Hi there!

Thanks for looking into Luna and cool that you love the faceclaim (It was a idea of Nallore cause I was kinda not able to choose between two) I changed the history and personality section a bit, like adding when her parents died and I've made her less fresh meat :) I hope that the CS is now good for approval :D If not, please tell me so I can change it ^^
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I made two tiny changes on my character: her color cause I checked my last post and could almost not read what I had written down...... ^^' And her theme song is now: Stand my ground from Within Temptation
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Hi guys. Due to an unfortunate situation, from here on out we will not be advertising our discord link. Instead when writers do get accepted in one of our roleplays, we will pm the link to them. Luckily you guys are already in.

If any of you have an issue with us, for any reason, please PM us and we will gladly talk things out. I'd like to think we're understanding and we want to prioritize our writers' wants and needs because you're helping us make our vision come true.

Thank you for your time, staying with us through thick and thin, and we appreciate your support.

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I am so sorry for taking so long for a reply...! I should have mentioned that I had a busy week coming up and oh maaaan... Well, I even forgot to do that >.< So so so so SO sorry! :( Don't hate me? *Angel face*
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@BeautifulSnow no worries! Thanks for letting us know :] we wouldn't hate you, we are pretty lenient and understanding, I'd like to think
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Working on a Lila post. Should be up in an hour or less
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I'm gonna have a Kenzi post up by fuckin Wednesday mark my words
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I said it would happen and it did. Word.
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I am sorry, but... I am gonna drop out.... If someone feels like it, be free to take over my character :)
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We're going to be closing this, and a couple of our other roleplays, for a variety of reasons. Largely this is due to real life issues cropping up for the GMs, but frankly this is the final nail in the coffin of inactivity. Thank you for the time you spent working alongside us, though!
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