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In the far east country of Japan, largely ignored by both the Mage's Association and Holy Church, there was once a ritual. A collaboration between families of magi to create an omnipotent flawed wishgranting device. Heroes of ages past took shape in a fight to the death, with that illusory prize of a "wish" dangling before the competitors.

During the second World War, the third of these rituals resulted in untold devastation to these three families. Exact records of this event simply do not exist, but in its aftermath, the families of Makiri and Tohsaka were forgotten from the world, and the Einzbern family, their head killed in the war, withdrew from Japan entirely. Fuyuki's status as a backwater town in an irrelevant country made the abdicated position of Second Owner less than prestigious, and in fact, an apparently mediocre family of little note ended up taking that position before another could, making the city even less important than it had already been.

The day is February 19, 2012. The current Second Owners of Fuyuki, the Zetsumei, have publicly announced that the Grail System of Fuyuki has been resurrected after decades of reconstruction. The Marks of the Chosen have been distributed, and the preparations have been set. The new Second Owner resides within what was once the castle of the Einzberns, a structure established on the eve of the Third Grail War and abandoned at its end. A supervisor, an overseer of the Holy Church, of course is stationed at the church on the hill. The residences of Matou and Tohsaka rot in place, abandoned.

On this day, seven magi will descend upon Fuyuki, and it shall become a hellscape.

Welcome to the Fourth Grail War for the 726th Holy Grail.













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@Unoedipal

Reporting in. Now that I have an official model to work with, I shall finish my characters ASAP.

PS: Can I keep the Caster slot, right? The character (as you know) is almost done, anyway.
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Alright. Just so the others don't miss it, paging @Bishop, @Hinsek, @Flamelord, @Black Alice, @PaulHaynek, and @kusanagifire.

@Unoedipal

Reporting in. Now that I have an official model to work with, I shall finish my characters ASAP.

PS: Can I keep the Caster slot, right? The character (as you know) is almost done, anyway.


I don't like reserving slots in advance since it tends to incentivize people reserving a slot and then slacking off on their app-making, so I'm doing things on a rolling basis. If you're the first to get a Caster approved, you'll get Caster, which looks like it'll be the case.
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Edit: I'll see what I can slap together. Disregard the original post.
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HOLY FUCKING SHIT A FATE ROLEPLAY. I AM SOOOOOOOOOOOO IN!
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Welcome aboard!
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@UnoedipalOkay, so my knowledge of the Fate universe is limited. I understand most of it, but I have a few questions.
-1. What are "Mystic Codes"
-2. On what scale do we put our servant's stats
-3. Do you have a lancer yet?
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Right, Ill make an app in a bit.
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@UnoedipalOkay, so my knowledge of the Fate universe is limited. I understand most of it, but I have a few questions.
-1. What are "Mystic Codes"
-2. On what scale do we put our servant's stats
-3. Do you have a lancer yet?


1. A magus's tool. Examples would be like Kayneth's Mercury Moeblob, Rin's Azoth Sword, Kiritsugu's Contender, and the like.
2. Just the standard E-A ranking. You can include + modifiers, which indicates an ability to momentarily double that stat. For instance, B+ means it's usually B, but it can be momentarily raised to double that.
3. I haven't received any apps for Lancer, but like I said above, I'm not reserving classes for people. If you want to be Lancer, you'll just need to be the first person who gets a Lancer app approved.
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Name: D'Artagnan

Class: Sabre

Gender: Male

Appearance:

Alignment: Good

Personality:D'Artagnan is brash, but clever. He is not skilled at judging his limits, and is often considered brave. Though his academic intelligence is mediocre at best, his sheer cleverness is almost unmatched. He's a hopeless romantic and is fiercley loyal to those he calls his friends. He has almost no filter on his speech and mostly just says whatever comes to mind

History: Born in Southern France, he was the son of a noble. He was trained in Rapier and pistol from a young age, gaining a sort of legendary skill with them. When he grew older, he served faithfully under a man named Mazarin. When the King’s advisor falsely accused Mazarin of treason, he was sent to be exiled. As Mazarin left France, he was guarded from assassins and noble-hating mobs every step of the way. During the exile, D'Artagnan served the people around him, gaining a sort of Robin Hood esque reputation as a champion of the people. He was part of a plot that exposed the lies of the king’s advisor. Upon the reveal of his treachery, the advisor was exiled and D’Artagnan was made head of the king’s musketeers. While in service to the king, D’Artagnan defended him faithfully, but was not afraid to challenge his opinion. Eventually, D'Artagnan was killed during a battle in a war between the Netherlands and France.

