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The journey begins...



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Flagg Strange. This outcome I did not foresee.

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-withdrawn-
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Oh, and btw, the tentative date to complete your CS is February the 2nd. Not asking you to rush it but just to keep the date in mind.

Also, I'm only going to be selecting 5 players out of the entire batch who submit their character sheets.
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Almost done!

I do have a question. Since my character doesn't have a gender, does anyone have a preference on whether I use "it" or "they/their/them"? I went with "they", but I'm not sure which is correct. I've never written a genderless character before. Using "it" makes me feel like I'm talking about an object rather than a person, but "they" strikes me as I'm talking about a group every time I read it.
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@Adverb, I have some experience with that. They is the preferred usage, and is actually considered grammatically correct with our evolving spectrum of gender. I hope this helps.
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@Nib
Thanks! That's extremely helpful.
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Hey fellow Adventurers (and Bork) just wanted to chime in and let ya'll know I'm still interested and not dead. Just working my way through all the lore and the character sheet. If it's not up today it'll be tomorrow.
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Gotta Go Fast.
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Quirk: Speaks in third person.
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Love the progress so far. However, I have just a few comments to make since you're all doing your draft CS's on the thread.

@Dark Cloud - Keep in mind that True Kin cannot have mutations and are unable to look inhuman and that their race is strictly human. You can still be a 'lizard' person if you're creative enough.

@Adverb - Great mushroom person concept. Just make sure your mutations fit what you're going for.

@Rapid Reader - I've told you this before but you don't need to strictly follow in-game lore. Otherwise, great sheet.

@Flagg - No comment other than your character is the oldest out of everyone here and I expect your backstory to reflect that.

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Love the progress so far. However, I have just a few comments to make since you're all doing your draft CS's on the thread.

@Dark Cloud - Keep in mind that True Kin cannot have mutations and are unable to look inhuman and that their race is strictly human. You can still be a 'lizard' person if you're creative enough.

@Adverb - Great mushroom person concept. Just make sure your mutations fit what you're going for.

@Rapid Reader - I've told you this before but you don't need to strictly follow in-game lore. Otherwise, great sheet.

@Flagg - No comment other than your character is the oldest out of everyone here and I expect your backstory to reflect that.


Thank you for the feedback; I was actually wondering that because I was like... If he isn't mutated how will he have lizard abilities, I was angling for Kly'tar's race to be an actual race in Karsts. I could have him be a mutant in a way that changed his hide red, among other things?
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Thank you for the feedback; I was actually wondering that because I was like... If he isn't mutated how will he have lizard abilities, I was angling for Kly'tar's race to be an actual race in Karsts. I could have him be a mutant in a way that changed his hide red, among other things?


Sure.
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On another note, I've learned a lot about fungi and mushrooms creating this CS. lol

Mycology is pretty interesting.
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I'll finish tomorrow, I'm feeling burnt out from crunching to finish it yesterday.
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Gotta pick some cool cybernetics.
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Hey guys, sorry I'm a bit late!

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Must finish CS CAPZLOK!
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@Bork Lazer

I think I'm done. If you want me to elaborate on or change anything lemme know.

Also, "In the big bad world, a person's liable to be shut down and thrown in the meat-chipper over a misunderstanding. Working in Crack City, Starfield has learned that simple gestures of manners and respect go a long way to staying on the up-right and the living" are perhaps the best sentences I've ever written.
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I'll be cutting it close to the submission deadline, but I'll be here.
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Me too.
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