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Interested...
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Okay, kinda jumping the gun quite a bit on this one. If it doesn´t work, might as well make a human/dwarf.

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@Sirkaithethird I'd like to see a bit more added to your personality. As for history and navy background, that's fine by me but to accomodate your position and family influenxe/connections can I ask that you serve the Dockmans legion located on Karaz Kharagul. It's the most likely to have the ability to waste a ship.

I leave anything i missed to Ookawa or Ursa.

Your pistol will also need to be dialed down to a regular flintlock for the moment. I removed a similar weapon from another cs earlier since I felt they didn't fit quite yet.

@AtomicNut This is such a conflicting issue for me. On the one hand you paint a picture of a godly being denied its heritage and in doing so habe captured the spirit of it all perfectly. On the other hand the dragon Nidhogg is so overused it leaves a bad taste in my mouth.
A very problematic aspect of your cs is the fire magic. As a dragon it would stand to reason you'd have great affinity but the unearthly magic of the waters has weakened fire magic to a point of near uselessness. If you're willing to agree that while your magic is strong but often still unreliable, I'll agree to that part.

I'd like to add Hellfire cape as another part of the dangerous black reef, a dangerous and vast part of the sea harboring many great dangers. Hope that would be ok.

Not 100% on keeping the dragon race entirely but.. against better judgement I'll allow it.
I'd also like you to add how you joined up with Great Aquarius.

If you agree to the above, I'll accept your cs.
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@Sirkaithethird

What I gotta add, too, is:
I don't think we need a Second Lieutenant. The Aquarius is a fairly small ship, about a sixth-rate.
So, having three commanding officers, I feel, is a bit much, don't you think?
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@Ookawa,
It depends on the nation we are basing this off, but I could easily change into a Midshipman. Keep in mind that a sixth rate had about 250 men, modern ships have that and have about 3 command officers.
It’s your call
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I just took a look at my calendar, and I am going to drop before I join. I will end up very busy, sorry.
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@Sirkaithethird I'd like to see a bit more added to your personality. As for history and navy background, that's fine by me but to accomodate your position and family influenxe/connections can I ask that you serve the Dockmans legion located on Karaz Kharagul. It's the most likely to have the ability to waste a ship.

I leave anything i missed to Ookawa or Ursa.

Your pistol will also need to be dialed down to a regular flintlock for the moment. I removed a similar weapon from another cs earlier since I felt they didn't fit quite yet.

@AtomicNut This is such a conflicting issue for me. On the one hand you paint a picture of a godly being denied its heritage and in doing so habe captured the spirit of it all perfectly. On the other hand the dragon Nidhogg is so overused it leaves a bad taste in my mouth.
A very problematic aspect of your cs is the fire magic. As a dragon it would stand to reason you'd have great affinity but the unearthly magic of the waters has weakened fire magic to a point of near uselessness. If you're willing to agree that while your magic is strong but often still unreliable, I'll agree to that part.

I'd like to add Hellfire cape as another part of the dangerous black reef, a dangerous and vast part of the sea harboring many great dangers. Hope that would be ok.

Not 100% on keeping the dragon race entirely but.. against better judgement I'll allow it.
I'd also like you to add how you joined up with Great Aquarius.

If you agree to the above, I'll accept your cs.


Nidhogg is just a cosmetic part, i can always change that. About Fire Magic, if it is that weakened i essentially need to rework the character as it would have little use then besides cooking meals. Let me give some thought.
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@AtomicNut no weakened just unreliable.
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Who are the forest folk?
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@Brithwyr racist elves unchanged by their gods.
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So NOT them as a character. Fuck.
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Ah so more elves that Eiko and Jack can slaughter ruthlessly.
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I'll just go a water elf then. Though it's kinda disproportionate to he character I wanted to play. We don't have a lookout for the Crow's Nest, do we?
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@Brithwyr nobody has taken it specifically, no
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Fantastic. That's my gimmick, then. Dunno how I'm gonna be a water elf who likes being up in the air, but...
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Sorry this took longer than anticipated... I'm a bit rusty. ^^" Is this ok?

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@DestinyStar accepted. Can I ask that you add in a part to your background about how you came aboard Great Aquarius.

@AtomicNut there's one more request I have, to gain acceptance. Gotta give up a piece of your soul to a fellow named Jeggred.
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@DestinyStar accepted. Can I ask that you add in a part to your background about how you came aboard Great Aquarius.

@AtomicNut there's one more request I have, to gain acceptance. Gotta give up a piece of your soul to a fellow named Jeggred.


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So how long do Dwarves and Elves live for? Presumably longer than Humans. And can Dwarves use magic too or is this a dragon age affair where Dwarves are magically inept?
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