Weapon: Athos: D’Artagnan’s legendary rapier. The sword is said to have almost god-like speed and precision.
Porthos:D’Artagnan’s legendary flintlock pistol. Bullets fired from it are thought to seek out their targets autonomously.
Aramis: A solid dagger, said to be able to pierce the strongest armor.

Parameters:

Strength: C

Endurance: D

Agility: A

Mana: E

Luck: A

Class Skills: True Name Discernment B: Allows him to discern the name and status of any servant he has landed a blow on.



Personal Skills: Ladykiller: D’Artagnan’s charm is great and often attracts members of the opposite sex.
Blademaster:D’Artagnan is able to wield any bladed weapon (not including spears or bayonets) masterfully.
Pistolero: D’Artagnan is able to masterfully use any sidearm.

Noble Phantasm(s): Musketeer’s Barrage: Six spectral clones of D’Artagnan are created. They each fire a pistol shot at a target before charging them with a sword. They are each on par with D’Artagnan in terms of skill, though they disappear if struck once.

Name: Musketeer’s Barrage

Title: N/A

Rank: A

NP Type: Anti-Team

Range: 36.

Maximum Number of Targets: 6

Description: Six spectral clones of D’Artagnan are created. They each fire a pistol shot at a target before charging them with a sword. They are each on par with D’Artagnan in terms of skill, though they disappear if struck once.
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Will have master CS up soon
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For those who don't wanna bother looking, here's a list of Skills from the Type Moon wiki. Enjoy.
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@Flamelord Thanks, I had the skills totally wrong. Has since been Fixed.
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@Nevix

Use the full name of the Servant. Also, please put the image in a hider, makes things tidier.

Please specify the alignment further. IE, Lawful Good, Neutral Good, or Chaotic Good.

The weapons shouldn't have special properties without becoming Noble Phantasms. Further, as a member of the Saber class, he should only have access to his sword. The Class System exists to prevent Servants with similar characteristics from being posited.

True Name Discernment is not a Saber Class Skill. Sabers have Magic Resistance and Riding. True Name Discernment is for the Ruler Class, which is not being summoned in this war.

Is there a difference between Ladykiller and a low-rank Mystic Face? If not, just make it a Mystic Face.

What is the Noble Phantasm based on? There are other issues with it, but that's the first one I want to address.
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@Unoedipal Well, shit. I'll fix those and probably make his sword his noble phantasm.
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@Nevix
Your description for Magic Resistance: B is wrong. B is "Cancel spells with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for them to be affected." However, seeing as he had no exposure to magecraft in his life, B is definitely too high. C should be his absolute max, and even that just because the Saber class container is helping him.

Add the Riding Class Skill. Add ranks to the Personal Skills.

The Noble Phantasm has an issue in that the whole point of a Noble Phantasm is that it's the crystallization of a feat or legend. You can say it's a crystallization of his skill, sure, but that's A. covered by Blademaster and B. pretty illogical considering that, in the grand scope of all Heroic Spirits, his skill isn't really anything special. We have Knights of the Round Table, a wraith who can utilize a fragment of a True Magic, a martial artist who can kill with a single strike without fail, a demigod hero skilled to the point that he's able to overturn logic and do A rank attacks with B rank strength, and so on. I just don't see his legend as demonstrating skill enough to where just skill alone can become a Noble Phantasm.

I recommend either looking for a feat with his sword that you can sublimate into an NP, or try someone else. Sorry if that sounds unhelpful.
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@Unoedipal I'm afraid I'm going to have to resign. As my knowledge of the Fate universe is sketchy at best and thus, I feel like an idiot. That, and since D'Artagnan has no particular feats with his sword to turn into an NP, I'd have to find a new Heroic Spirit. I hope that you guys have fun.
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I'm willing to work with you to help with the mechanics, but if you feel that you ought to resign then no worries.
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Depending on how things go, I'm willing to slap together a Master CS if needed (Since we have 8 people, right?).
I'll fill out the personality section soon-ish.
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