@TimeToRP I think before I can make any further judgements about your interpretation of Luke Cage, I would like to request that you rewrite the origin and backstory section of the character sheet because it is almost a word-for-word copy-and-paste job from Marvel Wikia. I am willing to be lenient if you did that if you were listing/describing the characters powers (how many different ways can you explain a healing factor or web slinging?), but this section is also to show your understanding of the character. I think the rules section covers this pretty well.
Try and be as creative as possible with your character sheets. This process is as much a test of your competency in commanding language as it is showing your ideas for a character. Blatant copy and pasting of other people's work from discarded character sheets, wiki pages or the like will not be tolerated. I will check.
Again, I am not going to bar you from this RP for this one "offense". However, before I can officially judge it, I would like to have some original writing for the background information. Also, note that, unless you are a mutant or a cosmic character, your character should have been active in the superhero world for no more than four years, unless you have an explanation for why his activities were not being noticed by the general public.
I hope this helps!
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