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4 mos ago
Everybody wants that fire IC but nobody wants to GM it.
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12 mos ago
If you're roleplaying with your only friends, you're roleplaying with your best friends.
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2 yrs ago
I think to sell someone on an interest check, it's really important to seem enthusiastic about your own idea. That means writing more than a single sentence to attract potential players.
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3 yrs ago
The virgin "My post was so bad it killed the RP!" VS the chad "My post was so good it concluded the RP."
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W I T H R I G H T E O U S H A N D S





Did you know that Dante's inferno is called a divine comedy because things work out for the protagonist? Back in the day, the only two genres were comedy and drama. The only difference was that in a comedy, the protagonist is better off at the end, and a drama is the opposite. So that's why a story about going through hell can still be considered a comedy, even if it's not funny.

Name:
Broken Promise, BP, Boss

Age:
Old enough to know better, too young to care. (that is to say 30's)

Preferred RPs:
I Prefer to make my own, but will occasionally join something if it looks interesting. I'll join just about anything so long as it isn’t overly edgy/sweet, though it's rare for me to do. I don't do 1x1s too often either.

Preferred Roles:
I tend to play adorable characters everyone wants to befriend or proper assholes everyone wants to stay away from. I try not to play moral paragons or prime evils.

RP Conquests:
I've completed quite a few RP's off site, but most of them are on private forums or have simply been lost to the ravages of server crashes. As for stuff here, I'm sure everyone who sees me post in the off topic sections has seen me find an excuse to talk about Danganronpa: Tower of Carnage. It's a project that took over 4 years to complete and I feel pride not only for myself but all the wonderful people who helped make it enjoyable during its run. Re: Zero: The High Council Is technically my first, but it was just something I kind of took over and ended up ending the story after just six months. It finished, but eh...

Last RP I finished was Symphony of Espers which turned out pretty good.

RP's in progress:
For some reason I can't seem to stay away from Ari's magical girl RP, even if I'm not sure why I'm still in it.

As for my own projects, I'm doing Symphony on High to continue the gigachad adventures of the espers in Pax Septimus.

RP Graveyard:
I've been pretty fortunate on this forum. I think I joined one when I first came on the site that didn't really do anything, and there are a few 1x1 things that didn't go anywhere. It's disappointing when an RP ends before it can be finished, but I've come to look at them as learning experiences.

And then there's that london magical girl RP, and that dark magical girl RP. I think I'm done joining magical girl RPs for a while.

Other interests:
Videos
I watch a lot of educational videos on youtube. Usually as research for something I’m writing or purely because a topic interests me. I like channels like Tier Zoo and Daryl Talks Games, and I’ll also watch things like Critical Drinker or Literature Devil to deepen my understanding of story telling. Though I also like memes and jokes, to which I’ll find myself watching stuff like Sseth, but usually find myself surfing through meme videos. I gotta work on that.

Games
I have a rather long history of playing virtually every platformer to come into existence during the indie boom, as well as quite a few other indie games. I’ve played Meatboy, Binding of Issac, Gunvolt, Cuphead, Princess Remedy in a World of Hurt, Classic Metroid, Warcraft 3, Final Fantasy 7,8, and 14, Left 4 Dead, Shantae, Celeste, Danganronpa, God Eater, the list goes on. What I’ve played is kind of all over the place. I don’t play many games these days, I tend to pick things that look interesting and go on a decent steam sale.

Painting Minis
I do this in moderation. Otherwise, it's a pretty expensive hobby to start...

Music
I listen to everything, save most country/rap songs. I have too many favorites to name.

Personality:
Not one to take life or the internet too seriously. Is only serious about writing well and having a good time.

People to Insult:
Dalton is a Dingus.

Most Recent Posts

Waifus hate me.

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BrokenPromise


Waifus love me <3
Well, there you have it. Case closed!

