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Back when dinosaurs ruled the Earth, I got started with writing online on the Spore forums. Man, those were the days. We're talking like 12 years ago 2010-ish!

I've been here on and off for almost as long, and have GM'd a bunch of different things to varying success.

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Who said the only way to gain power was by ruling over people and making their lives hell ._.


At the end of the day he's really just getting fleshed out as being Lawful Neutral, as I said on my character sheet. There's rhyme and reason to all of his actions (lawful) and he has some empathy for his fellow humans, but at the end of the day he cares more about himself and his advancement than he does for them. So while not an evil sadist, he's far from altruistic.

He's a tyrant in that he's willing to silence opposition, but it's not like he's enslaving them like Vestec's good ole pal, or oppressing those that are more complacent.
@Cyclone
Spelling and Grammar: 10/10
Writing Quality: 10/10
Story Line Advancement: 10/10 (very good, you've set yourself up nicely to go a-world conquering)
Character Development: 10/10 (he's really turning into quite the piece of work isn't he? And praising someone other than the true ender of the Eternal Winter and Darkness. Such ungrateful, puny mortals. Next he'll be claiming that this 'Mighty One' created Mankind too >.<)
Independence: 10/10

You get your 20 Khookies, damn it


20 on the post that I finish at night exhausted and too lazy to even go back and proofread?

Watch as I never manage to get 20 again...
Ah, but Fate would demand that the Mighty One come to Ialu's aid in such an event, for he must achieve gain a following and reach demigod status before abandoning his people in favor of drinking gods' blood and trolling divine powers.

Edit: See, we too can pull off a Vowzra justification by just saying 'Fate' surrounded by other gibberish :P
Forced myself to just write, so the post came tonight after all.
Ialu, Level 7 Hero


Bringing the dragon all the way back to the village through ice and blizzard proved to be a monumental task, even with telekinesis at their disposal. When at last that was done, there was a wild celebration, as befitted Ialu's triumph over such a powerful beast. Still, the question was now what to do with the dragon.

Clearly the Mighty One had not seen them defeat the adversary that he sent to test their mettle, as the unnatural winter had continued. Ialu reasoned that this meant they would need to get his attention somehow. To do this they erected a great pole inside the village, on the hilltop right beside the Mighty Hut. They then proceeded to spend half a day decapitating the dragon's corpse, something as simple as removing its head being made incredibly difficult by their lack of anything big enough and sharp enough to cleanly hack it off. The dragon looked grotesque at this point, one eye gouged out and oozing fluids while its bones had been snapped into unnatural positions by its tumble off the mountain.

After having at last mounted its severed head atop the pole in sight of men, sky, and gods, Ialu led a chant praising the Mighty One. After that was finished, the blizzard remained. Growing increasingly angry and desperate as his people began to doubt him, he turned to one of the wise men that had spoken of the Celestial Above. Demanding that this man invoke that lesser god to see if that would yield any results, Ialu and his tribe once more prayed to the sky, this time lead by that man.

Still, the blizzard remained. In a fit of utter rage, Ialu beat the man in front of his entire village, for failing to banish the snow and tricking them into praying for a lesser god. From that point onwards, Ialu would consider it an unshakable fact that all gods save the Mighty One were inferior and utterly unworthy of worship. He banned so much as the mention of their name in his village, and demanded that all of the tribespeople worship the Mighty One.

Coming to the realization that perhaps the Mighty One did not dwell in the sky, but rather underground, after a day of leaving the dragon's head on a pole the chieftain had it taken down. Carried by the Wi of several men, the Strong Tribe took the head to a secluded spot in the grove just outside their village. Willing the thick layer of snow and ice on the ground to part, they found what they had come for: a small spring of the sacred water that bubbled up from the center of Galbar.

They then proceeded to defile Escre's holy fount by repeatedly dunking the dragon's visage into its waters. All the while they shouted for the 'Mighty One', demanding that their god acknowledge their strength and that they passed what they perceived as his test. After a short while of this with no sign of the blizzard abating, the cold and confused Strong Tribe turned back dejectedly for their village.

Making the best of their almost complete inability to so much as even leave their snowed-in settlement, they set about putting the dragon's corpse to use. They quickly discovered that its teeth made better spearheads than the sharpened flint stones that they had been using. The dragon's hide and scales was also turned into rather effective armor, light yet still as sturdy as any metal scaleplate. The one-eyed, toothless, head of the dragon was put back on its pole.

A day later, when the night too appeared unnaturally, it was too much. All of their chieftain's plans having failed, many openly challenged him. Ialu brutally suppressed such insults to his authority by personally executing any that so much as muttered a foul remark towards him. The baying of crazed monsters was heard outside of the village as the nightmares of fearful cowards manifested themselves in physical form. Still, the light of a dozen hearths lit up the village and the palisade and watchmen both managed to protect the village from the night monsters.

At last, after a week from the first snows yet what couldn't have been more than a day or two of the darkness, the Mighty One spared its greatest followers its ire. The skies glowed blindingly bright as if lit by the flames of a thousand dragons, and when it was over, the blue sky and warm sun were revealed once more. Ialu had a shrine to the Mighty One erected within the walls of the village, across from the dragon's skewered head. His tribe would learn to strengthen themselves and do the Mighty One honor, both to avoid invoking his wrath once more and to prove the tribe worthy of its name.


Wow, Shukra's orcs are just dying left and right
@Frettzo

Well these villages are just clusters of huts and the humans are still mostly hunter-gatherers, so I doubt moving is too big of an ordeal. In any case, I was going to have some other villages move closer to Ialu's.

It's interesting that they have a duel system. Maybe Ialu could defeat their chieftain and become overlord to their order in that way? *shrug*

If you just want to remain independent that's fine, I was just thinking that we could make this work if you like.
Ialu is a dick. As of last post he just ignores the people he rules. As of next he starts becoming a little bit more violent, and once we've skipped 30 years and he's king he'll just be a tyrant.
@Saarebas Nobody has went to the windmill yet. And Twich is the only one going for any of the granaries.

Everybody, nice posts :P

I got sidetracked and while I'm something like 2/3 of the way through my promised post, it's probably not happening tonight.

Actually, now that I think of it, it might be interesting if Kuro's Order pledged fealty to Ialu. Any idea how that could be achieved, @Cyclone?


I talked to Rtron about Ialu doing something to the Dyun (Speaking of which @Rtron Rtron did you see my last PM? You didn't respond to it) to the Dyun, and to Loki about fighting the Cimex. So you're going to have an invincible dragon-slaying Wi-master of a chieftain, who is also something of a human war hero.

How could you not join a guy like that, especially when Vestec's tribe is enslaving all other humans and they have dragons (that apparently the Strong Tribe can kill...).

Really I think it'd make sense if you just said they moved their village over near Ialu's lush riverland so that they could join his kingdom for mutual protection. He'd be the obvious guy to go to for that.
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