[OOC] Wings Askew

[Tombprince]

@Jerkchicken

It never hurts to ask, and the IC posts are just introductions at present.

[Mokley]

With the next story post I'm considering a forced timeskip to evening.

So, if there's anything else you want to do before the adventure kicks in, do so now! :)

Edit: Also, this RP is closed to new players as of now. No more! Please! ;-;

(ily guys really)

[Ookawa]

I have nothing to interact with so might as well... xD

[Tombprince]

Only my quest for Lee for the blue thread, sent @Acromantula a tell over this. Other than that and interactions with @LostBrotherGrimm and @Rekaigan I'm good to go.

Let me know if this or anything else needs posting before the main event.

[Disciple Cain]

@Mokley
If you make a timeskip to night time I can more comfortably do something with that.

[shylarah]

I need Chuckles to post/collab first, but then I have another post ready to go. Not sure if we're actually going to see the king talk to Gaius onscreen or not, but it takes place before that happens, regardless.

[Ebonsquire]

Sorry for the delay. I had a busy day yesterday. Anyway, I'll be posting within the next 2-3 hours or so.

[Alina13]

@Mokley
Yes you are correct. Her point of view would be different from others around her on most subjects.
@shylarah
Yes I realize that this character outline is very common and most of the time they're all the same but I usually make my characters like this because it relates to me IRL. I plan to play this character as my real self would react.
@tex
See post above lol

[shylarah]

@Alina13 You're missing the important question. I've seen this type of character played different ways, some of them very well. The concern is you dictating how Nikki, for example, feels about you. That's generally in poor taste. You say how Eden acts, and I tell you what Nikki thinks about it.

We're more concerned with the fact that self-insert characters often create problems, and mean that criticism of the character is taken personally. Also, you completely neglected to answer Mokley on whether the sheet is from Eden's point of view, or your own. The way you're coming across is consistent with a certain type of person, and while you may be a lovely person and a skilled rper, many of us have unpleasant experiences with that sort of person in the past.

[Alina13]

@shylarah
I understand that people may get offended upon criticism of their character and may take it personally but I can assure you that I won't. And my sheet is from Eden's POV

[tex]

@Mokley When will the progression occur? It would appear that there isn't much more interaction to be had at the moment (Or people simply haven't been posting)

[shylarah]

@Alina13 Ah, alright. I don't know about Mokley, but I'd prefer an unbiased description of your char. One of my chars is a child, and for a sheet with her, I'd say she believes her mother is the world's best healer, not that her mother is the best healer. A character who is stuck up I would describe as feeling everyone else is beneath her, not that they really are. Doing so will make it clear that you're deliberately invoking and deconstructing the overused version of such traits.

[shylarah]

@Wishful Stray O.o What the heck are you doing over here?

...Are you stalking me~? =P

EDIT:
HOLY CRUD, it's a Gowi. Clearly there is stalking of some sort going on. ^.^;;

[Alina13]

@Mokley

I made a new character. I'm not sure if the image uploaded correctly because my school's internet is retarded and blocks everything using iBoss. If it didn't load right, let me know and I will just put a direct link.

[Mokley]

@Alina13 Thanks for understanding! :) This character is just great -- approved!

Your image is indeed broken, but I went ahead and uploaded it for you, assuming I got the right picture. Just copy/paste:

[img]i.imgur.com/FaiK7C3.jpg[/img]

Which is this:

Hider

[LostBrotherGrimm]

What's the next course of action, once all the interactions for the day are done? Timeskip to the evening? :D Not rushing things or anything~~

[Mokley]

I'm writing now.

Actually, I'm working out the post now and will be writing shortly.

Actually, I PLAN to write shortly. Right now my excuse is cat. Cat demands attention.

Edit: And done! The hiders are just there to differentiate what's where -- I encourage everyone to read all the hiders. :)

[Ookawa]

Awesome one, @Mokley!

[Alina13]

@Mokley

Thank you. And yes that is the right picture. So I can put her in the CHAR tab now?

[Ookawa]

@Alina13
She's accepted, so yep.