@Aewin You can write Lucas's response, but I want you to hold off on posting the execution. Everyone else is free to comment as they wish. not writing anything is also an option. (unless you're Aewin... or @Melo, hehe.)

Calvin tipped his head to Cyrus's question. "I mean, maybe?"

"Maybe!?" Aleecia was starting to get worked up. "You responded to Lucas when he said you were there for it!"

"Well..." Calvin scratched the back of his head. "I mean, I just heard him say my name and figured he was trying to accuse me. I don't remember hearing Mondatta's voice now that I think about it. I was just defending myself from Lucas's accusations."

"Gosh Calvin." Alexandria popped up beside the blacksmith. "I didn't think you were so pants-on-head-silly about all this, tee-hee!"

"Shit yea he's got silly pants!" Geina popped up over his other shoulder. "But we're here because you're totally going to show us your six pack. Ain't that right, bitch?"

Calvin folded his arms. "Well, I don't see the need to."

"By the queen herself doth she command this heathen to rid himself of his uniform and give unto her an offering of flesh!" Willow fret her brow. "Less she carve it from his bones!"

"Look, there's no reason for me to..." Calvin trailed off when he noticed Aleecia had shrugged off her green hoodie and was starting to remove her tank top. "A-Aleecia!?"

"He's just going to keep lying in circles until we do it anyway."

Before Calvin could respond, Alice was attempting to undress him herself. "Hey! I can take my own shirt off!" But the other carnage sisters seemed to think it was a good idea and helped Alice out as best they could. That was to say Calvin stood virtually no chance at preserving his dignity. Despite Alice's attempts to leave his shirt unharmed, the carnage sisters tore it to pieces in seconds. They swooned at the sight of his exposed skin. Calvin was unhappy, but refused to speak.

"Your queen has examined your flesh with utmost scrutiny, and has found no blemishes to speak of."

"Hey!" Geina was the one to speak up next. "The fuck is Nariko doing?"

Nariko was looking at Aleecia, who had finished removing her tank top. She was just wearing a bra and jeans now. "Oh dear...."

Geina raised an eyebrow. "What is it sis?"

"I'm..." She stepped backwards. "I'm..." Nariko hugged herself. "I'M FEELING POSITIVE EMOTIONS!"

The other carnage sister shrieked in unison. "Oh dear!" Willow looked away from Nariko. "Well, pray tell, do you see any bruising?"

Nariko slowly looked away from Aleecia. "There are no bruises... on the fruit."

Bliss exhaled. "So it was Lucas after all."

"Well." Davis scratched the back of his head. “The four people that were present for the discussion in question were Krista, Lucas, Calvin... And you.”

“Hold it buster!” Bliss stayed quiet for a moment. “Just because I watch over Krista doesn't mean I go eavesdropping on all of her conversations. And it's really hard to focus when Shaun and Caora were together. They're s-so cute!”

“Why is everyone stripping? Why is everyone stripping each other?” Monokuma Looked around at everyone. “You're... raising all kinds of things right now... But mostly my desire to punish someone!” He pointed at his "daughters" with a quivering paw. "And the lot of you are the first to be punished! Is this how I raised you?"

"We're sorry father!" They sobbed in unison. Except for Nariko, who was creeping towards Bliss.

"Heh." perfection folded his arms. "I might as well recap what happened... While the murder itself happened just today, the killer had prepared several days in advance. He was filing down the stalagmite and working on earning his mark's trust. When the day of the murderer rolled around, the killer needed a way to isolate Krista from her body guards. He did this by arranging for Krista to appear in the caves for the shift change. If I had to guess, the original intention was to make a killing that looked like a freak accident. So when Krista showed up, he knocked her out and prepared to drop the stalagmite on her. Something must have been off with the killers timing, because Mondatta arrived early.”

Bliss hugged herself in an attempt to prevent Nariko from removing her blouse. “Mondatta knew I had difficulty adjusting to the new schedule, and said it would be okay if I woke him up early. Krista told me to have Mondatta meet her in the caves.” The nanny looked away. “That must have been why the killer wasn't ready.”

Davis continued. “And when Mondatta showed up, he was able to thwart the killer's initial murder attempt. After a quick beat down, Mondatta must have broken the file. That, or the killer broke it while beating on Mondatta's armor. Either way, Mondatta was willing to spare the killer... only to have him thrust Mondatt's head into a stalagmite and kill him.”

Calvin shook his head. “Damn...”

“The killer was unable to go through with their initial murder attempt, so they decided to pin it all on Krista instead. He used her handbook to plant a knife wrapper in her room and a knife at the scene of the crime, and then He used her shoes to plant fake footprints after wiping up the old ones. The killer's intentions with this ruse was to create a could of chaos that we couldn't look though. However, their own lies and Mondatta's final gift to the killer makes it pretty clear who it is. even without all of this evidence... disappearing footprints? Falling stalagmites? A victim with no visible wounds? could a crime like this be dreamed up by anyone but the infinite paranormal investigator?" Once Bliss was stripped down to her underwear, (it was nothing fancy, for those wondering.) Nariko gave Davis a thumbs up. Perfection responded by unbolting the scabbard and sword from his hip and lifting it over his shoulder. Then he took a swing that would have made Leon Kuwata proud. It struck the paranormal investigator square in his bruise, causing him to double over in pain. “Lucas Carsen, you cunt! You killed my friend!”



C A S E C L O S E D




Davis turned away from Lucas's podium. “Say Killgood, can you unlock the levers now? I think everyone's ready to vote.”

"Sure, just... Cover up your bear spots." Monokuma groaned. "You guys are worse than those hope's peak teenagers! I'm going to have a slew of new regulations ready for you next time! Moving away from the podiums, stripping, making physical attacks on people... Nurses! Step away from Calvin!"

With everyone clothed, the infinites started to vote for who they thought the killer was. Even though they all believed in the evidence presented, it was a little unnerving to see their choices play out on a slots machine. But sure enough, the machine hit a "jackpot" for Lucas and dumped faux coins all over the floor.

"Well well well." Davis said with a chuckle. "Seems I was right after all."

Monokuma looked a little miffed by Davis's smug attitude, but he instantly sprung into high spirits. "As you likely already know, Lucas was one hundred percent guilty for the murderer of the infinite monk." The bear giggled. "Not that you're going to have a second chance or anything, but loose lips sink ships."

"That includes the one that was riding on all that hot air between you and Krista." Perfection scoffed. "You fake."

Bliss, now dressed, was giving Nariko a stare of disapproval. "I just want you to know that was VERY unlady like, buster!"

"I=I'm sorry." the samurai quivered in place. "I'll never be happy again, would that make you feel better?" Bliss only groaned in response.

"So Lucas, it seems like you're on borrowed time now." Davis wasn't wearing the same smug grin he had worn through most of the trial. He looked quite irritated. "Do you have anything you want to say in defense of what a huge piece of shit you are? What made that phone call so tempting that you were willing to sacrifice all of us for it?"
By the way, I am working on the end of the case. It's just taking some time because of IRL stuff, and I don't want to rush it.
Welp, the good girls all seem to be prepping to siege a castle. I'm curious what the Bacon-bits are up too even more now.


You spelled "plunder" wrong.
looks fine to me :P
So yea, finished two collabs at the same time, which is why there are two hiders. Props to my collab buddies.

And no, Evil girls won't get much insight reading under said hider. It's not even mostly scheming, haha.




The shop fight was going to start any hour now, as was the legendary Deni/Sue date. But Tonya had more scheming to do.

In particular, she needed connections. There were few people she trusted to make said connections with, as it was desirable that her presence be known by as few people as possible. But Aria had assured her that there were few people as tight-lipped as Veronica. So here she was, sitting in the pit stop, waiting for an arranged meeting with the ebon coin broker.

She didn’t wait long.

An overdressed woman sat across from Tonya. There was no doubt this red-clad woman was Vermillion Veronica. “That’s a pretty good disguise, I almost didn’t notice it was magic.”

”Few people do, but I guess I shouldn’t be surprised given who I’m dealing with.”

Veronica really was a good keeper of secrets. Even now, even with Tonya’s ability to know people’s desires and use that to her advantage, it didn’t help her figure this woman out at all. Veronica locked her fingers together and placed them on the table. “You do a very good job of hiding your identity. It’s rare I meet someone who I know so little about. You go by Mac, correct?”

”Yes, that’s fine.” Tonya had to choose her words carefully. Anything that she told Veronica could become Mint knowledge, and it was too early to start divulging those kinds of details. Especially if Veronica was going to defect later. If she was going to join them, it would be on her terms. ”I take my privacy seriously.”

“Perhaps, but that does make you hard to work with.” Veronica narrowed her eyes. “Why did you want to get in touch with us?”

”Actually, it’s kind of the opposite. I don’t want to get in touch with you.” She folded her arms and leaned on the table between them. ”What I would like to do is ensure that Mint knows as little about me as possible.”

“So you’d like the Mint to refrain from collecting information on you?”

”Exactly.”

“Hmm…” Veronica held her chin. “That is within my power. You’ve done a pretty good job of keeping to yourself, Though someone like you explains why I’m getting some strange reports. You’re smart to try and safeguard your privacy now, as it will not last long otherwise.” With a nod, Veronica lowered her hand. “Very well , what is your privacy worth to you?”

”I’m something of an information broker myself, actually.” Tonya smiled. ”I have a feeling you’d like to get Penny in the Mint’s employ. I have a pretty good idea you’re going to need magically charged metal to appease her. Four beams, three feet long, and six-by-six if you can manage. She’ll also want some gold plated tungsten and a military grade GPS chip, though I feel like those you could procure rather easily. I’ll even swing the Bate twins over to your side in the process.”

“Is that so?’ Veronica raised an eyebrow. “I’m afraid I do not have the same faith you do in your divination, doubly so due to your mysterious nature, so how about some collateral?” Veronica drew a contract out of thin air and placed it before Tonya. “I only use these documents for personal deals, so the Mint will have no idea this is even transpiring.” She pushed it towards the wolf woman. “Once you sign this document, everything I could possibly want to know about you will be written within. If I speak with Penny and she requests those items, you will have a week to procure them for me. Should she not want those items, or should you take too long to get them, well, the document will tell me everything about you. Otherwise, I will keep my word and refrain from mentioning you to anyone. As for the bate twins, maybe I'll throw in something nice for you if you can pull that off too.”

”I don’t plan on failing, so that’s fine with me.” Tonya scratched the back of her head. ”Uh, so when you collect my signature, mind biting me somewhere that won’t be too visible?”

Veronica smiled. “It’s fine, you will regenerate.”

Tonya did not see Veronica move. Nor did she feel the coin broker restrain her wrists. It even took Tonya a moment to register that Veronica had bitten into her armpit. Her pectoral twitched with pain, and her mouth swung open. Though Tonya didn’t scream. It was an unusual sensation though. It was rare for Tonya to get hurt due to the fact she hardly ever faced her opponents directly. But she refused to scream. Her dilated eyes scanned the diner, but it seemed like everyone was ignoring them. Veronica was a master of dark magic, and she must have been using that to keep them obscured from view. So she too had subtle magic. Though Tonya’s humiliation was private, she hadn’t ever felt this vulnerable.

When Veronica pulled away, she used the contract to wipe her mouth before returning to her regular demeanor. “I’ll see you when I need the materials, then.”

”Yea, maybe take me out to dinner first next time, alright?” Tonya stumbled to her feet and strut towards the exit. Her restorative magics were already mending her flesh.





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